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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update! I was really touched by the part where Arnav asks Payal if he'd make a good husband...but the ending lines...AWWW I felt so bad for both of them. He hates seeing tears in her eyes, and yet he'll be the sole reason...

YOUR AN AMAZING AMAZING WRITER! I just loved the way you flowed everything and you managed to make me cry when Arnav and Payal talked. Very beautifully written!
-Abi ❤️
P.S. Please PM me, pretty please 😳!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the long update! I absolutely loved reading it! Thank you so much for the long update! Arnav asks Payal to teach him how to dance just so he could dance with Khushi. He was missing her so much but was to stubborn to call her. And then they dance on teri meri together and he gifts her a green sari that he selected for her. How cute. When Payal tells him that Khushi had been sad he calls her to ask if she was okay. He cannot see tears in her eyes, but I wonder how he was the one to be the cause of her tears in the future. Loved the way he was trying to correct all the negatives on Khushi's pros and cons list. He was trying to be romantic, and I think he was doing a pretty good job since every time Khushi was near him she was blushing. I am really loving how Arnav is trying to be a good husband. Arnav is so scared that he might fail to be a good husband. Loved how he asks Payal this. I really like their friendship. Then when they were exchanging garlands Arnav was really impatient when the girls were not allowing him to put the garland around his Khushi. I found that quite adorable. I really wish he wore a sherwani for the wedding. But I won't complain since he looks hot regardless of what he wears. When he saw Khushi crying he could not even bear to see her tears. I cannot even imagine that he would be the cause of her tears in the future. He seems to care so much about her. The ASR in him probably must have made some stupid mistake which he later regretted but it was too late by then. Just hope that he is able to get his Khushi back. Thanks for the PM. I am loving this story. Please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
just loved the bond Arnav shares with Kushi

awesome update 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey I'm back again:

First AWWW moment: when Arnav asks Payal to teach him how to dance!!!!!! That was simply adorable and payal's reaction to that was spot on. The banter between the brothers here was just funny what with the "shut up _____" line being trademarked for Aman'😆

Second AWWW moment: Nani telling Arnav the RULES!! OMG Arnav's thoughts were just too cute.. 😳He wanted to see Khushi in case they had a "PIN emergency" and Khushi's bracelet would be needed to get through that "Crisis"!!! 🤣

Third AWWW moment: Arnav figuring out that he wasn't forbidden from talking to Khushi, almost calling her but stopping himself by saying that she could have done that as well, I can imagine his expression here!!! 🤣

Fourth AWWW moment: They meeting after a whole week and their sublte, non-verbal communication!! Arnav getting jealousy of the extra dancers!!! 😉

Fifth AWWW moment: Arnav thinking of her as a doll what with her grace and expressions, his jaw dropping moment when she dressed up as Madhuri, him not remembering the name of a business colleague 🤣

Dreamy moment 1: Arnav cornering her against a wall and getting all husky and romantic and pressing himself into her, Khushi being flustered and blushing!! ☺️ Going into his room and his statement that the dress he wanted her to wear wasn't outrageous had me 🤣

Dreamy moment 2: TERI MERI and the aftermath!!!! ☺️ 😍

I could go on and on but I guess it's better to stop the listing process'. 😃 The whole mehendi teasing thing was amazing, I had a good laugh imagining Arnav giving glares to the auntyji's putting haldi on him and the whole pre-wedding rush was described beautifully by you' 👏

Coming to the subtle hints, I have a feeling that Payal is gonna play a very important role in this relationship' She has been shown giving him advice, preparing him for the life ahead and even helping out with gifts for Khushi.. She is a pillar of support for Arnav and gives him reassurance on his abilities and even during the pheras when Khushi is all emotional. Secondly I can't help but think that the line "I thought you were my best friend!" Khushi said to Akash. may have a deeper meaning sometime else ' Also the garlanding scene was a pointer to certain things as per my deductions. Khushi being pulled away from Arnav thrice, Kevin coming between them once might just be indications of what is to come'

Ohk I need to stop or else I might end up overanalyzing each and every line of the update!! It was a LOVE filled update, overflowing with adorable scenes and I enjoyed every bit of it 👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago
Love love love loved it! Very nice. Please pm me when you update... Thanks.
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 7
awesome part dear...
liked Arnav's side of story...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED THE UPDATE
WHEN ASR DOES SOMETHING HE PUTS HIS WHOLE HEART INTO IT
HIS FEELINGS WERE WRITTEN SO WELL
BUT IF HE WAS SO HAPPY TO GET MARRIED, THEN WHAT WENT WRONG
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update. Finally they're married. It was a long update and you included all the pre-marriage events, you must be exhausted after such a long update. But i'm excited to now see how their married life progresses.
The ending was sad especially the bit "That was the first night he realized how much he hated tears in her eyes...What he didn't know then was that he'd be the sole reason for the tears she'd shed in the future." OMG so beautifully written. Cant wait to find out what happened to them.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: peepli

Oh gee.. u finally updated *shrieking*

i was thinking of pm ing you for one, but didnt want to creep u out!!

So, they re married now... payal is so understanding n supportive in this

Akash-Payal and their sparkling chemistry. Come again??😕

great, long, wonderful update, reminded me of the IPK during sangeet times, so off to watch those past videos now..


hehe..yep...updated at last! :P and you can PM me anytime you want...the only thing that creeps me out is Shyam Manohar Jha🤢. And yep..they're married now. Payal is indeed very supportive in this...she is almost like a mother-figure to Arnav...They're very close.

and Akash-Payal...not talking about the show...but in my ff they have sparkling chemistry. :P

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

brilliant update.loved it..


Thanks!!

Originally posted by: ronniecarter

the wedding and d emotions were beautifully expressed
loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it!!!!!


Thank you hun!!

Originally posted by: thesh

Hy sweety awesome part but I'm a lil confused...

Why are they not together?


Thanks! I havent revealed why they're not together yet...that will come in two-three parts.

Originally posted by: Crazy_1001

Oh man that was so awesome!! Nice long update!
I'm gonna take a guess and say arnavs stubbornness of not calling khushi, and khushis tearful...missing her parents stuff as a hint?


Thank you!! well...that stuff is minor...they didnt separate because of that..

Originally posted by: subiscs

awesomeee update ya!!! loved it 😊


Thanks!!

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

UFFF, Can ArHi Talk ?! ; P Hmmm, PaYash Having A Good Life Hon 😳


hehehe...they'll talk...and they've talked before...Khushi's just a shy bride! :P

Originally posted by: jazzpreet

beautiful update! it was so heart-warming :) i love payal's motherliness towards arnav. brilliant writing! :)


Thanks!! yeap...Payal's almost a motherly-figure for Arnav...she's the closest thing to a friend he has and she loves her brother-in-law.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ndevi

wow that was a long update & very interesting.


The dance sequence was like a flashback memory for us during payash sangeet but u wrote it superbly with ur imagination. All the wedding rituals & their conversation b4 the sangeet was awesome.

I think Arnav is trying 2 change for Khushi but it will be difficult 4 him to bury his nature attitude so it might be a problem for them in the future.



Thanks!! One of the readers wanted to re-read all the rituals from the show in the fic...so I included whatever would flow with story..I tried to incorporate the poolside kiss but it doesnt fit my storyline so i had to exclude it. You're right..he is trying to change for khushi and we all love it...but maybe seeing that..khushi will try to change for him...and one of the reasons why arnav agreed to marry her is because of her personality...so what if she changed?😉

Originally posted by: rachanarock

Wow. I love long updates.
Yes they are married. Hope there will be at least a bit of romance before the main story starts. I still can't fathom why they are not together. Guess I have to wait and watch. Update as soon as you can.


hehe..I'm glad you like the long updates. There will be no more than two parts before the main story is revealed...but lots of ArHi moments will be shown as random flashback scenes later on.😳


Thanks!

Originally posted by: sonnal_17

this is a beautiful ff...i read it in one go...really curious to know happened between Arnav and Khushi...


Thank you! :) You readers will get to choose when I reveal the truth...

Originally posted by: arhi_maneet

WODERFUL UPDATE! LOVED IT !!


Thanks!!


Thank you sweety!

Originally posted by: monikaseth

wow awesome update love it


Thanks!

Originally posted by: the_breeze

oh dear sweet lord, have mercy... first we get hit by an H BOMB yesterday in the form of "teri meri" and now you have given us chapter 7!!! Double whammy i'd say...


right now all i'm capable of is 😳 ☺️ ❤️ 😍

so expect another comment from me when my mind is in a state to form coherent sentences 🤣

thnx for the pm 🤗


hahhaha..the H bomb...I swear the double whammy wasnt planned! I've read your other comment too! I loved it!!! thanks for that! :)

Originally posted by: sval000

fantastic update!!!!


Thank you!

Originally posted by: rkapoor1382

Simply brilliant one..
Very interesting one.
Loved it.
Finally they r Mr. N Mrs Arnav Singh Raizada..
Continue soon.


Thank you!! and yep...finally Mr. and Mrs. Raizada


Thanks!

Originally posted by: Usma55

why did he make her cry

was he jealous of something
or did he have an affair with someone
update soon
please dont to long to post part eight


Arnav does get jealous very fast so maybe thats a reason...I wont spoil the suspense for you. I'm posting part 8 today.

Originally posted by: roshaan

awesum part really enjoy reading pls update nxt part soon


Thanks!! Updating the next part today!

Originally posted by: nareshSV

how could it be him for khushi's sorrow...he had promised himself that he would bring smile on her face...then why...hate u arnav...


Like I said...he'll be the reason for the tears she'll cry in the future...why? thats a secret for now...and if you hate arnav now...you'll really hate him when he does make her cry...right now he's making her blush and smile..lol

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Does he have some kind of disorder? Like anger/schizophrenic kind of... Hmmm I hope not


I think you're the first one who has taken their thought process down that road! I like the creative idea! Whether it coincides my idea or not..you'll have to wait and watch.😉

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