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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: mahi0809
Loved it!!!... First time I read it and read it from the 1st chapter to now in one go... it was that interesting. You are such a good writer that at places you made me squeal like a little girl, feel sad and I love how beautifully you have taken this story forward.

Please update soon!!...

Thanks Mahi for liking it indeed its u\r first comment on my FF and I am really happy that u liked it

I wish u like my next update too

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: -Priya01
Wow awesome update...beautifully written...so finally Manveer little princess is here...love how UV cared for M ...thxs for the pm 🤗 waiting for the next one😉

Thanks Priya

Yes I have to move on the story as only Manveer moments cannot move the story,this little one had to come,natural hai yaar ,after all they are happily married now

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ilvuday

@ilvuday

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Posted: 13 years ago

#553

aww...so sweet i dont like ur next chapter it is frightening me what will happen please let nothing happen to manveer...sorry m acting like a two year old kid ...byt the point is i loved ur updat thoroughly it was so well written thanx for the amazing update😃

ps thanx for pm

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@wendy25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#554

So finally little princess is arrived. Overall it was so cute and hot! Awesome work shana!
So next one is tragedy part? But i want manveer's some cute convo and fight over baby's name first so it will give me strength to bear there seperation!

Edited by wendy25 - 13 years ago

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: princessnia
Awesome.

O ek shabdo wali princess itni mehnat se likha and only awesome,

Well dear u\r one word doesn't give much idea what u actually liked and what i should improve on

Give some some nice critical appreciation yaar😉

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: fia21
Superb update Shana.
Awww they are finally parents now. But your precap is getting me a little worried. Lol.
Loved this chapter a lot. That part was so hilarious where Manyata is trying to fit in the night dress without opening the zipper and Uday had to tell her that 😆
Update the next par soon Shana!

|Thanks Fia

So dear u r back , well as for precap ,well i have to move on the story as now I feel its becoming monotonous ,so dear be ready for a big twist.

I will update the hint and my plans for this FF's squeal by tomorrow.

Edited by shana0127 - 13 years ago

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fia21

@fia21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: shana0127

|Thanks Fia

So dear u r back , well as for precap ,well i have to move on the story as now I feel its becoming monotonous ,so dear be ready for a big twist.

I will update the hint and my plans for this FF's squeal by tomorrow.

Big twist? Oh great, now how am I supposed to wait for one whole week for that? 😲
Lol. The wait would be totally worth it I am sure! 😊
Yes Shana, I am back. Just like Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh is back 😉 . Hahah 😆
Yaaayy. I'd be waiting for the hints! Oooh you're going to write a sequel to it? That's great 😃

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: tejuangel
UV-M scene was hot and funny and unnatis dialogue was 😆ur precap is little scary😔

ThanksTeju

Well dont be afraid of next chapter its an FF dear drama is apt to happen,but then its a Manveer FF,so its all about them and their life story and how they end up together whatsoever separation the faith may plan.😊
😊

Edited by shana0127 - 13 years ago

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: livvy
Loved it can u pm m

I will dear but then now on this loved it wont work,pls do tell me what u like most and what u want as well

Its a fan fiction,so constructive critical appreciations matters a lot to me 😊

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: gargib
OMG!!..ur such a grt writer😊..i just left all my imp work to read ur FF...just loved the part and what sorrow?...ohhh...i have already started thinking about it..

Thanks dear

Its so nice to know that u liked it so much,I wish u like my next updates too.

Well sorrow is about the twist that I am gonna add in next chapter as dear now u too can feel that story seems to be ending on happy note so \i need to bring some twist to move on and keep it interesting in future as well 😊

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