FF: Destination Called Love *Chapter 7 on Page 69

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@rubys07

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Wonderful update👏..n yea it takes tym for love n its alryt i guess👍🏼..thanks 4 the pm..waiting 4 ur next update😊

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

awesome updat4e...
continue soon...

thanks 4 d pm

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indy12

@indy12

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

hope to see them venture towards their destination soon in the next chapter 😳

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shivanie

@sweetvanie

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Beautiful Update ... Love the tour and stuff ... But ArHi seems like two people with less words spoken ... Was a Fab update and can't wait to read more ... Thanks for PM ... ' Do update soon ...

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DarkDove

@DarkDove

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

aah!! sister!! read chapter 1 and 2 in one go!!

I loved it!
Loved how chapter 1 started, with them in the plane and khushi observing arnav, but him silently observing her too!!

And omg! Manorma seems nice in this ss, I like it , i like it!

aah what an uncomfortable silence man!!! arnav! talk to her dude!

and chapter 2!

aaah you introduced the family to us! how sweet! and they live in london!? Cool!!

and arnav lives alone? aahh poor khushi!! the appartement seems like e very nice palce! you discribed it after all so well!!

Sister... i love your writing style! it's so calm and serene!!

i wodner when arnav will open up to her! btw, nice flashback!

aahh what will happen next!???

Love you!

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gauri khan

@arshisangel

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#146

I think dis part was quite gud and I agree wth u d fact tht it is gonna take sme time to hve romantic scenes as dey are not even comfortable wth each other yet so dnt worry u are doing a very good job and d storyline z going really well :) thx for d pm :)

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@--Sobi--

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: curiousbookworm
awesome ch! i love this initial awkwardness it makes arnav verrry endearing ; haha he got red at the mention of chote! is this the same asr from the show?!

Thank you so much!!
Yes...he will be the serious types...but not exactly that gray!!

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#148

lovely update...can just picturise the whole scene...

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@--Sobi--

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: farfar319
loving the concept.. excited to see how you go from this to what we read in chapter 1.. (that is the future right and chapter 2 starts the flashback? lol)

Thank you so much!!
The prologues which is on the first page...is something which will happen in the future...and the real story starts from chapter 1!!

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@--Sobi--

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: Shruti_P
Great update sobi as u said a kind of filler update but it was awesome
Btw the family doesn't stay in same apartment but they stay in same building na??
Update soonish m waiting

Thank you Shruti!!
No they dont even live in the same building!!😆