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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

That was so cute.
I loved it to the core.
Loved khushi's and akash's friendship. It is so strong and genuine.
Loved khushi's and arnav's 'randome' meetings'.
Loved how they smile at each other.
Loved the fact that arnav had agreed for the proposal.
Loved the pros and cons khushi wrote down.
And absolutely loved akash's comments on them and the fact that he added more reasons for her to agree.
I guess its a yes.
Please update soon.

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angullgrl91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

amazing part!! love the relationship between akash and khushi! so adorable!

I think it would be more clear if you finished all the flashbacks first unless if you were to make it very clear each time you shifted between the tense (but it's also harder to remember if you do one part flashback and the other part present what was going on in the story since im sure many of us read several stories on IF and they'll get easily confused). I hope I wasn't confusing there. haha.

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punam2712

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Loved the pro and con list. Both were equal. Aakash input was great

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Gayatri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

i loved it !!!!!!!!!

akash is a super cool friend!!! great characterization of akash👍🏼

i would prefer bit of reality and bit of flashback!! that ll add more interest!!!

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Araina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: love_iqbal_khan

Thanks Khushi! and dont worry..you havent missed much on Rushed (i think...) I've been updating once a month or so! school's kept me uber busy! and I'm really touchedd that you take time out to read my works. Thanks a lot hun! and mind you..I never said he's the beast...maybe she's the beast and he's the beauty in this story (although we all know that even when he's the beast he's a beautiful one at that!),...the story may be a little cliche but I felt like it fit them so I wanted to play it out with these two. :) I'll be updating soon. look out for the PM ;)

Anytime! Not much? Last chapter I read was chapter 24 and I've gotten pm for chapter 28 as well. It's still unread so it reminds me to read ASAP. Trying to catch up but just not able to!! Since only two chapters here, i decided to read them today... I always have to take time out. Can't stop that temptation 😳 Uh oh. So lets wait to see who the Beauty is and who the Beast is 😛 ANd right. he's a beauty being a beast as well! Oh, I know what you mean by that. Glad you tries to play it with these two. Will be fund :D And you can look out for my comments soon 😳 At last, next time, this time, I'd be on my last day of school 😆

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Araina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Chapter 1- read. Can I come edit this spot some other time? I need to get back to psych 😛😳

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mumpet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Amazing update!!! Love your FF! Update soon! Please PM me when you update!

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rhearuhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

awesome story really nice and different please PM me when u update i have send u a buddy request

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Katie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: ashred12
nice part...khushi was just khushi...d shock was too gud...wonder wat tore them apart...

Thanks!! Yeap, I've tried to keep Khushi the same as the show...just a little more braver...

Originally posted by: subiscs
Loved ittt...awesome yaaa...and yeah i wud prefer the flashback to be finished!!!! but its upto u...😃😃

Thanks!! I think majority is suggesting that I finish the flashback...I may just go with that.😊

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
that was a amazing update

Thanks!!

Originally posted by: samia19
woow like this part really much,

Thank you!

Originally posted by: s2612
in fb arnav agreed to marry khushi but khushi is in dilema...but now are they married????

Yeap, In Flashback Arnav agreed to marry Khushi...but does he? do they get married? are they married now? stay tuned to find out.😉

Originally posted by: jazzpreet
first of all, FAN-FREAKIN-TASTIC UPDATE!!!! i loved every word of it! and second, i'd like the flashback to be finished, and then you continue the story in the present, but either way you go, ill still be hooked lol. and thank you so much for the pm! :)

Thanks Jazz! I think as of now I'm aiming to finish the flashback first...and even if i go back and forth between past and present...it wont be for too long...

Originally posted by: nyxx
Res... :D

And she forgot to unres...again. :P I still love ya! <3

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Katie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: lovelycutietedy
nice one

Thanks!

Originally posted by: JRia
Hi Katie
awesome part
loved Arnav Khushi interaction at the poolside

i think u should finish the flashback completely and then get back to the present rest is ur choice

Thanks!! that poolside scene was added in last minute! hehe...im glad you liked it. and yep..i think i'll finish the flashback first..

Originally posted by: Sona257
Aaawh I totally LOVED IT!!! I really love ur writing skills ❤️

Thank you so much hun!

Originally posted by: abhi_arshilover
Awesome update. Liked it a lot. The pros n cons part was very good. Please do cont soon. Thanks for pm.

Thanks!! Glad you liked Khushi's Sanak (the pros and cons list).

Originally posted by: monikaseth
Awesome Part Thanks for pm. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Thanks sweetie!

Originally posted by: flowers4u
awe loved it ...akash is too cute...hope she says yes

Thanks!! I kinda wish Akash and Khushi had this bond in the show...but they dont...so I added that in here! hehe.

Originally posted by: arhilover55
great update...love khushi and akash relationship..it was cute of him to add on to her pros and cons list..really curious of how they got seperated..i think you shouuld complete the flashback and then move onto the present...great update..please continue soon 😊

Thank you hun! Akash is adamant on making khushi his Sis-In-Law. hehe... and the cat of the curiosity of their separation wont be let out till later...