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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
hey it was reeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy awesome do continue soon cant wait for the next part its really good πŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52

RECAP:N comes to know about kunal's first love.

Meanwhile in U.K.

Shakira is given an assignment to make an assignment on Mumabai as it is one of the world's best cities

There is a news: she is coming to India and she'll stay in sehgal house as her and kunal's family are friends

Next day,shakira and her bro Rahman come to sehgal house.

Shakira's bro is a psychologist and counseller

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Nimmo and Rehman on the terrace of the sehgal house.

Rehmaan is giving nimmo a BIGGGG lecture on luv but strangely she is listening without feeling bored.

Nimmo: tell me about luv...i meeen how does it feel wen ur in luv?? and how do i know am in luv?? and sorta

Rehman: when u luv sumbody,u think of his/her happiness before ur own happiness.

Nimmo now knows what she has to do and knows what her next step has to be.

N goes to shakira's room

Asks her: I know about ur and kunal's relationship.

S; wat??

asks her abt it. at first she is tight lipped but later she tells her everything about kunal and her relationship and also tells her that she still has a soft corner for him

N: then wat??????? why did u ditch him?

S: There was nobody here in India to handle the sehgal business. K had to go to india....so i let him go and made him feel as though i ditched him

N:Why??

S: becoz wen u luv someone u think of his happiness before ur own

N: do u still LOVE him??

S: is silent

N: oh open ur bloody damned mouth

S:yes

N: thinks : when u love sum1 u think of his happineess before urself

Precap:N asks K about shakira and his relationship

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Posted: 19 years ago
#53

wow, nice,well i think tht this time dadi ,pam and all critics will also try to fix Kunal with Natassha but he will come closer to Nimmo instead, though i think tht ur fan fic can come true, so chand dear plz send Natashha oopsse Shakira for a long break at Jhumri taliya or wht u say send her tadipar............anyways loved ur fan fic and am eagerly waiting for the next part continue soon u guys do have a amazing talent, which i am deprived off

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Edited by sweet_shagun - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: sweet_shagun

wow, nice,well i think tht this time dadi ,pam and all critics will also try to fix Kunal with Natassha but he will come closer to Nimmo instead, though i think tht ur fan fic can come true, so chand dear plz send Natashha oopsse Shakira for a long break at Jhumri taliya or wht u say send her tadipar............anyways loved ur fan fic and am eagerly waiting for the next part continue soon u guys do have a amazing talent, which i am deprived off

diiiiiiiiiiiiii u r extremely talented.............i meeeeeeeeeeen i cant write such wonderful updates.u know

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Posted: 19 years ago
#55

guyyyyyyyys am going away for 10 days tomoorow so its ma last day on if and next ill be here only on 20 june so ill write up and finish ma whole fanfic today itself................
Recap: nim decides to bring shakira and kunal close to each other

The story continues:

N-K are forced to go to the bungalow in Juhu.

They live there with fun and as friends.

they fight like kids and at tyms compliment each other....😳

nimoo decides sumthing in her head(finally)

goes to k's room

asks him about shakira and his realtion

he is unwilling at first and later tells her evrything

at the ned of the talk kunu tells her he still likes her

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Now one day nim falls aleep on kunu's bed while kunu is away at work.

K comes back and sees her sleeping. Covers her with a bedsheet. Kisses her on the forehead.

he is going to the other room but suddenly changes his minds and sleeps on the sofa in the bedroom.

Keeps looking at Nimmo continuosly.

Thinks:"sleeping angel"

N turns and twists on the bed as it is hot

Now this time she turns a bit oo much and is about to fall. K runs towards her and catches her in his arms. Puts her back on the bed and goes to sleep on the sofa.

N again falls on the floor and goes, walks towards the sofa and sleeps on it thinking it is the bed.(she is sooooooooooo sleppy)

K finds sumthing in his arms and holds it tight..........thinking it is a pillow.

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Moring: N-K wake up.

K: u here??? U sleeping in my ams?

N-No it is not your fault. its ok

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NEXT PART

Recap: n k fall asleep on the sofa in each other's arms.

te story continues::

N takes a bath & comes out of the bathroom and comes out fully wet dressed in a short sleeveles white dress.

(k's cousins forced her to wear it)

N turns around and her wet hair hits k's face,whom she thought is not there.................

coz they were down for breakfast just a few minutes back.

K: shes got soft hair

K is now starting to think of nimmo wherever he goes............thinks of her eyes,her smile,her clumsiness,her way of talking..........everything!

He thinks hes lucky that she is his wife(oooooooh u bet u r babes)

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NEXT PART

recap: kunu's falling

kunu and nims go to a park. K sees paras,the bro of his ex gf

tells nim: save me pleeese

N: ull have to gimme wat i want'K: wat

N: a promise

K: wat do u wnat

N: ill tell later

K: ok but now heeeeeeeelp

N goes to paras.

tells him she is his wife and k is not interested in his past anymore.

makes an excuse and takes him home

N in their room

N: nowww about my promise

K: wat do u want

N: take shakira out for dinner

K: wat?

I meeen Wat will ppl think

N: go I have this Video camera phone I'll be watching you so don't you try to act smart with me

K; ok as u say

K- S go for dinner

Afetr the dinner is over, S hugs him as to say thanks

K: hugs her back but does not like the touch of any other girl than nimmo(😳)

K-S comes back

N-K have a talk and N tells him that she got to go to her place

N goes to Mathuria house

At night Kunal dreams of his moments spent with nimmo

The scenes come back flashing to him.

Their first meeting on the beach…………their wedding night…………………..the moments when she helped him…………….their hugs (there's a full stop here)

K; that's it I don't wanna see more

NEXT PART

S-K go for still more dates while nimo is still at mathuria house(1 week looks soooooooo long man)

S's feelings for kunal becomes deeper and deeper but kunal is getting far from her……………..he does not like her hug,touch anything

But confused as he is…he is unable to say anything to get rid of her

Meanwhile N feels it difficult to liv without K and misses his (

so called boring) company A LOT!!! And does not understand why she feels like this

She dreams of him and misses him as a friend

K finally realizes wat he wants and tells shakira to go out of his life and leave him alone

S: why are u doing this?

K: Because I luv only nimmo

S: u cheater! U cheating me again!

K calls nimmo

K: wen r u coming

N: two days later

K: kya tum mere saath coffe peena chahogi?

N: sure par kahan?

K: gives the address of the restaurant he is in

They are in the restaurant

K: I ditched shakira

N: wt

K: yes

N: Y

K: I don't know I just cant stand her touching me

N: Oh remember our contract?? We r free to live our own life and I was trying soooo hard to bring u close

K: it was u??

K goes away to his room

It was she?? And I thought she luvs me! No man she dus not luv me…………how foolish of me to leave shakira for her?

K goes to his old pal. Shayan's house and cries with his head on Shayan's shoulder

Meanwhile

N has cum in touch with vik agen.

They meet in a caf

At that point of time, K reaches the caf and sees them together

K: so she luvs him, not me

Then V-K hug and V kisses N on the cheek

N is all smiles

Then K's doubts are all cleared

So she dus not luv me for sure

NEXT PART

Recap: k ditches S and sees N and V together and repents his decision

N is back

K: so u were cheating on me all this while

N: Wat cheating……….wat do u mean by cheating

K: u flirting wid another guy?

N: read the papers agen…………….were free to do wat we wanna

And we r not Real hubby-wife

K: oh wat did I say to her?

Wakes up and says thank god I was only dreaming

No no ill not tell her that I love her or shell think I broke the contract

N cums back

Shakira on the other hand finds a rockstar guy and dates him and finds that HE is his real luv and not Kunal…………………….and knows K was not cheating on her……….both on them were just passing through the same state of infactuation and both have found their true love and thanx god

Phones kunal and says sorry to him. Tells her she found her true luv

K in his head But now wats the use of it

Meanwhile K goes to his room and sees V-N hugging

V: Shaadi ke bare me kya socha hai??

N blushes

K is all sad

Next part

K shouts at n: u are married…….u have not yet taken divocre yet and u marrying again?

N is sooooooo sad she leaves for delhi

K calls vik: wat! U r marrying nimmo?

V: yeah am marrying but not nimmo

N: he does not luv me……………………….otherwise he wud hav understood my feelings

K: Maybe she luvs me

After 2 months K sees a gal and is walking behind her

She turns sround and he see it is………………………………

Our own nimmo!

She had sindoor in her maang

K: how r u

K:u married?

N; yeah

K: who

N: secret

K: y did u go away leaving me

N: secret

K: u know wat

K: wat

K: in these three months I realized that if I love someone it is you

N: wat? I know it is another prank of yours

Goes away crying

K: I will not repeat my mistake again

Stops her. Hugs her. Don't go away……..if u go am gonna die

I seriously love you. I am not gonna repeat my mistake again

I love you

Tell me who u t married to

N: u……………who else??

K: Tell me who u love

N: u…………….who else?

K: I cant believe that its YOU who is saying all this

N: don't stop me

Ur luv has changed me completely………u changed my life……my attitude everything

N-K go to their house and tear away the contract papers

N-K go to a church and marry in Christian Ishtyle

And the cute couple kisses and thus ends my fanfic

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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
awwwwwwww such a sweet fanfic luved it πŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
sooooooooooooooo sweet.
waiting 4 ur next fic.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
chand babes ur a genius, i loved it, socho agar aisa hi show main ho jaaye toh, i would be jumping with joy and celebrating, miss u for the 10 days, and u knw wht i m gonna save ur fan fic, and will b waiting for the next fan fic u write loved ur fan fiction dear

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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
thanx shagundi.i lu ya and ill miss ya too
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Posted: 19 years ago
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japneet and devanshi di and kavita ill miss ya too....

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