ArSha FF-Pehele Pyar ka Ehsaas#3 **The End** - Page 36

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww thish that was a cute update.
lovely one.
amars suprise was so cute.
Mukthi -Shaks ka convo-cute.
aur shaks ka S kehana wah wah wah.
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Amazing update.
Thanks for the pm.
update soon and lets reach 100 parts soon.😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
Tish...prt 51 was awesum...
Sry fr d late comment ...cams r thr...
Luvd d way dey celebrated der anny...
I'll read prt 52 nd den comment...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum prt...tish...
Luvd mukti-shakti convo...
Shakz is so confused...
Finally she said yes...
Aww so cute...waitin fr d nxt 1...
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Posted: 13 years ago
u knw wat...???
m actually confused...

ye kaise hogya...??????

dude... tish... u r sooo unpredictable...

ovrall... nyc update... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg she said yes can't believe update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum srry cudnt comment just came...
both d parts were fab...do i even need 2 say, u already knw it babes...
she said yes believe my that's d exact opp of wat i was expecting...my reaction was just like his...i scrolled the page up n down just to check if i read it rite...n i did awsum...
luv ya tish as alwzz...
n update fast...i m quite greedy...
yeh dil mange more...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Well, the heading says it all……

Epilogue

Several years later

*Ring Ring*

Amar- hey, hi honey!

Shakti- don't you honey me Kunwar……. you're late!!

Amar- I know love….. I was stuck in traffic….. but I'm almost there.

Shakti- if you don't turn up in the next 5 minutes, we'll kill you!!

Amar- bus Jaana, I'm just parking the car….. Tell her, I promise I won't miss it.

Shakti- I'm not making any promises on your behalf….. you better be quick.

And she hung up.

"Mommy?"

Shakti- yes darling?

"Is daddy going to miss my performance?"

Kneeling down in front of her 5 year old, Shakti gazed in those lovely chocolate brown eyes…… the ones exactly like her father's.

Shakti- oh no sweetheart, he won't.

"But Pinky maam said I have to be on stage in 5min….. why hasn't he come yet?" (puppy face)

Glancing towards the door Shakti groaned out loud, before she turned back to her doll.

Shakti- Honey, I promise he'll be here any minute.

Kunwar Amarjeet Singh, I'll strangle you with my bare hands if you make me lie to my daughter.

Like just on cue…..

Amar- I'm here!!... I'm here!!!... I'm here!!

"Daddy!!!"

With a delighted squeal, she ran into his open arms, as he immediately scooped her up.

Amar- I'm sorry my little princess….. daddy got stuck in traffic.

"that's because I wasn't there to help you with the horn."

Amar laughed….. his baby girl loved to honk the car horn and to Shakti's irritation he always let her indulge in her mischief's.

Amar- I knowww….. I'm never driving without you again!

She rewarded him a toothy grin….. while he lovingly kissed on her brow.

Amar- so is my princess ready for the show?

"yes, yes!!... oh, daddy put me down…. I'm getting late….. Amol must be waiting for me"

Amar- (frown) Amol?

He looked over at a giggling Shakti.

Amar- yeh Amol kaun hai?

Shakti- your daughter's dance partner.

Amar- oh…….

"Daddy please….. put me down!"

She struggled to get free.

Amar- ok ok baba.

As soon as her feet touched the floor, she ran towards her dressing room, skidding slightly on the slippery floor.

Shakti called out after her…..

Shakti- careful sweetheart….. and all the best!

"Yes mommy…… thank you…. I love you!"

Shakti- we love you too baby!

As soon as their daughter disappeared behind the door, Amar stepped before Shakti, gathering her in his arms.

Amar- meri little princess toh maan gayi….. ab meri yeh princess ka kya?

Shakti- (roll eyes) you just be glad, you're alive.

She shoved his arms off her waist, turned and walked into the auditorium…… chuckling he followed her…. her so called 'threats' were just as endearing as her.

As soon as they found the seats, their daughter's performance was announced.

"And the next performance is a romantic duet number by our two very talented students….. please give them a big hand!!"

Amar- (muttering) a romantic duet number??!!... khuch aur nahi mila?

Shakti giggled…… and he turned to glare at her.

Amar- couldn't you choreograph a solo piece for her??

Shakti- sussh!!... stop being such a possessive daddy….. Girls at her age don't like their dads squabbling about what they do choose to do.

Amar- what her age??!!... oh for Christ's sake….. she's just 5!!

The thought of his daughter in her teens made him shudder.

Shakti leaned towards him and plated a kiss on his cheek.

Shakti- my dear hubby, get used to it….. 5 is the new 13!

He sighed….. get used to it?... He didn't have much of a choice, did he?... The ladies of his house always had the final say…… well, he could blame all his pampering for that.

The lights dimmed and the curtains were raised…… Their angel danced to every beat and rhythm with sheer perfection; making their hearts swell with pride…… with their fingers locked together they watched their little girl blooming into a beautiful butterfly.

Amar- she looks gorgeous…..

Shakti- hmmm.

Amar- just like you.

Nuzzling her arm in the crook of his elbow, she leaned towards him.

Shakti- thank you for giving me her.

Hooking his arm around her shoulders, he lifted her face up and kissed her with a lifetime of love and passion.

When clattering of applause broke them apart, they both said in unison…..

"I love you!"

**** The End ****

Ps- ??? I'll give one soon...

💔???... I know... 😔

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Posted: 13 years ago
ur kidding me right?? or ur kidding everyone??? I dint just read epilogue in the title right??? r u seriously ending it??? like seriously tish???

this has been one of the most beautifully written FF ever.. If ur ending it.. u know i will support you.. but then, i almost teared up... Really??? Like, this is the end?? Like, really??

Sacchi mei tish?? Sacchi???

ufff... let me come to terms with that... uff...
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okay..
I still m in shock.. but then... as they say, every good thing comes to an end.. I loved this update.. So apt for them to have a daughter.. Its unnecessary to say that it was brilliantly written.. I have loved this FF throughout all the chapters.. Every update was more awsm than the last one.. I remember how u started with a sorta weird long distance friendship, then brought her back.. then the jaipur arc... then the confession... then there fight... den their reconciling.. then the proposal... ohh it was a saga worth reading... U r one of the most brilliant writers on the forum tish!!! Seriously, m sooo emotional dat ur ending dis one... cant believe it!!!
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Okay.. A nice end... Now the million dollar question... when do I get to read ur stuff next?? What are u planning on writing next?? And foremost promise me dat u r planning on writing something new!!

Love u loads Tish!! Ur my rockstar!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

And first to comment... but in no mood to dance!!
Edited by aria009hera - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I dont know what to feel happy or sad... happy for its such sweet ending or sad for its ending! 😕
It was such a lovely,magical,endearing,romantic and really Exclusive FF!! 🤗 👍🏼 ❤️
we can never get enough of it... it was so addictive! 👏
I wish you would write any other ArSha FF in future...
i will be really missing your update and the waiting session!! 😔
it feels that it started some days before and its ending so soon... this was the only thing which made our expectations alive about ArSha in real 🤔
THANKS A LOT! 😊
Love you so much ❤️
bye 🤢
Edited by Love_Kunwar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

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unres...

What????????????????? *putting on her glasses* u r ending the FF? *rubbing eyes n checking again* this was really the epilogue... i mean we will never get to read any more update of this awesome FF?????

i m feeling like i just started to read ur FF yesterday... their friendship... their chatting... Shakti's return... that Anjali... then Pankti's wedding...their fair scene... their all those scenes in the wedding... that Yash.. Arsha's nok-jokhs... their dori scene... their romance... their confession... their flashbacks... their T-shirt scene... their journey to Mumbai... their horror scene i mean the violent scene... then their sad moments... their airport moment... their anniversary scene...Amar's proposal for marriage... their boat ride... Amar's proposal again... Shakti's agreeing... then the epilogue...


i just had a whole flashback... Tish... i donno how i will stay without the FF... but plzz promise n confirm that u will write another FF... n that too really soon...

Loved the FF... my most fav FF till now...

u r really phenomenal... love ya Tish...


Edited by Asha_ArSha - 13 years ago

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