OS: Burning in your Love (Part 2 & 3 Links)

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-daffodils-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

no words...how lively...each words and sentences has life...all their feelings are so adorable...i feel very bad for arnav...only bcoz i luvd him more than khushi...

even though the os has an emotional background...the last promise...that arnav will provide khushi a proper suhaagraat...delivered me the whole pleasure...the pleasure of eternity...

while reading that sentence me too was blushed along with Khushi...

I luved this OS...

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Hi!

Loved it! You know, I always wondered what would happen when he finally confesses his love to her. Yes, she loves him in part because of his love for his sister, but how would Khushi handle Arnav always putting his Di in front of her. You handled it pretty well.😊

Thanks for the pm! Is this the end? Or are you going to write the wedding rituals and so on?

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flora_arhi

@flora_arhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

nice update pls do conitnue soon

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700983

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

wow wow wow wow

LOVED IT SOOO MUCH DEAR 😃

it was very well written n loved every single word 😊

do continue soon as i really want 2 know what happens next

thnks 4 the pm

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zafi

@zafi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Superb update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Loved it. Aww, so nice and sweet.

Khushi is going to get all the love and happiness that she deserves.

Thanks.😃

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Ginaginny

@Ginaginny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Beautiful.! You certainly have the talent of wording heart's feelings.

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Manal

@...manal...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

My god !!!! This entire OS was BEAUTIFUL !
You described their emotions so beautifully, it made me cry !!!!!
Thank you for such a wonderful piece of work !
And I really wish this actually happens in the show !