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tata_tata

@tata_tata

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Hellooo.. didnt u say u have a job!!! HOW do you find the time to write an FF (which i love btw) and multiple OSes (again, very cute..) i sure do hope your "job" has something to do with writing.. because u have a gift!!!!! Use it well :)

but awww... isnt this Khushi smitten!!! 10-things-i-hate-about-u lists are never really about things you hate are they.. love it!!!!

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RASMI

@-carpediem-

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Loved it.how i wish to see this in d show...

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

interesting and so doable in the show...

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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

u pictured it really well...khusi still lost in her thoughts...

she really needs a **WAKE UP** call...

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Beautiful... I loved the whole realization of Khushi of all that had happened in the past 😃

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

ahh sweet .. really good :) x

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polly_mk

@polly_mk

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

LOVED LOVED LOVED it!!!!!! So well written. Love the idea!! The last part was the best. She does not actually feel bad about being married to him. She does not care how he married her. Oh gosh... reading this OS has put my in such a romatic mood. Beautifully written... it was all so Khushi!!

I wish the CVs use this idea to show Khushi reevaluating her feelings for Arnav!! She knows all this deep down, but is in denial since she thinks of him as her enemy right now. You have captured a major essense of the lovely show here. If Arnav's POV pains our hearts, then Khushi's POV always manages to soothe the pain.

Edited by polly2312 - 13 years ago

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Neha

@melovemayur

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

One hell of a piece man!! So good!!

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: tata_tata
Hellooo.. didnt u say u have a job!!! HOW do you find the time to write an FF (which i love btw) and multiple OSes (again, very cute..) i sure do hope your "job" has something to do with writing.. because u have a gift!!!!! Use it well :)

but awww... isnt this Khushi smitten!!! 10-things-i-hate-about-u lists are never really about things you hate are they.. love it!!!!

Don't remind me about that please! I have deadlines to finish and all I can think about are Arnav and Khushi.

Thanks for the kind words. Glad you liked the os and the ff
😊

Edited by meera30 - 13 years ago

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Sana

@-s.a.n.a-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Wonderful!! The title reminds me of a Agatha Christie novel.. But its way way altogether different from that.. This was spectacular.. Khushi's thoughts.. too good.. making a point and finding another point entirely opposite to it.. Loved it :D

You write really well, If possible could you please pm me for your future works :)

Edited by -s.a.n.a- - 13 years ago