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Posted: 13 years ago
⭐️deetha⭐️ you are superb...no actually brilliant ...no fabulous
dont know what to say about you but one thing is for sure that " you are brilliant and amazing writer "...👏


this part was super...whole story and there cute confession, it was purely magical😍 ...loved it to the core❤️
and KRIA REYAANSH SINGHANIA hayeee😍 i skip the heartbeat when he announce this name
superb part seriously👍🏼

i am short with the words to describe how perfect and awesome this part is 👏

GREAT JOB👏...HATS OFF 😃
waiting eagerly for next part😍
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
"arey sab ko khilaya par meri best frnd ki wo ko nahi khilaya... mai na ekdum jhalli hun...ye lo sharon..."

"tumhari best frnd ki wo???😃 acha waise tum bhi meri best frnd ki wo ho...mujhe bhi toh khilanedo..."

they both laughed at their stupid joke while rest made weird faces...

"acha kriya ye batao tumne rey ke pyaar karna kab shuru kiya...i mean kab attract hui thi.???"

"umm..."

she bit her lower lip...rey was standing beside her and waiting 4r her reply...

"batao na kriya..plzz...yeh khadoos tumhe kabse pasand aaya???"neha...


kriya bit back a smile when rey glared at neha...

"shayad tab ...jab...jab meine ise terrace pe baat ki"
kriya said hesitantly and blushing...

rey was shocked he looked at her in full dreamy mode...

"really!!!!!!!!😍"

kriya blushed...but reys dreamy mode was broken by sharon who hugged kriya...

"many many happy returns of the day!!!!! really im very glad to meet u...ur such a good frnd...pata nahi mai itni kam tym mei tumse itna frndly kaise bangayi.."

"matlab??"

"matlab ye ki sharon raiprakash ko impress karna bohut mushkil hai...infact rey aur swayam ko bhi bohut tym laga...and ofcourse hum sabko" simmi said..

"not lyk dat...she is too cute and sweet."kriya

"thats so sweet of u "sharon..

"acha batao sharon ki ..."

here strtd the girls talking session...the rest 4 couples excused and left when KR& SS are left...both reyam were getting irritation...rey was angry coz they met that day after 10 yrs but she is goingon talking to sharon...reyam winked at each other...swayam called sharon and asking smthig when rey closed kriyas mouth .lifted her and ran away...aftersmtym sharon realised what was happening...swaron laughed at what rey did and they went away 4r their private tym😉


kriya struggled ...atlast rey left her...


"rey ye kya kar rahe ho???? waha sharon..."

"sshh!!!!! bilkul chup...mujhe nahi pata sharon kya samjhegi...mujhe bas tumse baat karni hai..."he placed his fingeron her lips and walked frnt when she walked back...

(note...imagine no one is there)

"baat kounsi baat??? kya kehna hai???"

"mujhe nahi tumhe kehna hai kriya..."

"mujhe??? kya kehna hai??"

"wo three words"

"kounsi words..."she ran away...rey chased her...

they ran 4r a long tym...in middle kriya throwed sand on him...and he too...they played like that 4r god knows how much tym...finally rey got hold but both were really too tired that they fell down and rolled down ...they ended with kriya on top of rey...the waves covered them and went back...they were fully wet and the water was too cold...but the heat they are getting 4rm each others body was more than enough...rey leaned frward ...their faces were inches away...

"pata hai rey 10 saal beeth gaye ki mai aise khul ke has rahi hun...hamesha tum hi mujhe itna khush kyun karte ho?"

she asked..her moving rosy lips and her adorable face was making him crazy...

"kyun hi mai mai hun!!!!"rey said huskily which made her shiver...

"ab bata bhi do na wo teen words..."

she blushed and said...

"i luv u "she said ...he was very happy he kissed her of her forehead...then her ear and then jaw and finally stopped at her lips...he looked at her who waiting 4r a kiss...but he stopped in middle making her confused...

"ek baat batao tum ne isse pehle kisiko kiss kiya kya??"


she was shocked...she got very angry and was abt to push him when he pinned her again to the sand...the waves continuosly made their way up and down on them...

"pata hai..jab tum gussa karti ho...tumhari ye nose fuljati hai aur u luk soo cutee"

he rubbed his nose to hers...she blushed and turned her face ti ri8...he gently kissed her on her cheek...

"can ...can i kiss u ??"he asked even though he knows the answer...he slowly turned her face to him...she pressed her lips together tight...he leaned slowly and slowly placed his lips on hers...the touch of their lips took their breath away...kriya breathed very heavily...he pulled back to see her flushed face...she slowly looked at him...she pushed him and got up but she was soon in his arms...

"rey!"

"shh!!!!!! ghar chalte hai...itni raat ko yaha rehna theek nahi hai"

he took her to his car and placed her in the car and took his place and drove to his house...

while gng she opened the window...kept her head and hands out exposing her waist more to him...he tried lot to concentrate but was not able to concentrate so he stopped on a empty road...she was still seeing out and enjoying her special day...he slowly leaned and kissed oh her waist...she cluthed the door and pressed herself to it...she never dared to look back...he jumped back and pulled her by waist ...her back crushed into him...she cluthed the two frnt seats as he kissed down her spine...sucking the water droplets...she moaned in pleasure...he licked the water on the sides of her waist with the tip of his tongue making her to dig her fingers into the seat...he slowly kissed her 4r her wrist to shoulder...passed his both hands down hers and cluthed her finger when his mouth was busy sucking a piece of flesh of her shoulder...he turned her to hi and slowly placed her on seat bending on top of her...

"i missed u a lot..."

"mee too..."

a tear escaped her eyes which were burning...he sucked away it and made his way to her lips...

"uss din agar maine kiss karliya toh??? kar karegi"

"tum nahi karoge"

"tumhe kaise pata???"

"mujhe pata hai...tum sirf mujhe kiss kar sakte ho...aand tab tumhe pata nahi ki mai hi mai hun..."

he smiled at her and leaned 4rward for a kiss but they got back to senses as a car passed by blowing the horn...they sat up ...rey jumped frward and pulled to his house...as he entered into a big banglow kriya's jaw dropped...even though she is a big model she lived in the same small room where she strtd her single life...she never used luxurious things coz she fully focused on clearing her depts etc...

"rey ye aapka ghar hai???"

"haan kyun???"

"wo tab aap uss flat mei..."

"haan par dad ki mehnat /...ye sab aagaye..."

she smiled...

"aunty uncle hai kya??? wow !!! itne saalon ke baad i will meet them...mai abhi jaati hun..."

she was abt to rush when he called...

"kriya...woh yaha nahi delhi mei rehte hai...papa ki main office waha hai...par meri academy yaha hai so mai yaha rehta hun..."

"oh haan!!!!! swayam ne bataya mai toh bhool hi gayi"

"toh andar chale ya phir yahi rehna hai??"

"chalo chalo..."

they entered...his house was like paradise...she was checking each and every bit jumping and twirling and fr every step of hers rey was falling more 4r her...

after seing the living room she rushed into kitchen and found sm bread...

"hmm...bread...im hungry.."

she rubbed her hands and kept a pan 4r preparing an omlete...but rey tapped her she looked back and before she could tell anything he lifted her by waist and made her sit beside the stove(hope u got) and prepared egg 4r her and 4r himself...she strtd eating there itself...he smiled and strtd eating standing beside her ...then he filled two glasses of soft drnk..she took it ran to explore the house...he followed her...she went into the back of his house...

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she was very excited on seeing this fountain...(imagine it in dark...lightings at back...green colour lights)

she placed the glass on a table and jumped into the pool...she was fully wet and playing in the water but she never knew what effect she has on him was checking her out slowly walked to her he was ri8 behind her but she was busy playing...his blood boiled in want of her...he slowly placed his hands on her waist and squeesed it...she took a long breath while falling on his chest 4r support...he passed his left hand to the ri8 of her waist ...caught a piece of flesh for which she dug her nails into her palms and he turned her to him...


"i thought mujhe ek moti ladki ko apna banana hoga...but i never knew ki meri baatcutter mereliye itna sexy and slim banke aayegi " he spoke huskily as his each word hit her on her cheeks...

they turned pink...he bit her cheeks slightly...he pulled back and looked at her...she pushed him and moved back ...he followed her...she went into the middle of the fountain and he was outside the fountain( i mean u can see a layer of water lyk curtain na...imagine him outside and she inside...)

he checked her 4rm top to bottom...she pulled her shorts down uncomfortably... he moved in...she gasped and moved back...she hit the pole and he came close to her...

"rey"

"sshh!!!!!!"

he placed his finger on her lips...he bent frward and gave wet kisses on her shoulder and then on face...she moaned...he slowly moved frward such dat her chest touched his ...(sorry guys i frgt to tell his removed his shirt before entering the pool) his creating more heat in him...he slowly placed his lips on hers...she clutched her lips together...he first sucked them then slowly strtd moving into her mouth but she resisted...he deepened the kiss...but she was resisting more...he slowly slid his hand up and squeezed her left curve slightly...her grip loosened as she gasped ...thats it...he got the way...he squeezed more and finally made his way through her mouth...he caught her tongue and sucked it...she tried pulling his hand but this made him wild and he caught her top inserting his fingers into it...she gasped hard...he tried pulling it down but in vain...finally he pulled back his kiss ...soon she pushed him and strtd running out...but her legs were giving her a difficult tym thus he reached in frnt of her before she hardly took 6-7 steps...he strtd kissing her neck and the exposed chest while his hands played on her back and untied the thread tied around her neck...she caught him tight with her arms around his neck ...but as her legs gave up she bended down...but in seconds she was in his arms...he took her to his bedroom ...all the way he was looking at her who was breathing hard with closed eyes...he slowly placed her on the bed...it was then she opened her eyes but was shocked to see him unbuttoning his pant button...

"rey...not now" she spoke with much difficulty breathing hard...

"tum aaj se KRIYA REYAANSH SINGHANIA ho...i mean my wife...and i have full ri8s on u "

before she could utter a word he placed himself gently upon her and kissed her deeply...while he was busy kissing his hands worked on the hooks of her top and were finally successful...he moved down kissing...finally he reached her waist...he slid his hands up squeezing her curves and his teeth and lips worked on the button of her shorts...finally he was successful...he came up and saw her...she looked at him...he caught hold of her top with left ...she nodded saying no...

he too nodded saying yes ...before she could do anything else his ri8 hand went to the switch and


**lights off!!!!!**

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here ends the ss...tumlogon ne kya socha firse mei besharam banu??? nah!!!!!use ur oun brains here
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hehehehe...hope u like it...like and review!!!!!
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Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
deeta diii
it was tooo good
mindblowing superb what not
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing,,,,,,loved the update very very very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Here comes to reply for both updates.
GREAT parts 👍🏼
Rey loved his Kria since he was 12 n caring n protective for her n still he used to celebrate her birthday but dis bd was special who brought her back in his life.😃
He was surprised to know dat Swayam was always in her touch being her besty but was really sad for hardships she faced alone.
They confessed their feelings n he was going to make her his better half, wow amazing.😍
Waiting for next part update it fast.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for being late with comments 😔
First of all
Many many happy returns of the day 🥳
HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR DEETHA 🤗 👏
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shaadi se pehle honeymoon<3 kriya reyansh singhaniya wah kya baat kya baat kyaa baat... Wat shud i say its too hot too handle.. Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum Awesum hayee kriyansh ka romance jitna bhi ho kum lagta hai.. And agar thod aur likh deti toh kya jata... bt its realy awesum.. Heads off to u.. Deetha u r gr8..
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Posted: 13 years ago

What a super hawt ending of SS. 'Lights Off'' Bas itna hi 😡 Just Joking dear.

But I totally like this update.

I always luv when he says Kria Reyansh Singhania.

This SS has been a delight to read.

If you could give us some more small SS on ArSha as well, it would be a pleasure to read.

Great going deetha


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha


kb se h yar wo to ☺️...bt kismat khrab koi milta hi ni...hehehe 😆

ryt shaffy . . . . Meko bhi chahiye rey jaisa hi cutie pie 😉 ☺️
& deetha- ur ff's already made our hopes high for our dream guy 😛 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
shaffy ki bachi kaha hai tu???😡

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