FF-So you better be normalnow(PART11)(page 39)

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Gargee

@Gargee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

Okay You have got to PM me for this!! I just stumbled across this story- and It's Brilliant!!! I'll be editing here with a longer and more detailed comment- but please... please Update soon and do PM me, yeah?

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

read 9 & 10 together .. girl you can really turn stories!! :)

waiting for the next one!

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

God u r one amazing writer...just came across this os and read it one go...absolutely fabulous and needless to say can't wait for the next part.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Read all the 10 parts.. U write amazingly well.. Loved it.. Khushi left him.. 😒

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Sowmya Ramachandran

@sowms1395

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

Oh YES! I agree totally that He should suffer

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

wow just read the whole thing now n its awsuuum...loved it very mind blowing...cud u pliz pm me wen u update as i would love to read more n buddy request already sent n thnx in advance...

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saucechips

@saucechips

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

thanx for liking!! update will come soon...

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sarra0

@sarra0

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

Just read all 10 parts love the story so shayam has now been caught and is in jail and ASR told Khushi the truth about y he married her, thou I don't get y she took out the blade yep surprised at that part. Lookin 4ward to next update and c how he starts winning her back