ArHi SS: Memories... Part 3; Page 26 (Completed) - Page 16

Originally posted by: savi-tan

Pearl, very beautifully written. Loved it to bits. You are a gifted writer. do continue.

Savi

Originally posted by: zuaireah

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Chapter one left me with moist eyes chapter two gave me hope of good things to come...every word written about the way he feels about her is amazing ...i'm speechless...u again kept me wanting more of this...😃

Originally posted by: multifaceted

Wow this was beyond amazing...loved the intensity, pain and emotions of Arnav...lovely..thanks for the PM..eagerly waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: nyxx

Wow. Im in love with the way you write. Drawing the parallels between Arnav and Khushi...I loveddd the entire symbolism there, and its nice to see Payal making an effort to unite the two who probably arent even aware that they are made for each other (well they are, but its time they admit it)...and looks like Khushi has handled herself on the exterior but theres ALOT inside, and same goes for Arnav...you displayed his pain, agony beautifully!!

Beautiful chapter..and the poolside...hmmm...its where it all happens ;) I await to read further!!

- Dee

Originally posted by: sparklystarstud

sai jaan... the way u've played this out is amazing...

loved wat payal did for her sis n bil...

and arnav's utmost love and care for khushi... and khushi not being able to withstand his love... BEAUTIFUL... PERFECT...

now waiting for the final chapter...

~~~ sam

Originally posted by: Poonam786

The update was just beautiful, Pearl..I don't know what it is, maybe I'm just extra emotional today, but it made me cry... So heart wrenching, Arnav's pain was.. Looking forward to Part 3.. :)

Originally posted by: MrsRaizada101

wow that was beautiful i truly truly loved it with every ounce in my heart... i have tears threatening to spill over it was just too good! loved it! its perfect!

Originally posted by: Lyraa99

at first i didnt know what u edited cz all my favorite lines were there... i fell in love with ur last paragraph... it touched me... i loved ur concept... continue soon... will be waiting for this one

Originally posted by: Nici0306

just re-read it.. to see what you edited... i liked the first version but you didn't disappoint me.. you just made it even more better by adding not removing anything from the part.. which made me happy... loved Payal.. finally someone would leave them alone..