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Shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: -MadRaginiFan-

AWESOME Update again...i am in HarshIni dreamland😍 glad u liked!

Suhana seems a chatter box...& i really loved her dialogue :- it's ok...it's not a date or something that you can't leave...
TYPICAL Suhana wala dialogue🤣 haha cant hav her as a quiet person its hard to imagine Ragz quiet n intense...lol she's not an SP bahu who's shy to speak her mind

I also loved those little thoughts going in Ayaan's mind about Suhana like, is she getting bored with me?
aww sweetipie...how can someone get bored of ur company,Dr. Suhana is lucky😳 hehe well in coming parts u'll see his most predominant characteristics is the extreme care for ppl close to him

& heyy u added this Ayaan-Rohan chat later na? last time i lost the entire update remember wen i was tlking to u...didnt want that to happen so posted first half n then added second part to it
coz i didnt read this last night...now I cant ignore Rohan coz in the previous scene he was on the phone but here he is having a full-fledged scene wid Ayaan!😆 u cant ignore Rohan he will have many scenes with Suhana in coming parts!

I loved Rohan...he is a pakka waala friend to Ayaan😳 he's hardly done anything yet!
haha...Ayaan didnt tell him anything about his meeting with Suhana..
fir bhi he asked "uska naam kya hai"? & Ayaan said "Suhana" ☺️ lol one of Rohan's tricks...wen someone is lost in thought ask them anything n they'll say wat's on their mind...he didnt realli know Ayaan was with a girl but Suhana was on Ayaan's mind n that's wat he says

I m lovin it yaar...Suhana & Ayaan both liked each other... yh sorta
Gosh cant wait to read more...Eager to know that how will they fall in love?? I m super excited!!!
lol im telling u in advance no update today n maybe tomorrow coz i hav no idea wat on earth to write!

thanks Vipu for reading n commenting🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: shona.
lol im telling u in advance no update today n maybe tomorrow coz i hav no idea wat on earth to write!

LOL...its okay..i will wait!!

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Tani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Shona I swear yaar, just settle down in India and knock some sense in desi tv writers🤢 I love how you paint a picture with just few words...nothing particular happened in this update like plot wise (not insulting you btw😛) I love how even in the exposition of say a lot but not saying much and that's an amazing talent you have.

Like Vipu said I'm in love with SuYaan already😍 I love the little interactions they had and they're not even slightly romantic at all loved it. And I'm glad you kept Suhana like the show Suhana? I love how both of them are attracted to each other but not in that desi tv way where there's like ten hour eye locks or something🤣 (I know you wrote something like that in your first part)

Ok I can't wait to see SaRun ki entry 😍 And Tacker of course ☺️

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Shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Tani91
Shona I swear yaar, just settle down in India and knock some sense in desi tv writers🤢 I love how you paint a picture with just few words...nothing particular happened in this update like plot wise (not insulting you btw😛) I love how even in the exposition of say a lot but not saying much and that's an amazing talent you have. thank u🤗ur too kind...well actually this isnt the onli thing i wrote i've written a whole story n currently writing another one so yh im a pretty keen writer n this is how i alwasy write...
n yh agreed nothing much happened in this part or last part but i like to write these lil things n they cum together as a bigger picture...cant do the over the top drama where so many things happen desi serial type things

Like Vipu said I'm in love with SuYaan already😍 lol all they've done is had a couple of convos! no romantic scenes or even fall in love I love the little interactions they had and they're not even slightly romantic at all loved it. yup they have tlked...they arent shy or anything but no romance as of yet...Ayaan has had ppl walk in and out of his life...he will be relunctant to let Suhana in And I'm glad you kept Suhana like the show Suhana? i love Suhana like that onli I love how both of them are attracted to each other but not in that desi tv way where there's like ten hour eye locks or something🤣 (I know you wrote something like that in your first part) haha yes i dont understand long eye locks n all that n Suhana also says in first part that none of that happens in real life...will try to keep things subtle n less filmy as possible

Ok I can't wait to see SaRun ki entry 😍 And Tacker of course ☺️ hopefully a group scene of all 4 frens coming in next part...Tacker already there in the thick of things

Thank u so much Chandz...ur compliments made my day🤗

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Shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: -MadRaginiFan-

LOL...its okay..i will wait!!

have a gud scene idea for them to meet agen so will try to get it done tomorrow

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Shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Part 3

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Both friends sat to have lunch.

"waise tum kyun itne hesitant teh office aane ke liye?" Rohan asked stuffing his mouth with food and his anger dissolving immediately

"kuch nahin...bas lunch kar raha tha" Ayaan replied and thought about his small interaction with Suhana...he remember the one time she smiled...it wasn't as though he hadn't seen a more beautiful girl but their was something so pure and innocent and genuine about her that he wanted to carry on meeting her, talking to her...

"Dude uska naam kya hai?" Rohan asked

"Suhana" Ayaan replied still in a trance

The piece of roti fell out of Rohan's hand "Dude you were with a girl?" Rohan said and Ayaan came back from his trance

"huh?" Ayaan replied

"tu ek ladki ke saath tha," Rohan asked shocked,"dude how long has it been since you went on a date,"

"Rohan it wasn't a date...we were just there about to have lunch and you called and I came here...I don't even know her..." Ayaan said

"opps sorry Boss apko disturb kar diya...if I'd known you were on a date then Mehta ki aisi ki tesi I'd have let you carry on," Rohan said, "by the way ye Suhana kaisi hai and why haven't we met her?"

"Rohan for the last time it wasn't a date and that was the first time I saw her how can I introduce you guys and what do you mean 'Suhana kaisi hai?'...bas aisi he hai..." Ayaan said noticing his face was getting hotter, "and don't call me Boss,"

"is that all you're going to say 'bas aisi he hai'...Ayaan we're chaddi buddies I know there is more than that here...in the last 3 years I've never seen you sit and talk to anyone girl other than the ones you had to...actually even guys...IO've not seen you talk to them either..."

"Rohan just shut up" Ayaan replied.

"Ayaan what ever you say my sixth sense says this girl, Suhana, will have some lasting effect on you," Rohan said. Rohan often got a feeling about things and they frequently came true.

"Baba Rohan ji agar apka meri bhavishya padh ne ka session khatam ho gaya ho toh kuch kaam karle...shaam ko jaldi jana hai warna Sanya hum dono ka khoon karde gi," Ayaan said.

"whatever you say dude...I'm telling you she's here to stay," Rohan said leaving the cabin.

Ayaan shook his head and the recalled Suhana's smile. Will I meet her next time I go to the hospital? Ayaan thought...what will he talk about and would it be awkward talking to her after leaving all of a sudden today...she seemed pretty chilled out though, Ayaan recalled her exact words, "it's not a date or something that you can't leave" and as he recalled this he couldn't help smiling. Rohan noticed this through the window and grinned and said to himself "Rohan lagta hai ye wicket bohat jald girne wali hai,"

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Suhana got back to her flat from work. She was in the bathroom washing her face. It was quite some day at work, it felt so different to be here away from the family that always pampered her, away from the friends who were always there for her, in a new city, yet she already loved it here. Her small meeting with Ayaan flashed in her memories. She relived the small collision they had...his smell was amazing, she had to find out what perfume he was using, I'll ask him if I get the chance she thought and the slapped herself on the back of her head "dumbo how do you know you'll meet him again," she said to herself but then said," but he comes to the hospital every 2 weeks so of course I'll meet him again...but will he want to meet me again..." and then realizing she was talking to herself she shook her head. Suhana Bajpai you're hungry and need some food go get some dinner before you go crazy, Suhana thought drying her face, thinking of going out for dinner, she was too tired to cook today.

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"arre yaar where are these two?" Ayaan asked. He and Rohan were waiting for Sanya and Rohit outside the restaurant.

"dude I'm telling you they're eloping," Rohan replied

"shut up Rohan...why would they elope? their families are fine with their relationship...and what's the point of them even getting married, they look married, behave married and even had a couple of divorces," Ayaan replied

"oh finally they're here...poore 30 minutes late," Rohan gestured towards an approaching couple on a bike. The view in front of them was like a bollywood film scene, a stylish bike with a very handsome hero and sitting behind him a beautiful damsel, her hair flying in the wind as she held on tightly to him. They stopped the bike next to Ayaan's car and came to meet their friends.

"don't look at me like that, meine kuch nahin kiya," Rohit said.

"mere bhai iss bar kya hua...signal red light 30 minutes ke liye stuck ho gayi thi ya phir Sanya tumhe navigate kar rahi thi," Rohan asked sarcastically

"stop it Rohan i'm not that bad,"Sanya said," actually humme road pe ek cute sa puppy mila tha aur mujhe uske saath khelna tha"

"tum puppy ke saath adhe gante ke liye khel rahe theh," Ayaan asked exasperatedly

"actually we thought it was a stray and we were playing with it until the owner came...some sweet aunty ji...Sanya wanted to play with the puppy so we stayed back" Rohit said.

"dude tere dimag mein kaunsa nut dheela hogaya hai jiski waja se tum woh sab karte ho jo Sanya chahti hai chahe woh kitna bhi stupid aur pointless ho," Rohan said,

"Rohan!" Sanya said and a moment later Ayaan said "Suhana" and the rest of the group repeated "Suhana?" in unison.

Ayaan's eyes had fallen on Suhana who was also coming to the same restaurant. She looked tired and was by herself,

"ye Suhana kaun hai?" asked Rohit

"Ayaan ki lunch date thi aaj...aur ab lag raha hai dinner date bhi hone wali hai" Rohan said with glee

"no it's not that, and what do you mean dinner date?" Ayaan asked

"meaning that she is alone and I'm gonna invite her to join us," Rohan replied," I told you, Ayaan she's in your life to stay, my sixth sense knows it..."

"aww Ayaan you were on a date and wow she's pretty," Sanya said looking towards Suhana.

"guys you are gonna stay away from her, I mean it," Ayaan said but he knew that Rohan and Sanya were going to do their thing anyway

"I don't think so, Rohan let's go," Sanya said and both walked towards Suhana

"oh come on...seriously!" Ayaan said as Rohit chuckled and both followed Rohan and Sanya

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Edited by shona. - 13 years ago

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Tani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Rofl I loved Rohan's banter🤣 and Sanya seems like my long lost twin...puppy ke saath khel ti hai.l.i would totally do the same

Loved the update like always🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Although this part didnt have a single HarshIni/SuYaan scene...still this part is my favourite so far😳

Gosh...i was smiling while reading it & that smile didnt vanish for even a second untill the end of the part😃

Shuru se shuru karti hun..

Ayaan-Rohan scene :- Gawd...my heartstoppers😍

I was imagining KT-Harshad's expressions here...haha...Loved how Rohan asked "Dude you were with a girl? "😆

& i also loved his Bhavishyavaani [Prediction]...Ayaan gave him a PRFECT name Baba🤣...SuYaan r meant for each other & he has predicted that abhi se! [Rohan Baba ki Jai !!🥳]

I ADORE SuYaan...these two are too cute...I love how they cant stop thinking about each other☺️

Originally posted by: shona.
Ayaan recalled her exact words, "it's not a date or something that you can't leave" and as he recalled this he couldn't help smiling. Rohan noticed this through the window and grinned and said to himself "Rohan lagta hai ye wicket bohat jald girne wali hai,"

Ayaan aur meri thinking kitni milti hai😉...I also loved how Suhana said that line...& OMG...Ayaan is fultoo flat on Suhana😍 & Rohan's words-wiket girne waali hai are 🤣...haha..girne waali nahi..gir gayi☺️

Suhana is a cutipie...haha...I loved how she slapped herself...

I can understand what she is going through..kya karein Ayaan hai hi itna attractive😛😆

Rohit-Sanya had a DHAMAKEDAAR entry!!

I also have one prediction now : Aage jaake Sanya-Suhana will become besties...they are equally ADORABLE & CHILDISH😳

& I loved how Sanya said :- "aww Ayaan you were on a date and wow she's pretty,"

The end part is so exciting...Gawdd...bilkul sahi part pe end kiya hai...I just cant wait for Rohan-Sanya to meet Suhana...also waiting to read Suhana's reaction after she sees Ayaan😍

P.S : kuchh zyada hi lamba comment ho gaya iss baar mera...SORRY😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Shona I have a suggestion for you..

On the first page plz make an index & mention the page no. of the parts u have updated...so that it gets easy for the news readers to read all the parts!