ArShi FF:Dreamgirl#1 {Chapter 1 to 7}

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

rituuu... awesome...

luv the concept... new and improved khushi i guess...

as for the title... AT FIRST SIGHT is good...

or wat about...A LOVE LIKE THIS... it struck my mind wen u described arnav n khushi's characters

waiting to read the update soon

~~~ sam

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pinderdd

@pinderdd

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

awesome intro, can't wait to read more:) and I would go for 'Dream girl'as the title, because she unique :)

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medha

@medha16

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

interesting...looking 4ward to a modern n improved khushi...continue soon!

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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

**The proposal**...perfectly suits the plot n sounds really good

female names you asked for:

simran akka simi

kajal

preity

cuming to the storyline...its refreshing,new,khusi being a brat it will be an absolute fun to read...frequents clashes b/w our hottie ASR n his going to be lady love,first sight crush khusi interesting...

bring it on...loved the concept!:D

u rock ritu !:D

a big hug from my side 🤗 continue soon plzz!

~anshika~

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serialmaniac

@serialmaniac

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

how does your title connect to ounar vivah????

anyway great start...stick to firstsight as title

pm me wen u continue😉

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

❤️❤️ritu darling...very nyc begining is superb...the FF titel in my opinion...it should be ''Peheli nazar mei pehela pyaar'' or ''love always wins'' its only a suggestion fr u nothing else...in ur option i like ''Dreamgirl''...plz continue n update regularly...cz fr ur update I everyday wait as like episodes of IPKKND...best of luck fr ur new FF...❤️❤️❤️