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Katie

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: nyxx
Helloo! Surprised that Im UN-resing so quick?!----heck yes!!! Well dont be :P I promised that I will return all the love soot sameth :P LOL! (too much IPK, can you tell lol) ---bahahhaha indeed!. First off, thank you for the wonderful gift, LOVEEE EETTT <3 !! ---I'm glad you like it! :) <3

As for the FF itself, let me get started :P The title of this tale is what you brings you here, but once you start reading, you realize that there is more than just sundri and shaitaan :P Much more beyond that.---Aw thank you!! I'll try to stick to that..for a while anyway... When I read the prologue, I actually had an inkling that you were continuing it from now (as in whats happening in the show right now), and making us view the future, when perhaps, after ArHi seperate, how will they meet, through the mannat ki key.---Ahh...I can see why one would think that after reading the precap and seeing the promo...but as you must've figured out...thats not the case...I feel that there are already enough fanfictions and one-shots on "post MU clearance/separation"..decided to deviate from it. BUT BUT, then, you gave us this surprising twist in the first part. I likeedd!---mission accomplished! ;) So Akash and Payal have played cupid for them before?---yep. And, another interesting aspect is how Khushi lost her parents at 18, and that has made her what she is, independent, strong, and bold. I like!---yeap. I wanted to make her a little stronger and mature than she is in the show. Their first meeting was enjoyable, even in midst of Raizada clan, but Im sure theres LOTS more coming,---oh you can definitely count on that ;) and that is what makes it all the more intriguing, what happened then? and how it all has led to their today!!---you'll see eventually..I think most people will guess the track soon enough... There is a La in here as well---I dont know how much I should say about her role in this story.....hmmm...Oh and I surely like the equation between Arnav and the rest, especially Payal---payal will be anjali-equivalent in this story..just less "OMG"-ish and less tearful and a little more smarter..😆...interesting interesting :P You know he is my fav character, so I take a special keen into him all the time---oh boy...I'll have to be careful about how I change his character and be careful to keep it consistent or else you'll chase me with a broom! :P Btw, where is Anjali :O ?---as of now, I havent included her in the fic. firstly I dont want too many characters...I considered Shyam-Anjali to take Akash-Payal's spot...but I couldnt convince myself (thats how deep my hatred for shyam is!)

So far, AWESOMEEE! Will be waiting for moreee :D---Thanks!!! and my mid-year resolution is to update more regularly..and I have been true to it so far...three updates (two for rushed and one for this in a week! i think im doing good) Gluck with starting summer school again :P---Thanks! I just got my scrubs today!! Im sure you'll do great, and continue to write awayy Kat!--Will do...I'm sure I'll be writing lots to de-stress from summer school (sheesh..im such a nerd...write lots so I can de-stress!!!! crap im going crazy--er)-

AND, almost forgot. I LOVE the promo!!---OMG. Forgot to tell you about my new hobby. I've started making VMs on ArHi...so far I have four!! stalk em in Media Gallery... It fits PERFECTLY with what youve started to make us vision...starting from the key, and then, the series of flashbacks, and them seperating. Perfecto!---Thanks! I wanted the promo to tie in with the prologue so you could also SEE what I was trying to describe in the promo...explaining flashbacks is NOT fun..or easy.

Ciao!

---Welcome back with your amazing comments Devu! I've missed you! and congrats on getting the hot seat back! seems the connection is still on baby!!😃

Originally posted by: gujuprincez08
That was a great part! Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the PM!

---Thanks! Will update in two-three days!

Originally posted by: malluangel
oh...so like they have a past that screwed up majorly i guess :\

an adoption?

---Yeap...a past that is screwed up. and yeap. An Adoption. you'll understand these random bits after the first few parts.😳

Originally posted by: rkapoor1382
wow i loved it...
waiting for the nxt part...
thnks for the pm

---Thanks! will update in two-three days! :)

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jazzpreet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

i LOVE this. you're such a good writer! can't wait for part 2! please pm me when you update, i would greatly appreciate it :)

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paircube

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

I loved it.
Wish I could say more but right now I am kind of speechless.
I loved the way you have written this story. The flashbacks, the interruption (phone ringing) seem so well placed.
Please update soon.

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s2612

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

nice start...their first meeting was grt for each other but wondering what came up for the eventual break up!!!!!

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xxSassyxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Interesting beginning - their relationship ended and this was a moment of chance meeting - after he had prayed to meet her one more time.

Enjoyed their first meeting and Khushi's character

Looking forward to reading more

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Roshni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Great update! Can't wait for the whole story to unfold! =D

Keep it up 👍🏼

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Katie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: peepli
really great !!! love akash-payal matchmaking !!

Thanks! yeah...I wish Akash-Payal would do the matchmaking in the show too like Arnav and Khushi did for them!

Originally posted by: monikaseth
Superb part love it want soon more

Thanks! Will update in a day or two. 😊

Originally posted by: subiscs
awesomee yaaa...loved it !!!!😊

Thank you hun!😳

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
simply marvelous

Thanks!😳

Originally posted by: nimra21
Oh, nice twist. I thought you were taking it from the current track that they meet after separating but this is different and interesting. Keep going! :)

yeah, I think a few people thought that I was picking it up from the current track in the show but that's not the case...I felt there are already too many fanfictions and one-shots that do that so i decided to do something different...the title of the story though was inspired from the Sundari and Rakshash episode😆

Originally posted by: shagun_sarun
oh i just loved this update...this was really very intresting...he is going to adobt a child? why?... what happened between them that they parted?...how they meet next?????

there are many questions coming through my mind n i would love to have answers of them!

gr8 part n fabulous writing style👏...please dear continue soon, n thanks a lot for pm😃

pm me the next part too😃

Thanks Shagun! and yep..he's about to adopt a child and all your questions shall be answered in the upcoming few parts hopefully. I will definitely PM you when I update next and i hope to continue in a day or two.

Originally posted by: Orion_N
This FF seems really great :D I loved the promo video and how the scenes were merged in such an original way :D... Wow he's going to adopt a kid??? never thought that arnav would do that... that too without khushi in his life... can't wait to find out why!!! Also, and i'm guessing you will reveal this later, why did she leave?? Was it her resigning from his company or something else... the promo had the scene of her resignation but it could also be divorce papers... hmmm maybe!!!

I wonder how the beast will turn into prince charming :D can't wait for the next part :D

Thanks! I decided to use the TV soap's idea of flashbacks for the promo video😉😆. yeap, he's going to adopt a kid. you'll see why he wants to adopt the child soon. and you are right...I'll reveal the reason behind her leaving later...the rpomo did have her scene of resignation but like you said..it could have been divorce papers or other papers in his hands..😉 all your queries will be answered in the next few parts, I promise! I'll be updating in a day or two. 😊