~~D3 FF-EK MAIN AUR EKK TU~~CHAP 12 PG 47*NEW - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
awsome update..
Next part jaldi update karna
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Awesome update but it was too short not fair.next time update a long one n thanks for pm

srry i noe it was short but next time i will update big!!!!! anyways thank u 4 reading n commenting!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: apurva100

awsome update..
Next part jaldi update karna

thank u>next update in a day or two!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Hiii guys I am back wid another update..hope u guys like it...plzzz do comment n hit the like button!!!!!:):)

Chapter 3!!


When viha was fighting Rey came in the middle.
Rey:Vicky tu kya kar raha hai pagal ho gaya hai..
Neha:woh toh bachpan se pagal hai Rey.tumhe ab pata chala..kaisi dosti hai tumlog ki..
Vicky:neha tum mere aur mere bhai matlab rey ki dosti par mat jao!!
Kria enters from behind..
Kria:kya ho gaya neha??
Vicky:aa gayi dusri miss india!!
Rey:kya bak raha hai vicky tu!!
Kria:jo aapne usse bola hoga!!
Vicky:main iss neha ko nahi chodunga..he was moving ahead to neha but rey held him from his stomach n stopped him..
Neha:main bhi tumhe nahi chodne waali hoon..but kria also held her!!
Rey:chod na yaar vicky..chal ladkiyaan aisi hoti hai!!
Kria:wht do u mean ladkiyan aisi hoti hai..balki ladke ohhh srry to be precise dazzler boys aise hote hai!!
Rey:wht the hell!!ek toh main yaha fight rokne ki koshish kar raha hoon aur tum ho ki mujhpe ilzaam lagaye jaa rahi hoo!!
Vicky:rey woh itna sab kuch tujhe bol rahi hai aur tu khamosh ho kar sunn raha hai???...tu bheegi billi ki tarah kyun khada hai...darr raha hai inse?? Inki baate iss tarah kyun suun raha hai!!!!
Kria n Neha start laughing!!
Kria:exactly vicky tumhara dost humse darrta hai!!
Rey got angry n was gng to tell sumthing to kria but stops n puts his hand on vicky's collar n says..
Kria n neha gv a hi5!!
Rey to vicky..
Rey:abbe saale tu meri side hai ya unki..meri beizzati kara raha hai!! Pehli baat main teri saath milkar unse ladh raha hoon aur n the best part is that mujhe reason bhi nahi pata ki main kyun ladh raha hoon aur kria se bhi bina vajah jhada kar raha hoon!!!
Vicky:srry yaar rey..woh gusse main nikal gaya!!
Rey:accha thek hai!!
Vicky(loudly):rey pata hai khatara car bhi na itni awaaz nahi karti jitna yeh dono kar rahi hai..isse accha toh garage ki kharab gaadi hoti hai!!
Neha:tumhare kehne ka matlab kya hai???
Vicky:mera matlab yeh hai ki tumlog se acchi garage ki khatara gaadi hai kam se kam baand karo to chup toh ho jati hai!!
Kria:apne humme khatara gadhi kahan?
Vicky:ek baar main sunne aur samaj main nahi aata??
Neha:sab samajh main aata hai!!
Vicky:agar aata hai toh puchte kyun ho tumlog 1942 ki sadhi hui model!!!
Kria:tumlog toh 1942 se bhi purane ho..khatara log!!
Rey:kya? Tumne humme khatara kahaan.ek toh hum itni tameez se baat kar rahe hai...(Vicky stares @ rey n wonders tameez main kab baat ki n says 4get it..atleast kuch bol toh raha hai!!)
Aur upar se tumlog humse jaghda kar rahe ho!!
Kria:ohhh toh ye aaplog ki tameez hai...1942..thank u..
Rey:kis liye thank u??
Kria: yeh batane ke liye ki kitni acchai aur tameez bhari hui hai aaplog main!!
Vicky:aacha bahoot ho gaya tumlog ka aabhi jao...aur dimaag mat kharab kar!!
Neha:tumhare paas hai dimaag kharab hone ke liye???sab kachra bhara hua hai!!!
Neha n Kria start laughing!!!
Vick:accha bahoot hass liya ab jao!! Varna baad main roona padega!!!
Neha:Why v going?? Tumlog jao na..hum jaha bhi jaye..aur hum yaha se nahi jayenge!!!
Vicky:kyun??
Kria:kyunki hamara pair(leg).hum kahaan bhi jaye hamari marzi!!
Rey:har baar tumhari marzi kyun!yeh hamari marzi!
Kria:wht?? Bahoot ho gayi tumlog ki nautanki!!
Rey:nautanki hum nahi tum kar rahi ho...so tumlog jao!!
Rey in his mind-srry kria main tumse ladh raha hoon..par agar na ladhu toh sab 10 hazaar sawaal karenge ki maine apni team ko support kyun nahi kiya...main tumhe sab baad main samjhaoga..srry kria!!!
Kria:nahi jayege!!
Rey:par...
A voice cums from behind
"Jaana padega"
Rey n Vicky turn..
(U guys must hv got it)
It was sharon!!
Kria: aa gayi nautanki no.1!!!
(Swayam is in the rehearsal hall...sum ppl cum n tell him tht these ppl r fighting...so he rushes to go there!!!)
(Now everybody cums)
Sharon:tumhe jaana padega aur yeh baat hum puch nahi rahe hai balki bata rahe hai..that's an order!!!
Kria:order ma foot..humlog tumhari stupid rinni simmi type titliya nahi hai ki agar tumne kuch kaha aur hamne usse sunn liya!!!
Simmi:wht? Tumne humme titliya kaha..how dare u!!!
Nilesh:inki himmat kuch zyada hi ho gayi hai!!
Vishakha:jitni tumhari himmat hai na utni hamari bhi hai!!!
Nilesh:u guys r so unsophisticated!!!
Bharat:kya bola tune un so so so..gali diya!!!
Vicky:inhe toh english bhi acche se nahi aati hai..baade aaye humse panga lene!!
Bharat:agar tu humse panga lenga na toh nanga(neud) ho jayega!!
Vicky n Nilesh were gng to hit bharat but rey cums in the middle n even Bharat n Amar were gng to hit them but swayam cums in the middle!!
Swayam:Kya kar rahe ho guys?? Pagal ho gaye ho!!
Sharon:Happy late realisation ki tumhari team pagal hai..sab jangli hai!!
Neha to swayam:tum usse kuch mat kehna..usse hi support karna..chahe who hamme pagal hi kyun na kahe!!
Kria:swayam tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahe ho??
Bharat:agar yeh sharon ko kuch bole na maa kasam main inn dazzlers se ladhna chod dunga!!
Swayam in his mind:ab kya karu ek taraf pyaar toh ek taraf dosti!!!! Kya karu main???

To be continue...

Promo not thought abt it!!

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Edited by d3_rox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
awesome update amazg loved it loved viha n kriyaansh fight it was very hialruos hayee hayee sahron aagyi n ab swaaym kya karega cont soon yaar jaldi update kar na😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
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unres

Awsm update tehmina! 👏 👏

Really liked their fight!

Whom will swayam choose now! i think dosti! 😕

Pls update soon and thanx for pm 😃
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Amazing update!!
charo ki fight it was funny..
eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
awesome...loved the fyt...thanx for the pm
n updt soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Amazing update,fight was hilarious,update it soon I loved it.waiting for next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Amazing Update themu.
Loved it.
Kriyaansh and Viha fight was cute.
Last Bharats dialog was superb.
thanks for pm.
Update sooon.

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