~ArHi FF: The trodden paths~ ch4 pg69 NEW--13/7))

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#401

oh my god such a beautiful update. arnav's words broke my heart. particularly

a hope died today. a hope of her coming back to him.

thanks for the pm

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Priyya

@Priyya0511

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#402

Pls update soon. It was really nice 😊

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#403

Khushi ran away from Arnav on Payal's suggestions!😲
I wish she hadn't listened to her sis just this once.
Loved the update and also liked the back story of how Khushi met Yash😊

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arooshi

@arooshee

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#404

ur all stories are superb

this one is no exception

superb story line

waiting for the next parts

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Soulmate27

@Soulmate27

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#405

OMG OMG what words...only you can those tender angsty painful sad thoughts in such soulful words...sigh...

Well...if they are meant to be together, they will be...but yes so much lost coz of foolish pride...but then again the love increases exponentially too...

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#406

beautifully narrated

sad that khushi is physically handicapped

thanks for the pm

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#407

MUahhh !!

Thaks so much for making this totally boring weekend of mine so amazing !!

I loved the update !! So Arnav is all full of guilt, and Payal helped Khushi run away ?? But I guess being more mature she did take the right decision, and hence Khushi met Yash ?? Phh pooor obviously she was scared meeting the married man !! They havent done her any goood !!

And then Jiya, just 3 yrs old and yet so mature... That was amazing to watch Jiya baby her father !! And Arnav giving his heart away to her !! I wonder why Mrs.Ahuja hasnt asked Khushi how she knows them...

Anjali and Khushi share a spl bond, their lives ruled by two men connecting them in a very strange way !! And thats why they understand their pains without speaking I suppose... And I guess Khushi is not gonna tell Arnav anything is she ? Atleast not now !! But I have a feeling she might tell Anjali, and maybe just maybe Anjali and Yash may fall for each other

And ohh Arnav met Yash !! And he thinks he is Khushi's hubby !! Well I think NO !!

Loved the update

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#408

oh my khushi not angry on arnav

but then 3 years have passed i think her anger has somewhat subsided

great part and as u said not jumping to conclusion abt this yash

and waiting for next update

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#409

OMG!! Awesome Update Lyraa!! =D Waiting to find out abt this yash =D

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#410

sorry for commenting so late... excellent update... oh I thought Yash was dead... don't know why I thought that though😕... loved the lines... it was so sad... girl you need to update faster... please

the only thought that ran around his mind was that she could have been his.. Should have been his..