Burning in your Love (Part 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, & 13)

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#261

so intense . And poor Arnav, missing Khushi so much. Just, for not asking one simple question, there is so much hurt.

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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

Its mazing yar . You have great writing capablioties PLs do PM me next

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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

PLsease update soon PM me too

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Geet24

@Geet24

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

It was intense..Beautiful update dear😊

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#265

Beautiful update! This story is moving at a nice pace, and closing loops as they go! The CV's can SO take a page off your book and close some of their own loops!

Loving this Arnav who is not afraid to voice his feelings! I always knew that Khushi would be the one with doubts, because of their shared history!

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#266

Amazing work, Smitha!!
I loved the Heer-Ranjha dialogues which he said when he was sitting in his car. . .

Thanks for the PM. . . :)

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#267

Stumbled upon this story n read it at one go... Amazing piece of writing! Moved me to tears

It's lovely to see so much talent in this forum!!!!!

Pls continue soon! Adding u as a buddy, pls pm.. Thnx!!

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#268

Beautiful update.. I loved the umbrella scene.. I think a couple sharing an umbrella in the rain is one of the most romantic things ever.. And poor Arnav. Being banned from his own sangeet.. Aww... Looking forward to the next part.. And once again, I have to tell you, I just love this SS to bits! :)

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#269

This was beautiful! :) I loved the whole walking under the umbrella scene! Khushi trying to put a lid on her insecurities and revelling in the proximity to the man who was her everything. Awww! And he finally answered her question! That was beautifully done! :) Her surprise and his smirk! :D Well done!

Thanks for the PM! :)

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#270

Very emotional..bt beautiful too..khushi's still insecure abt arnav's feelings..n i hope arnav duz his best to clear her insecurity..well,he started quite well wid d heer-ranjha dialogue..ohhh hw i luv it!! N naughtiness nly adds to his charms..i doubt hw long mre will khushi b able to withstand him if he cntinues wid his nipping n holding 😉