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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#581

Great update loved how they had twins and it was cute how he put the babies together and they both seemed happier. I can't stand Shyam hope Arnav can save her or get to her before Shyam does.

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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#582

luved it

wonderful update

especially the way arnav was comforting khushi and khushi's labour pains and still managed to have their passionate scenes.

looking forward to the next update to seeing baby arhi.

thx a lot for the pm

continue soon

sorry for the the late reply

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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#583

luved it

wonderful update

finally the babies have arrived and luved the way arnav was comforting khushi and their babies are so cute.

lookng forward to seeing wat that creep shyam does and i think you should name the boy: aarav and the girl: arshi.

thx a lot for the pm

continue soon

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namedx

@namedx

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#584

That was beautifully written!!! Brilliant update and so heart warming with the birth of the twins!!

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Sowmya Ramachandran

@sowms1395

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#585

I was gonna suggest Arya for the girl too. Arsh for the boy

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#586

Oh god!!! They hv twins! M so xcited! So happy!!! First tym m reading in so much elaboration d process of gvng birth..ya,there r othr details..bt still its d most elaborate one i've read till nw..n i loved it..so touching!!!
bt creep's back..oh god,no..pls no😔
Boy--kshitij(horizon)
Girl--aashi(smile)
sorry for nt being able to comment on chap 10..was hvng some serious net prblms😕

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-zozo-

@-zozo-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#587

OMG loved both the updates!!!!!

so so so good!!!!

i'm seriously like sooo happy!!!

they're finally here YAYY!!!!!

i'm more excited than Arnav and Khushi ok maybe not to that extreme!!!!
i mean they are their parents!!!

O god Shayam and his evil deeds!!!

ASR go to your Khushi and hurry before time runs out!!!

i'm scared for her!!!

K so this is turning into a long comment!!

THANKS for the pm!!!!

PS:their daughter's name should be- Arshi because Arnav and Khushi,... you do the math, hehe and their son's name could be Aryan because i like the name, thats the best reasoning, i know hehe!!!

O my gad i'm so excited for them!!!!

PPS: give a huge hug from me to Khushi for giving birth to ASR's babies!!!!!

K now i'm done!!