FF: Destination Called Love *Chapter 7 on Page 69 - Page 45

Originally posted by: peppygeek

Damn. I wanted the 1st spot :(

There's always a next time!

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You are spoiling me Sobi and I love you for that. But I dont want to be the one to spoil u!!!!😳

I had butterflies in my stomach while reading the chapter. You definitely know the Mechanics of romance very well! 😉 I think so thats the only Mechanics I know these days!!!😆 Apni Engineering mechanics main bhool chuki hoon!!

The chapter started on such an nervous note with each of them scared to spoil the moment and their first time and it ended on a beautiful acceptance of each other completely.

The style of the scenes set in present and how it all came to be was an amazing concept. It was like they were remembering how it came to the moment.

I loved loved loved the chapter!

Looking forward to more and more :D

Thank you so much Priyanka!!
Your comment is really appreciated!!
Love you!!🤗

Originally posted by: Pearl_mystic

Whoa whoa whoa!

Girl - you have made me - well - I don't know what - but I'm feeling - hell I don't know what to call this feeling!!!!

I loved loved loved loved this chapter! The flashbacks and the present well so perfectly placed in between the other; it just added a beautiful impact to that beautiful scene between Arnav and Khushi!

I'm sooo in love with this chapter! Perfect!!!!

Originally posted by: ss374

Its ok Shruti.

Yes thats what I said...It is certainly Shrutified!!😆

Originally posted by: Shruti_P

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sobi sobi🤗🤗

big big jhappis for you

what an update

the love making was sensuous passionate and it was wild in some sense but not that wild

i hope you get what i mean to say bcoz i dont what i am saying😆 I understand what u r saying. I myself kept it this way. Its subtly sensuous!!!

the transition was smooth and the quotes you used ah beautiful

the update is just A.M.A.Z.I.N.G

i am totally in love with your new style of writing😳👏

and for someone who isnt so much interested in love stories you really write great Thats the second one I am getting today!!😆

the emotions of khushi the shyness, nervousness of a virgin bride is depicted beautifully

i so loved it

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment Shruti!!!

great work and plz plz plz update soon before my pestering starts🤣 I will try my best!!😳

Loads of Love

Shruti🤗

Love you too!!🤗