New FF:Jab Dil Mein Ho Sirf Pyaar...

Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi...i am jyothika and this is my first ff😊
it would be absolutely impossible without your support and likes
it is not about a specific character...but all actors whom we all admired 4 long
this has many incidents relating to my life and ppl arond me...hope.u all will enjoy it
this has absolutely no.adult content...so those below 18 need not worry...


Some Of the Main Characters are...


  • Shreya Arvind Bharadwaj...Ankita Sharma
  • shreya is a happy go lucky girl to whom Family Values and Friends Value the most and Love To her means what she gets from her Family And her Brother Siddharth whom she loves More than anything else in the world.This story shows about how she tackles her problems fearlessly with all support from her family,friends and of course...her true love
  • Sushant Singh Rajput...Siddharth Arvind Bharadwaj(shreya's brother)
  • shreya's elder brother...loves her the most in the world and will do anything 4 her...her frnds also treat him lyf a big brother
  • Karan Kundra...Arjun Singh Bajpai
  • arjun is shreyas husband...loves her unconditionally and comes from a very influencial family...he is the owner of a big business umpire
  • Drashti Dhami...Geet Khurrana
  • wife of business tycoon maan singh khurrana...shreya is more than a sister to her...they share a great bond...the help each other at every problem in their life...used to work with siddharth who is lyk a brother to her too...
  • Gurmeet Chaudhary...Maan Singh Khurana
  • maan singh khurrana is the owner of a huge business empire...shreya is like his own sister whom he cares a lot.geet is his wife.to him...his wife and kids are the first priority.
  • Vivian Dsena...Shantanu Khandelwal
  • shreya's cousin...he is a year elder to shreya but care 4 each other a lot...he is very responsible towards his family..

  • Ram Kapoor...Rajeev
    Khandelwal
  • shaantanus dad and shreyas bupaji...but calls him chachu...treats shreya as his own daughter...shryas dad and he are best friends..owns RKM industries
  • Gita Khandelwal...Gurpreet Kohli
  • shreyas sweet little bua...loves her a lot...she has two sons shaantanu and virat...considers shreya as her own daughter..

  • Arvind Bharadwaj...Shreyas and Siddharth's dad...Ronit Roy
  • he is papa no1 for both his kids...to him, family matters the most...believes in joint family systems...he owns lakshmi textile group of companies...has one two sisters seema and gita and brother vinay.rajeev is his best friend.he loves his wife revathy.

  • Revathy Bharadwaj...Smriti Irani
  • a perfect home planner...but always concerned abt her kids..geet is also a daughter to her...manages her family with all good values

  • Arnav Vinay Bharadwaj

shreya , siddharth and shaantanu's cousin...ever cheerful and always prankful with shreya...cares 4 her a lot...has a brother too..akash vinay bharadwaj(who is handicapped)

to shreya...she has 5 brothers...sid,arnav.shaan,virat(shaans younger brother) and akash...



Prologue...
It is a story Of Shreya...a happy go lucky girl to wh
om Family Values and Friends Value the most and Love To her means what she gets from her Family And her Brother Siddharth whom she loves More than anything else in the world
This story shows about how she tackles her problems fearlessly with all support from her family,friends and of course...her true love
hope you all like it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by pari_jyothika - 13 years ago
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PART 1

Shreya is admitted in the ICU and is very critical.Her family and others are worriedly waiting outside.



Her brother siddharth rushes towards them'.

Siddharth:shreya'.shreya'.meri behen kahan hai?'kaisi hai?'ussse kya hua'?...

(Siddharth'her brother was an it professional company's CEO'he had come from Bangalore to Mumbai to see his sister)

Dr.Verma :mr.bharadwaj'.aap shaant ho jaayiye'aapki behen ko kuch nahi hoga

(he catches hold of his shirt)

Siddharth:agar mere binny(shreya's pet name) ko hua to main aapko chodungi nahi

Dr.Amrita:sid'shaant ho jao'binny ko kuch nahi hoga


Siddharth:didi'sach sach batao'.binny ko kya hua'papa bhi kuch nahi bol rahe the..

Kaha hai mummy-paapa??

Dr.Amrita:woh'.maaasi behosh ho gaye the'.ve dono doosri ward mei hai aur shreya..

Dr.verma:shreya ko attempted suicide ke baad yahan admit karwaya gaya hai'

{Sid is shell-shocked'. How could his sister who feared nothing and always would run to him if anything bothered her '.how could she take such a drastic step'.}

Siddharth:nahi'nahi'aisa nahi ho sakta

Arya(their cousin):bittu bhaiya'

Siddharth:arya'..tum to humesha shreya ke paas rehte ho na'.batao kii kya ho gaya

Arya:mein aapko ko sab kuch bata doongi bhaiya'

Prateik(aryas bro):ha sid bhai'.in sab ke pichche ek wajah hai aur ek bahut badi raaz


Arya:woh mallika jiji'''..

Precap:shreya is hugging her bro tightly and telling "maine khudkushi nahi kii thi"

Edited by pari_jyothika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratz on new ff dear..
Hmm cs seems quite interestng and gud start bt dnt mind it seemed little clumsy too as there were too many characters with diff names..it was diff 4 me to grasp who was who..sorry if u r hurt..it's nt my intentn to hurt u..
So shreya comitd suicide no no sme1 creatd it(takng precap in to cnsideratn)
her bro is tensd..waitng to knw wat actualy hapnd with shreya..cnt soon
love..
Mona
Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

Siddharth:mallika jiji kya?usne ab kya kiya???pehle bhi woh shreya ko bahut chot pahonchaaya hai..


Prateik:bhai...jo baat hum aapko batane wale hai usse aapko bahut shaanti se sun-na padega

"aapko pata hai kii kuch din pehle hi binny aaya tha uske degree complete karne ke baad..


aur dadaji(yani aapke nana)ke tabiyat bahut kharaab thi isliye woh unse milne aayi thi SHIVAM NIWAS{their mom's house}..ussi waqt usne Mallika jiji ko dadaji ke thumb impression kisi kagaz par lete hue dekha tha..ussi waqt shreya ne uski photo kinchi thi...


Arya:aap tho jaanti hai na mallika jiji ke baare mei

{FLASHBACK]

Mallika was adopted by REVATHY's(shre-sid'd mom) brother.she was loved immensely by all family members.she was very close to shreya from childhood eventhough they differd in age by 10 years...

bt over the years she grew jealous of all in the family and tried all ways to take over family property.once shreya,sid and all cousins find all ancestor valuebles and jewels in her room thus understanding her flaw...her husband unaware of all this supports her throughout and family members support her too...but all her cousins know abt her evilness and shreya broke all ties with her...

Prateik:"uske baad shreya hummare paas aayi aur photo humme dikhaayi...lekin pata nahi kaise mallika jiji ne us photo ko dekhi...phir doosre din munna(her son)was admitted @the hospital...and doctors told them that he had consumed poison...


mallika jiji put the blame on shreya telling that she had given munna a chocolate and that had poison'

shreya tried to prove her innocence but none listened to her and even bua(her mom) blamed hers.all of us also tried bt no one paid heed to it..

shreya then rushes to her room to show all the picture''but finds her phone crushed


she is shocked and turns to find mallika smiling

Mallika:tumne kya socha tha'tum bahut smart ho'..woh soch galat hai pagli

Shreya :kya matlab hai aapka?

Mallika:aap and all eh?itna respect'.kyun binny


Woh bhi mujhse jiske saath tu apnaa games khel rahe hai

Jaante ho binny'.jis school se tum ye sab sikha na'main uss school ka principal hun'.

Shreya:iska matlab aap sab kuch..

Mallika:ha baby'.mere munna ko kuch nahi hua hai'.dr.vikas ko kuch paisa diya aur zeher story begins

Ab to tumhare paas sabot bhi nahi ho'..pata hai dadaji sab property tum aur doosro ke naam dene wale ho'main aisa hone nahi doongi aur jab tum hi nahi rahogi ko kuch nahi hoga

Shreya:jiji'.please'


Malllika drags her to the terrace and pushes her down'"

Siddharth :iska matlab''..main uss aurat ko chodungi nahi'.(angry and frustrated)

Arya:hum logon ne usse ye karte hue dekha tha lekin humare bolne se pehle usne kaha kii shreya ne suicide kii hai

Prateik:aap chinta mat kijiye'

Dr.amrita:maasi ko hosh aa gya

Siddharth rushes to his mom'.

Revathy:meri bachchi kaisi hai'woh teek hai na?

Siddharth:who teek hai maa'.woh humare binny hai na'har problem se secondon mein bahar aati hai

Arvind:bte'ek minute mere saath aao na zara


Siddharth goes out with him'

Siddharth:kya baat hai dad'.

Arvind:woh kya tum sab jaante hai kii kya hua tha?

Siddharth:ha dad'.mein shreya teek hone ka intezaar kar rahe hai

Dr verma:mr bharadwaj,shreya ko hosh aa gaya hai'.

Sid and other rush to the ICU

Nurse:sirf ek andar jaa sakta hai'

Arvind to Sid:tu pehle jaa bte'iss waqt use tumhare zaroorat hai

Siddarth goes inside

He sees shreya and starts crying'

Shreya :mere champion dada kyn ro rahe ho



He runs and hugs her'

Siddharth:pagi'.ek phone nahi kar sakti thi

Shreya:dada'maine khudkushi nahi kii thi

Siddharth:main sab kuch jaanti hu'..ab tu chinta mat kar'.mai hun na

Tu aaram kar

Hearing that shreya peacefully sleeps.sid is in tears

PRECAP:how did mallika see the picture???

How will she get punished?

do like and comment...

Edited by pari_jyothika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one dear..good going..i hope mallika cmes through the pic soon and she should be punishd brutally

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