~ArHi FF: The trodden paths~ ch4 pg69 NEW--13/7))

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priyah_reddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Excellent update as always 😊 Wow the suspense build up is just awesome 👏👏👏

How did Arnav and Khushi go their separate ways and how come she is someone else's daughter in law ... Well cant wait to read the next update 😊

Loved it !!!

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desisweetheart9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Thanks for the PM. Prologue and first part were amazing. Very nice and interesting.

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SunriseGreen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! Loved it!

Haiii, he has her diary </3 And omg they have a daughter :O She's so cute, though! I like that she's as stubborn as Arnav :3 The thought of them having a daughter is just so damn sweet. lol.

Can't wait for the next update!

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Oh Lyraa...another phenomenal story from you. I have missed your writing...but school is more important, so I have not complained. As for your warning of writing this just as your fingers typed it, without thinking too much on it...all I can say is that If I could write even 10 % of how this story is written, I would feel accomplished!! 😊 Looking forward to the next part!

--Nags

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sheks007

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

god ..i so felt like i was in that storm ...its beautiful...much awaiting further posts...hope u r doing well for your exams..tc and gd luck...

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icebraker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Lyraa as usual beautiful.While i was reading about the up coming cyclone i felt that i can see and feel the storm. I dont know who u do it but thats the beauty of ur writing. ?i am sure that this mother in law also gave Khushi and her daughter shelter when they needed. Any way looking forward for the next part.

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Piya dhaliwal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Aww really good update

Loved it

Aww he has her dairy !! Thats so cute :)

Thanks for the pm !

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

So I guess this is just a separation... Well unless you have planned something else for us to leave us open-mouthed for like eternity!

But this update was just fabulous! There are very rare instances when this girl here is left tongue-tied, and this update is one of them.. super job.. I just felt like I'm watching this happen in front of me rather than reading..

Supa-excited to know what happens next!

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-bansi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

Wonderful update..!!

Jiya is so cute n sweet here...

Aha Arnav saw Khushi...yayyy...!!

Eagerly waiting for the story to unfold...

Loved it..!!

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--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#180

Lyraa.. Is that you? U updated the FF? I'm shocked.. I was never expecting anything from you.. Point to be noted here.. Only till May 10 not later..! I might start my bugging after that!

I loved the start.. The way you take it is for sure making me feel terrified and sad!

The book - "100 days to irritate ASR" is used here properly! Nice

But Lyraa.. This was not much of angst as it usual to be! May be this is just a start.. U would intensify it as it progresses.. I know!

Thanks for the PM dear!