About Last Night THREAD 4**Part 38-48**

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sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1011

' He shook his head. "I don't know, Khushi," he said releasing her shoulders. "Maybe because I know you deserve a better man than myself."'

Awww, my heart melted after reading this, Maya.

How do you come up with such lines. This is sheer poetry in its beauty.

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1012

possessive arnav... terribly cute update... loved khushi giving it back to him... he shouldn't have insulted her in front of friends and family... aww he feels guilty for not his wife's birthday... very cute dear

Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 13 years ago

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1013

Nice update...
I luved d last part

thanks 4 d pm

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clover

@clover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1014

how did he manage to forget her birthday?😆

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Firebolt

@Firebolt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1015

"You idiot! I don't want what I deserve. I want you."

that's what all this is about isn't it? It doesn't matter if Arnav doesn't deserve Khushi or Khushi doesn't deserve Arnav... the point is their love is unconditional... Not good or bad but only that it feels right...

And Arnav (even though Khushi's got that covered) i feel like giving him a big hug!!!

Maya fab job as usual... You say so much with so little words! Loved it!

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1016

Reverse Psychology at its best! :D And she got away with calling him an idiot!:P Thanks for the PM! :)

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1017

Oh how much more understanding khushi can be.. You know what not even single time any of your characters have been out of character at all no matter how the story moves..

Arnav changed but it was not overnight change.. Now the good thing is he knows when he is wrong even if he has acted as a jerk that one step..

Awesome update.. Your consistency in quality is remarkable..

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Eleanor

@ElenaElenor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1018

'Yash and I are lovers' Virtual high five for Khushi😉

Short but really really great! He is a terrible husband but I like that he's not perfect, he's beginning to feel more secure, more understanding. Can't wait till their birthdays! Arnav needs to plan something big to make up to her. Thanks for the pm. 😊