~ArHi FF: The trodden paths~ ch4 pg69 NEW--13/7))

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Amazing it brought tears into my eyes...Arnav's aching heart...and does mother in law mean Khushi has a present husband...nono!!!

Then our arnav will really have to work hard to gain back her love and trust

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pheonix24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

That was an awesome chapter...Cant wait to read the next one...😊.All the best for your exams..

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queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Aww what a cliffhanger - I loved reading this story! I love the premise of it - Khushi married to an Ahuja, their three year old, I'm so excited to read more!

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mjsheen43

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Nice Concept. Loved the new look... you know ur writing gives insightes of ur mind also. :) keep up the good work.

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ravenheart

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Lyraa, well written even if it is written in haste or frustration. I am in the same boat now a days - do not enjoy watching the episodes.

Edited by savi-tan - 13 years ago

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starzyasha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Oh wow!!!! cant wait 4 d next update!!! I do hope you can find time to update it sooon 😊

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Zania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

wow!!! tht was an amazing start👏

loved the whole concept & d wa u wrote it was beautiful as always :)

update soon & thanx for d pm.

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Uthra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Oh why did I read this when I know this wouldnt be updated in the near future? But I did because it was you.

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nims6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

loved it...different story...so they are seperated...jiya. their daughter...good one..

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arta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#130

oh god can't wait to read further not a good point to stop
so they have a daughter and she is married again , and he think that she is dead and destiny brought them face to face again after a long time ...
awesome