Married For Riyasat-Update-Chap 12-part II-Pg 89

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SHANA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: thejazzgal
Wow!!!!!!!!!!

u r an swesoem Writer shana must say!

i love this FF soo muchhh

the last part made me cry.. i felt lump in throat while reading it..
i felt goosebumps !!

ahh i loev thsi FF like anything..
loved it from part 1 to the end..

now runs to read ur Wheel's of Fortune <3

Thanks dear its good to know somebody is still reading it I thought every forgot it 😆

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sloppy-hope

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

OMG!!!😍 Shana it was amazing... i know i am commenting first tym but i've been reading ur FF from the start...

Well Done for the Brilliant work!🤗

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SHANA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: milhan
OMG!!!😍 Shana it was amazing... i know i am commenting first tym but i've been reading ur FF from the start...
Well Done for the Brilliant work!🤗

Thanks Milhan

Really saw u commenting first time,but yes i have seen your likes

Hope u like its Book II >>Wheels of Fortune as well

Love
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Shana

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#724

PART 1

He knew Manyata does not love him but then he also knew that this new Manyata cannot resist him as well .There were many vulnerable moments' when he found her absolutely mesmerized and defenseless towards him, when she was too shy to look into his eyes but then most of these moments were marred by her self promise to be the honest beloved to Akash. He hated her for loving Akash but then he loved her for her vulnerability and innocence.

These lines touched my heart

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#725

PART 2:-

'Princess' Udayveer called again and this time Manyata opened her eyes .She looked like a fairy princess in her pink bridal dress but her eyes were filled with tears, she moved her face on other side to wipe her tears. It was for the first time Udayveer was at loss of words as he knew his brave little princess was really hurt and he himself was the cause of it. But then he cannot let her be like this and weep like a humble damsel in distress .

Manyata could not sleep as thoughts of Akash and Uday kept swirling in her mind, she was in grave dilemma .She loved Akash more than her life but knew she couldn't go back to him. She did not love Udayveer but his very touch seemed to do some magic on her, it seemed to relieve her of all her pain, he seemed to have answers to all her questions and solution to all her problems. But then he is not Akash ,the one who made her feel like princess even in tatters ,he was Yuvraj Udayveer Singh who actually made her princess. When all said she is unworthy of most reputed crown of Devgad he said she is the only one worth it and actually lead her to the throne.

THE BEST PARTS OF PART 2 😊

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#726

PART 3:-

I loved the lady badi masa 😊

Your story is getting interesting in every part 👏

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#727

PART 4:-

LIKE is not enough I just LOVED it!!!

Great update

So Jay became the reverse cupid again!!!

The kissing part is sooo well written...so passionate...

Udayveer looked at Manyata and smiled ,for a moment it seemed only she and Uday were in the room, lost I each others eyes. Sigh! it was not so he had just looked at her for a moment and then he was busy with guests, even she was got busy in receiving gifts and smiling and acknowledging people she never knew.

These are the my fav lines from this part 😊