About Last Night THREAD 4**Part 38-48**

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Onlooker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Shyam already married?..Just can't wait to see arnav's reaction.

Thanks for the pm..

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pheonix24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Short and sweet!...So things have started heating up!...Love it

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--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

OMG! The update started romantically and ended at a very intriguing point! I should wait a whole day to find what was that!😭

It was so romantic when I read When he was ready to talk and let his feelings out she demanded actions! WOW! Beautifully phrased!

Thanks for the PM dear!

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Swati Hansraj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Hey Maya...congrats for the new thread. I have never or rather no one(any writer) has been able to hold on to my attention till thread 4 on one single story. Swtheart u really have reeled me in.
As for the update...make a plot so thick for Shyam that u give us the satisfaction of seeing him sink in his own sinking mud...i don't know how and when the CVs will give us the same, but i do expect from u that u will make him pay...and pay so well that we will say . That's it!
Loved the way u have maintained a such a sweet, romantic yet sensual pull to their lovemaking by being open and subtle all at once.
Do update soon.i am dying to know what ASR will do now.

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Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Congratz on thread 4!

Oooh Bigamy. Maybe, polygamy?
Thats exciting stuff. So he isnt just a creep with Khushi

I love your little Arnav Khushi banter. Really. Its so refreshing

Yuks

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Bhavapriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Okay I am commenting after a long time. Sorry for that as I am busy with my exams. Though i never forget to catch the updates. First Congratulations and celebrations. Fourth Thread and you deserve it completely honey.

Now my list for the Last three updates.

1. Khushi buying karela for Arnav. It was a sweet gesture.

2. Arnav noting the hug Yash gave Khushi. And i am glad Arnav did not hold her responsible for men getting attracted to her.

3. What is the mystery with Yash. I am not quite following why the mystery as such.

4. Once again the necklace part and Khushi being frustrated with the earrings.

5. The next convo between them. It was totally beyond words for me to describe.

6. Khushi dressing up for Arnav. Girl you have got a great Fashion sense.

7. Khushi making Arnva come near her. That crooked finger. Even i am having the same doubt that chubbix had. Are you married.

8. The description of the morning scene after that.

9. Mr. Chopra again. You know what I like that guy.

10. Shyam has another wife other than Anjali.What a twist.

Overall the update was

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Congratulations on your new thread! Shyam has some libido man, lol! One wife in the closet, one in SHantivan and desirous of one in Laxmi Nagar! Arnav should start to feel extremely incompetent in comparision, lol!

But love the twist! And poor poor Anjali! Tho at least now Khushi will nothave to bear the brunt of ANjali or the Raizada khandan's accusations and ire. Its the nature of the beast!

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hatathbristi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

congrats for the new thread dear..
How do you managed to write so well dear and the form..I am loving it...
Shyam..another wife...off..this man is really a shit