SS- Strangers In New York: Completed - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago
This story is so fresh and lovely...U just left us at a cliffhanger...please continue soon and yh..i added u to the buddy list... Pm me.. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww it was awesome :)

Update soon!

And I think FF xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
just read it all
liike the concept and the khushi in yur story=]
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Posted: 13 years ago
read it in one go... loved it totally... khushi's character is ssooo niceee... and yes convert it into FF please!!!

Do continue soon.. and i m sending u a buddy request... add me please and do PM me when u update... thanks !

beccky :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved khushi's individuality..
make this a FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome, Love it. It a very unique story. Please continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 3 and 4 both were good! I actually really like the fact that Khushi didn't take the job although obviously it limits meeting potential in the future :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello everyone! Sorry for the late update!
Please listen to this msg to the readers of this SS (you) before you begin! Click Here!It's short! I promise!
Moving onto the update...
Stranger In New York
Part 5
"Akaaash!! How do you think this one looks? I think it's better than the white one!" Payal screeched trying out the 300th dress today.
"White makes me look fat..." She mumbled under her breath.
"Payal... Everything looks good on you..." Akash pathetically flirted with Payal.
Arnav sat there in utter boredom watching his friend's hopeless attempt at flirting, another thing to add onto the list of things Akash couldn't do for the life of him. Was this really his idea of a fun mall trip... sigh...
Akash nudged Arnav, "What kind of a wing man are you? You're just sitting here! Do something!"
Arnav glared at Akash.
"Really Akash? Really? I don't remember signing up up for Torture In Two Hours-Payal Edition!" replied an annoyed Arnav.
"Arnav! What kind of a friend are you?"
Arnav jerked up. "That's IT! I'll show you how wonderful of a friend I am!" He marched up to Payal.
"Hey! Isn't Akash so sweet! He always has the perfect compliments." Arnav said with fake enthusiasm while plastering a smile onto his face.
"And statics show that men who give out good compliments usually make really good boyfriends!" He continued.
Akash grinned at Payal and nodded his head like a fool.
Payal looked at the two awkwardly. "And you were looking this up because...?"
Arnav was confused but then got what Payal was hinting at. "Woah, woah, woah! No!! Aisa... kuch... nahi hai..."
"Right..." Payal said unconvinced walking back into the dressing room.
"I think I like this one, I'll buy it!" She said in from the room.
"YES!" Arnav jumped up in joy as if he had been released from prison. After seeing all of the women there staring at him awkwardly, he sat back down.
***
In The Car...
"Arnav! Tum kya kar rahe ho! Payal ka ghar wahan hai!" Akash tried to impress Payal.
"What the heck?" Arnav whispered fully annoyed
"Just make me look good!" Akash quickly responded.
"Oh Akash... You're so smart!" He plastered that fake smile onto his face again.
"It's a gift." Akash shamelessly continued. "Arre arre, yeh kya kar rahe ho! Abhi bhi yahan hi chala rahe ho! Maine bataya na ki Payal ka ghar wahan hai..."
Arnav had had it now. He forcibly smiled and spoke through his tightly gritted teeth, "Akash. Silly Goose! Wahan Pe No Left Turn Ka Board Hai. Dekha Nahi? Isi Liye Hum Yahan Se Jaa Rahe Hai."
He couldn't take it anymore. Being Akash's wing man was next to impossible! There is nothing he really had to brag about other then his job, why would a girl want him? But then again, he's his chuddi buddy and chuddi buddies are always there for each other, no matter how ridiculous they get.
They got to Payal's house.
"Alright Payal, today was really fun! *lie* We'll look forward to hanging out with you again! *lie*" Arnav tried his hardest to end this evening as fast as he could. He was probably the happiest he had been all day right now.
"Wait aren't you coming in? Akash told me..."
"Yes! We are! Arnav is just so forgetful!" Akash jumped in.
"What?"
"Oh, we're getting dressed here before we hit the club! Remember silly?" Akash nudged.
"WHAT?" Arnav literally had a heart attack. "Akash can we have a private discussion for a moment?" He demanded.
Payal gave them that weird look again.
Arnav saw and realized... "Wait!! No!! Aisa kuch..." but before he could finish she rushed inside and his idiot friend ran after. Kaha phas gaya main?
***
"La! Kaha hain woh tumhara badnaseeb boyfriend?" Khushi chuckled.
"Shut up!" La replied annoyed. "Humesha mere Nick ke peeche padi rehti ho! Poor baby! Traffic main phas gaya hoga!"
"Poor baby? It's not like you didn't annoy the crap out of Rohan when we used to go clubbi..." Khushi realized what was going to say. "Forget it... I swear if Nick isn't here in five, I'm changing back..." Khushi covered up the topic but La didn't fail to realize the hurt in her voice.
Her voice was always like that whenever Rohan was concerned. "Sweetie, I think it's time you get over him."
"Laaa! I'm fine!" Khushi tried to explain. La knew she wasn't though, but talking more about "him" wouldn't help the situation either.
She pulled her towards the mirror. "Daaayum girl! Someone be looking sexy? The guys at the club better be ready for this bomb..." La cheered her up.
"You're looking pretty good yourself." A voice called out from the door.
"Nick!!! Baby!!" La rushed into his arms. Their forheads collided before they met for a small peck. The clumsiness of the two never failed to amuse Khushi. Made for each other! She thought and chuckled.
"Hey Nick!" Khushi called out as she was scanned through her phone.
"Hello mam." He stiffened. It was hysterical how scared Nick was of Khushi, ever since the day he was going ask La out. He remembered her threat...
Flashback:
"And if you DARE break her heart!" Khushi threatened him with her wooded spoon against his chin.
"Yes mam... I mean no mam." Nick replied. He could've pissed in his pants. This woman was scary.
"Just remember, she has friends that will not spare you if you do..."
Nick frantically nodded his head indicating he understood.
"Alright, I give you permission to ask her out." Khushi said as if she was doing him a favor.
End of flashback.
He shuddered at the memory.
"I'm not going to eat you up." Khushi chuckled.
"Kya hai yeh, humesha tumse inta dara dara sa kyun rehta hai?" La asked.
"What?" Nick questioned. His confusion and inability to comprehend hindi for some reason made La 'aww' at him.
"Nothing, I'm asking if she has my straighter or not?" La covered up.
"Oh.. How do you say straightener in hindi?" Nick asked.
"Um.. I think..." La and Nick walked out.
"I'll be right there!" Khushi called out as the two walked out.
While locking the door she remembered Arnav.
Thanks. He had said. The thought of him made her smile.
"Khushi!!!"
"Yeah! Coming!"
***
"Wait so what exactly are we changing into?" Arnav asked.
"Oh, Payal bought us outfits. Isn't that so sweet of her?"
Arnav glared at him and then saw that Payal was also waiting for an answer.
"Yes. Sweet as a cupcake!" He said through gritted teeth.
"Here's yours and hereee's yours" She handed the two their outfits. "Arnav go change in Pa's room and Akash you can change over there in mine."
After the two closed their doors, she heard Arnav call out...
"Hey um Payal... I think you forgot the pants..."
"There are none!" She said with enthusiasm.
"WHAT?"
"Kyun itna shor macha rahe ho?" Akash walked out wearing his outfit.
"Pata nahi... inhe unke kapre pasand nahi aye..." Payal pouted.
"Aww.. Don't mind... He's a sadu by profession... And I absolutely love the clothes you picked out for me!" Akash reassured.
Akash's Clothes
"Shut up Akash! And Payal, I'm just the kind of man who prefers pants with his clothes so..."
"It's ok... I just thought that by the way you act you might like those kind of clothes..."
Wait was she suggesting...
"Payal! Seriously, I'm not..." but she walked away by then. It was seriously annoying at how she thought he was gay... and that to for Akash. Not that he would go gay for anybody but... whatever. He'll have to make do with what he had.
He took off the jacket of his suit and rolled up the sleeves of his inner shirt. I guess we'll have to make do with this.
He walked out seeing Akash go gaga over Payal.
The dress was good but he just didn't really find her attractive. Oh My Gosh! Was Payal right? Was he really... No! No, no, no, no! He just didn't find her attractive. I mean she's just wasn't his type. He rolled his eyes at his own thoughts. Dumb and Dumber were driving him crazy.
"Let's go."
***
At The Club.
Khushi walked in with the two lovesick birds.
"I love this song!" Khushi exclaimed.
"Cool. We'll be over there if you need us." Nick stated.
"Go enjoy yourself girlie!" La whispered before she left following Nick.
And then Khushi hit it off to the dance floor
Moments later Arnav entered alongside Dumb and Co.
"Ugggh... I hate this song." he groaned as he saw Dumb and Co. make their way to the dance floor.
Tonight was going to be long night.
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Hope You Liked It! Not much ArHi again, I know but it was needed to set the stage! And if I was going to write an update to set the stage, might as well make it funny! :)
-Shweta! 😃
Formatting might be off because I typed this somewhere else and then copied it here! Sorry!
Edited by ShwetaSunshine - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg arnav is so funny loved him in it
Out fits were great !
Lovely updates
Great ending
can not wait tll the next update:)
Edited by maanviluvzvirat - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome girlie!! it was my utmost pleasure to help you out!! and yes that line , "Where are the pants??"
"Uhhh There are none!!""
cracked me up!!! (even though i knew it!)
hhaah Dumb and Co.
I feel bad for Arnav
bechara... I would be hella pissed too if I was him
cant wait for the next update!!!
Love ya! Hugs! Go sleep now!
Disha xxx

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