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Cyberpsychooo

@Cyberpsychooo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

i dont read OS often, but this was worth! wow...

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Omg that was so hot passionate

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AshM

@AshM

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Thank you all for reading. This was my first OS so please be kind😊Am sure this will be closed soon by mods, so i thought I'd sneak in another update and see what happens.

Update coming shortly!!!

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Aarass

@Aarass

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

wow that was hot and passionate! Great...pm me dude, would love to read more from you :)

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

I like how you shaped the whole scenario! Well written!

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naveena

@naveena_arhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

too hot for me not really good job

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@MaleehaSuhail

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

OMFG !!! ☺️ HOT!. We have some seriously good writers in this forum! Please continue Love it!

What are you people doing to my innocent mind! 😲😆

Edited by -Delena-ArHi- - 13 years ago

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mankhush

@mankhush

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

thought u updated on pg 5 did not see anything..

very good os

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nagina

@jeb1

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Fabolous part loved it

when you update pm me pls

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Great writing - so well expressed their feeling..

So Arnav realised that Shyam had bluffed him, the mighty ASR and he had tortured Khushi.

Please continue and PM me.

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