FF: Indecent Proposal [Thread 2 - Pg 162]

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bumble_bee

@bumble_bee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#781

oh how i have waited for this update!!! you have no idea... this is such a topic which can go either crassy or really exciting... i love it! absolutely love it!

love this arnav and especially this spunky khushi... waiting for more and more.. i am happy its not a rona dhona cry fest story...

i love this spunky khushi, this calculating girl... who i hope learns to deal with arnav in the language he understands... instead of a helpless khushi... crying incessantly...

keep it coming!

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710617

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Posted: 13 years ago

#782

I like how u have mapped out both the characters .. Good both of them seem mature and not in the extreme..

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#783

Arnav wont do anything?? Why?? he is the man of actions .. c'mon!

Loved to see Khushi back .. now the story is going to be more interesting. :D

Please update soon .. :)

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paircube

@paircube

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Posted: 13 years ago

#784

Yup. I admit I did tear up ... khushi ... arnav ... I don't know.
But the end part was excellent. You go girl. Teach the raakshas that he doesn't own you. So as considers this as a loss ... too bad. He should start getting used to it. Hope the khushi with spunk and charm is here to stay.

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cymateli

@cymateli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#785

👏brilliant updates.. 👏 read the last two updates.. they all are fabulous.. sorry for commenting late.. continue soon!

PS: I am busy with exams so might get late with the comments but please dont remove me from ur buddy list! thx

Edited by cymateli - 13 years ago

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amritafan

@amritafan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#786

awesome.i liked the breakfast scene

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KKG_ASR

@KKG_ASR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#787

read ur updt B4 the PM and like it ...

thks for the PM

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pips27

@pips27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#788

loved it when she ate that egg and arnav got peanut butter sandwich🤣 🤣 🤣

serves him better🤣🤣🤣

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#789

that was a big surprise...just loved this khushi..amazing fire for fire...arnav character also is very surprising...to be quite honest i have never imagine this ff will turn like this...arnav seemed a dark character since the beginning...maybe his secrets or demons,but i love it plz keep it up