Destiny, Fate & Love Thread 1. Chapter 1 - 42. - Page 58

Originally posted by: rubinahansa

Superb

Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21

Loved the update , as long as you update I don't care if it's short or long :) it was mind-blowing
Maneet :
Wah what a scene maan laughing at soni and soni giving him a glare ... I love it how she starts talking to babaji ( I can just imagine her staring at the sky and pouting) and maan teasing her at the table and that too infron of everyone ( so she prefers maan holding her hand under the table rather then in front of everyone ) gotta say that dev is one hilarious character ( he lives in the same housE but doesn't even know whAts going on in th. House . Loved how is like lagta hai kE bhai ko bhabhi se pyar ho Gaya hai hah couldn't stop laughing at that and then maan worrying about her :) one my favorite lines of the day :NT looked upwards. Hey Geet ke Babaji, yeh kis Tubelight se paala pada hai! It made my day :)
Arhi : Arnav ka hisab baraber karne laga hai :)
OMG he kissed her twice on the cheek ( that was just too cute and awesome) Nd the color liking
I'm just like Khushi I love green color , red I'd my favourite color but it doesn't suit me that much so I mostly wear green )
So Khushi fell and by just looking at her walking with the limp he picked her up and took her to the clinic awe!!! And him telling her he can't love without her and that holds a very special place in his life :) even Khushi was like that Arnav holds a very special place in her life :)
Btw ; haha I have tried making my brother cry but nothing happens at all even with the onions because they had worked At subway so obviously they cut onions there so theyre used to them , but whenever they want to cut an onion they call me
And I'm crying like hell as if meri bidaai ho rahi hai or main apne mummy papa ko chor ke ga rahi hoon ( my mom calls me Drama queen for two reason because I watch a lot of dramas and second I do a lot nautanki )
Thanks for the pm and do continue soon <3

Thank you for the review!

You loved the first Maaneet Scene! So happy to hear that!

Yes, Soni prefers Maan holding her hand where no one would see them!

Yes, Dev is going to be the comic side kick to a serious hero.

Arre! Serious scenes mein thoda comedy chaahiye!

The Dev NT scene came up when I wrote NT first. I was itching to write that scene! Finally got the chance!

You love green and red! Have to remember that!

Yes, finally indirectly Arnav told Khushi his dil ki baat by saying he cant live without her, par Khushi samjhe tab na!

What! Onions do not work on your brothers! Tie them up and show them Kal Ho Na Ho or Taare Zameen Par! Let's see how they don't cry! He He He!

Hey, Even I am known as a drama queen, not because I cry but if something wrong happens, I panic and over react by either screaming or getting angry! Worse is when due to worry and over imaginative brain I jump into wrong conclusions! Nowadays I am better I panic for few seconds but calm down but till last year I was a total drama queen!

Thanks once again for the awesome review!

Originally posted by: chavvi16

Wow that was a quick update in just two hours it takes me half an hour to write comments on your ff and you do it so quick am impressed with your speed
Okay this will be bit short as doing it from my phone
Oh man isn't Geet too funny talking to babaji was normal but saying that white shirt par ban even I wouldn't have thought it possible but then this is Geet and when she said handsome lagne ka haq kissne diya it was too much
Geet did you forget you asked babaji to help you fall in live with maan well thats wat he is doing so how can he help you to get away from him
Dev what planet do you live in dear that you know nothing of what's going on in your house man. NT is so right kiss tubelight se pala pada hai
Wow arnav we have started with hisaab barabar with Khushi huh shame she ran away well that was bound to happen
So both the boys are smirking in their case that happens when their wives are getting affected with their presence meaning they are so getting towards the target if making them fall for them good
Do Geet would like maan to hold her hands under the table not over it okay hope maan doesn't find out or he us definitely do that
Geet don't worry this is just start of maans besharmi infront and near you he is bound to get bolder with passing time hope you are ready
Wow they both can't see the girls in any kind of pain and hurt because it hurts them too so sweet
It's good to know that Khushi has at least acknowledged that arnav is an important part of her life just like its for arnav cool at least this happened
Actually arnav you are right don't scare her by telling her how you really feel for her or it will be bye bye Khushi
The colour conversation was interesting between arhi it shows how their perspectives towards life
Is the song for next update thoda sa pyaar hua hai thirst hai baaki
See ya Thursday
Cheers for pm

Thanks for the awesome review!

Regarding my quick update, actually I don't know how I typed a whole chapter in that small time! Maybe, your awesome reviews motivated me or maybe I knew you guys are waiting for my next chapter! Don't know!

I always loved Geet's constant talking to God; because that's something I do too but unlike Geet I make sure there is no one watching me when I do that!

God ka pata nahi, but Kalpana is sure helping Geet fall in love with Maan. He He He!

Wasn't Dev funny? Even now I am laughing at that scene!

Khushi ran away because she knew if she stood there Arnav would have retaliated with a kiss. He He He!

Yes, both boys are winning their lady love's heart!

Oh God, if Maan came to know what Soni thought about hand holding, he is going to have damn fun!

Maan will keep on going more and more besharam as time goes on!

Yes, Khushi acknowledged Arnav's importance in her life, soon she will realize her love for him!

Yes, the reason I put the color conversation it was to show them their perspective towards life! While Arnav sees negativity, Khushi is positive! At least someone understood the symbolism!

I hope you liked the next update!

See you on Tuesday!

Thanks once again for awesome review!

Originally posted by: spvd

part 33
awesome part...
liked it so much...
Maan Geet
hai kitna lovely tha...
OMG Geet is really such a cutie pie...
her cribbing was too funny and the scene fantastic...
she making the angry young man Maan to be so adorable, laughing and enjoying and falling in love more...
Maan and his teasings...
cant believe it...
and Geet tho sharam se pani pani...
did Dev and NT really have a love marriage?
Dev is a first class tubelight with a capital T...
how did NT fall in love with this dumb idiot?
poor her...
usse tho sirf khana se matlab hai...

Arnav Khushi
seriously is Arnav an idiot of the first class?
itna unromantic guy hai yaar yeh i mean not in the ways to imagine, hallucinate, dream and all but in the description of the color red...
gadha kahin ka...
aww he kissed her twice...
so sweet...
the guys are hopelessly in love...
seeing her hurt made the THE Arnav Singh Raizada like this...
the guys are in the verge of breaking when they see their lady loves hurt...
they are making me to fall in love with both of them...
the small small gestures and ministrations are so lovely and adorable...
cont soon dear...

PS - small part hai since u were busy letting it go but need a long part next time...and as for the previous comments' reply, no bloopers or loopholes dear...the story is going at its best pace...dunno how Arnav was in the show, seeing the show only from the past 2 or 3 months...i check for the updates everytime dear so mostly read from mobile at night...its makes me to relax and enjoy and make my mood happy...wow so have been telling stories or as u have mentioned...thats so nice...u know what i find ur this writing in all possible ways...romantic, sweet, passionate, dreamy, beautiful and most importantly funny at many places...sweet and simple yet so beautiful...

Thanks for the superb review!

I am so happy that you loved the hose pipe Maaneet scene!

Yes, Geet is answer to Maan's loneliness and seriousness!

Yes, Dev and NT had a love marriage! I can understand why you asked that!

Dev is very smart but very dumb when it comes to love matters! Well all men are dumb when it comes to love matters!

Arnav: idiot of first class! This is the first time I heard this for Arnav. Nice phrase! Loved it!

Actually the reason I showed the color convo between Arhi was because I wanted to show their beliefs and mentality. I mean Arnav is a negative fellow and Khushi is a positive person, that's what I wanted to show here. This convo is also important as it will come into play after the twist.

Yes, weren't the boys sweet in their scenes?

Thanks once again for the superb review!

Hope you liked the next update!

P.S. Thanks for checking and telling me about the loopholes! I am happy to hear that! Do notify if you find something wrong okay! Would really appreciate that!

You are watching IPKKND only from 2-3 months! Have you seen the before marriage scenes? Arnav was in his naughtiest and flirty avatar. That side of his is focused more in my FF.

I know how relaxing it is to read at night from mobile in the bed, even I do that and it is really peaceful!

Thanks for the compliments for my FF! I appreciate that!

Originally posted by: gilmore

llike always wonderful hahhaha i like how ASR is doing it to make KKG fall in love nowonly she should realize ot and GH and maan also beautuiful the falling scene was super hahah she is little in love and i hope soon full in love with MSK

Originally posted by: kethgowthami

lovely and fantastic...the description of colours is super fantastic...thanks for pm

Originally posted by: kvarsha

awesome updateee...

loved ittt..

so both men started their mission and halfly suceess with out knwoing to themm😆😆😆...

i loved both of them blushingg😆😆😆...

update soon ...

thnx 4 pm😆😆

Originally posted by: sushna

wow... awesome

loved it...

thanx for pm😃

Originally posted by: -Siaa-

The best thing is I love the way both the stories grow in parallel.

Soni on that swing early in the morning enjoying nature just tells how a simpleton she is and her purity. Mann wants to join her..Aww!! And the way he tells her to rest leaving no room for argument, carrying her back to the room 😍 Wonderfully explained!!

Coming to Arnav, boy he's fallen hard for her. One look at her injured knee and his heart races. He took her to the doctor and the finality and authority along with his love makes him even more adorable and again eaves no room for argument.

They can resist anything but will never be able to see their lady in pain and distress. Ain't that what love is all about. The other is hurt but you'll have more pain than the other!!!

Loved reading it!!

Hmmm..the song for Khushi might be 'Mein Pareshaan' from Ishqzaade. That's the only song I was reminded when I read the word 'worries'. As for soni I'm mostly sure it's 'Aadha Ishq' from Band Baaja Baarat' :D

Thanks for the wonderful review! Loved it.

Wow! You like the parallel growth of the story! I was scared when I started this FF because the parallel stories might have confused the readers but I am glad that you like it!

Yes, Soni appreciating the nature was written to show her pure heart and sweet nature.

Maan is really sweet, isn't he?

Arnav is mad for Khushi, isn't he?

Yes, just one scratch on Khushi and he goes freako on her! He He He!

You are right, Maan and Arnav can bear anything but not their lady love's pain.

Congrats for being bang on about the songs! You won twice already. Cool! Lets see if you can crack the next clue! He He He!

Thanks once again for the wonderful review!

Originally posted by: spvd

its ok dear...we will wait...sigh...