IPKKND FF: WICM - Link for new thread Page149 - Page 7

Hey aashifa after seeing ur PM was so excited that u updated the FF
So me commenting from my phone so excuse my mistakes

Is Payal playing negative here at least that is what I am deciphering
Loved Anjali talks with her memories
Khushi n Arnav wants to make their marriage work that's good
Loved it when he took hold of Khushi's hand
Understanding starting from here itself good good
And from her eyes only Arnav understands what she is feeling
Loved the way u portrayed everything
Continue soon and do PM me I added ur new id

Wowiiiee!! Do continue soon! So Payal's a Vamp here? And she's eyeing the hotwa Raizada Brother eh?? *wiggles eyebrows*

I loved the update. Omg!!! This is so different and I love it. I loved how you changed the characters of khushis family. I can't wait to read more. Please continue soon.

Originally posted by: saarah96

like the concept=]

wonder if payal is bad here?
update soon
and pm me if you can=]

Thank you!, well is she? 😉 Thank you! I shall 😃

Originally posted by: jd08

Love this new concept of Payal being bad do continue awaiting eagerly

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: oops-whoops

i loved the whole concept as i have said earlier and this part was beautiful specialy where he holded her hand but yes i m confeused bcoz of the suspense and y khushi's sis lied but i knw it will get cleared with time...if you could just give character sketch.

Thank you! 😃 Aww thank you! 😃 well all will get cleared 😉 Sure I would love to! 😃

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Oh I am so glad you did not make it the usual ruthless ASR playing with Khushi's innocence yada yada! There are too many (some of them actually good) of those around here. Aww thank you 😃 yeah actually some of them are good! 😃 😆

I loved the different interactions - first with Anjali and her memories (?) of why Arnav wanted this marriage and then Khushi with her family and finally Arnav and Khushi's...very interesting and well put. Thank you! 😃

I loved how Arnav and Khushi seem to not be averse to eachother but actually want to make it work (at least Khushi's line - She wasn't going to get tangled in weeds again, she was going to leave and make a life with her husband) makes me believe so and the fact that Arnav sought to comfort her makes me believe that he too shall try and make it work. Yeah, as much as I like the tension I find it boring as well. So I want them to work at it 😃

Payal's character is negative/grey...interesting but both ArHi seem to know that, so even more interesting at how it plays out... Well lets see 😉

All in all great job! Update soon and do PM me. I have added your PM account. :) Thnak you! 😃

Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-

This is brilliant as usual Aashifa! Grrr girl your making me hooked to it!😆 LOOL! thank you 😃

Wow. Payal as a egative character? Kya baat hai!? Im loving it, Lets see how this turns out, and buaji happy, You have GOT to be kidding me!😭 yes, yes she is 😆 😃 I know, but it will all enfold. I hope 😆

Awww Arnav is such a cutey, Glad he's feeling proud of his wife already😳 And awww Khushi is so strong! Loving it, Awww so sweet<3 Thank you! 😃 yeah

Please please PLEASE update soon, I love this!😃 I will 😆

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

Khushi's Bua Is Disgusting :X Why Is Payal Negative ?! ; O Hope Their Marriage Works Out 😳

She is! 😡 Well lets see shall we 😉

Thank you for reading it 😃

Originally posted by: meradil

so payal is bad and akash is miserable, and arnav is kind?

Well lets see 😉

Originally posted by: sini1234

Okay.. Payal it seem in not a nice person and Arnav is not a total Jerk in this FF and he seem to like khushi . And khushi was sold ??? ok now I am intrigued . 👍🏼 Nice beginning .👏

Well not sold literally, but you get the jist no? 😃 Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: -Chinu-

Really loved the part ..Payal is Negative and ASR is a cute character ..Can we have a character sketch for more analyses of the Characters

Continue soon ...

Thank you! I shall put up a character sketch now! 😆 😃

I shall 😃

Originally posted by: yusam

I SUPERLIKED THE UPDATE... AWESOMEE... PLS ADD ME IN UR PM LIST, WHICH U MENTIONED ABOVE... :)

Thank you! I have 😃

Originally posted by: -Mayuri-

Awesome!

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: kyunki_iloveu

i luv this concept...a bad payal...hope asr teaches her a lesson :)

Thank you! 😃 well we shall see who teaches who? 😉

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh

nice start but payal is baddie here? really?

thats first! loking forward to this story

Thank you! 😃

Now here we have something different. Just read the prolouge and first part. They are damn Good. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: nina282

wow! payal sounds interesting. can't wait for the next update!

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: SankaDevi20

Oh gosh, Aashifa, this sounds veeerrry interesting! As soon as I read SOLD, I was like OH heeell no? But, unfortunately, it was true. And then Payal.. seems to be the dark one here, bad mouthing her sis, looking at Arnav of all people and that while being married to Akaash? Buaji being happy. I like how they both find comfort in eachother when they dont know eachother that well. And him being handsome and her being looovely, I kind of see it.. yeah :P I see it! Lovely concept youve brought here! Im a sucker for these new lines that we dont see on the show! PM me next time!! Dont forget, otherwise!!! Ill be like a sherni!! And you knw how we shernis are.. we;re kind of mean.. :P Unless you have a lollipop ( Im not bribable!!.. well, sometimes!! :D) PM ME! :D Lovesyaaxoxo

She is! 😃 Thank you 😃 Well Arnav bitwa is quite hotwa 😆😳 Thank you! 😃 Aww thank you! 😃 I will ! 😃 don't raww! 😆 I have no lollipops! how about gulabjamun? 😳 Love yaa more! 😃

Originally posted by: MrsRaizada101

OMG u r too cruel leaving us at a cliffhanger. why would her sis do that? and aww arnav is comforting her! loved the update😆

hahahha! 😆 I know right? why would she! 😡 😆 yes thank you 😃

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

simply superb.loved it

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: spongebobchick

Really like the whole concept!!! And a fighting Khushi, she had her head held high even when she left her family!! I wonder what the deal with the Payal is??? Could she be an evil stepsister???? Loved the comforting Arnav - really sweet!

Thank you! 😃 she needs to be! 😃 well read to find out 😉 Could she? 😉 thank you 😃

Originally posted by: SNR7

Real nice - and a very interest arising concept! Payal (I assume is the sister) being a proper 'dayan' is very unusual and surprising...poor Aakash, especially since he is still his nice self as portrayed on the show or is he (like u said he is also hiding something...hmmm)

Arnav as usual only regrets after he has taken the steps he should have thought about before letting his dominating short temper lead him...Khushi a fighter...but together they find peace/comfort...I just have one small request...tell me more😉...

Thank you! 😃 She is yes 😉 Arnie is going to be like that 😆 Thank you! 😆 I will I promise 😆

Originally posted by: rosebal2004

love it, please write more

Thank you! I will 😃

Originally posted by: Doc_Manaal

hey dear very nice concept.. pls pm me further updates..

Thank you! 😃 I shall! 😆

Originally posted by: -Stutz-

Lovely update casper!! *hugz*
When u updating thrill btw??

Coming to this update, i first thought asr wud be khadoos...but im more than glad to know he isnt.. I loved the way khushi didnt cry..she shudnt too..
Loved the update..
Add me to ur account

Thank you! 😃 😆 I will update that, don't worry! 😃 well he is still but khush khush gfets to him 😉 Thank you! 😃 I have 😆

Originally posted by: Aparajita267

Interesting concept.

Pls pm me when you update next😊

Thank you! I will 😆 😃

Originally posted by: bookadict303

Continue sooon :)

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: Electric_BuBBle

This was amazin', I loved it! Please please continue soon :)

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: Poonam786

This is an interesting concept.. Very nicely written. Please could you add met to the PM list.. Would love to read more. Thanks.. :)

Thank you! I will 😆 😃

Originally posted by: mjikm1219

Awesome update dear! Continue soon!

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: malluangel

...why do i feel like her sister isnt payal :\
idk i just always imagine her as soft u kno?

well who knows, but i like it!
arnav already realizes that theres an innocence to her but maturity as well

Well I'm sorry to say she is 😆, I know! but she doesn't have a spine either and that pees me off, so I have made her a vamp 😡 😆 Thank you! He has 😉 😃

Originally posted by: rukuswasthika

intresting.continue soon

Thank you! 😃