IPPKND SS:The Love Story on Page 3 (COMPLETED)

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#451

I loved the update! I like this screenplay style. It's different. Thanks for the update and PM!

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#452

wow that was so interesting and amazing

i love how he gave her clear answers and so did she

and woah getting it on in front of everyone nice!!!!

and hmm page 3, i wonder if Shyam is doing all this

aww the way he's assuring her and taking care of her is cute

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#453

The update was just perfect!! I loved it!!

The bit with Arnav's hand written english letters which Khushi couldnt read and Khushi's comment on his hand writing was HILARIOUS!!

Thanks for the pm!

Please continue soon!!

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#454

LOL loved the last line. this was a fantastic update the way he answered her honestly and the way she talked to him and then their kiss! LOVED IT 😆

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#455

I loved the update!! I am so happy Khushi is staying. I just loved how Arnav's mood changed in 5 mins, from yelling at akash to softly speaking to Khushi. I think Arnav didn't talk this much in the whole show till now. It was amazing and I can't wait for the next part. Please continue soon.

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Mrs.Varun Dhawan <3

@-chamkilli-

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#456

haha i am so lovin and enjoying this story

amazing update

so cute when arnav was yelling at akash one moment

and the other second he is sweet talking w/ khushi and calling her jaan and stuff haha hilarious

do continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#457

I was SO in the need of a happy ending today and you delivered.

When I read this bit, I sighed out loud--like proper sigh that made my bosom lift and all:

And I think that truly, that would be it for me. I don't think I could survive watching you leave again.

"The long fingers stroking the pulse that hammered in her throat."

That's genius.

I want to be mauled like that!

Just beautiful scene. And, Khushi's questions were so perfect--it is precisely what a woman would want to know. "Er...is this Lisa chick beautiful with long legs?"

I think the screenplay technique works. We are so familiar with these characters that at this point descriptive prose is not always essential. And, I think the punchy style of dialogue only created an energy to the scene. Description may have slowed it down.

I'm inspired by this--you may see me use this on About Last Night. (consider yourself warned!)

😉

Edited by Inked - 13 years ago

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Electric_BuBBle

@Electric_BuBBle

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#458

I loved it :) 😳

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#459

loved the updates...A's take charge attitude, wah wah!

K is so strong...but can only think thru her heart! When he said he loves her, she took all in & just gave herself to him!

let's see what Anji comes up with in meeting...

-Sona

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KSG_luv

@KSG_luv

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#460

Omg they made up!! THIS WAS THE BEST PART EVER!! ROCKING DIALOGUES!! Aww jealous Arnav is super cute!! The way he said MY wife!! Damn I wished to be in Khushis place in this series lol!! Love you sooo damn much for thus such amazing peice of writing and thanx for updating everyday!!! Tht really makes My day when I read your updates!! Have this page bookmarked nd I check everyday for an update!! Loved the part!! Damn I have to go back and read it over wain!! You honestly don't know hw excited and how hype I look after reading ur story!!!