ArHi SS: Memories... Part 3; Page 26 (Completed)

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Pooja

@poolovesarnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Very very very good indeed :) TERRIFIC!!! :)

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

wow that was beautiful i truly truly loved it with every ounce in my heart... i have tears threatening to spill over it was just too good! loved it! its perfect!

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

aww lovely improvement. really endearing.

thanks or the scrap.

xxx

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kiran deep kaur

@sikhni_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

vry well writtn pearl,,.👏

loved it dil se 😳

thnks for awesome update n pm 🤗

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--Sobi--

@--Sobi--

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

I am liking both ends Sai!!!😊

But then it depends on u...how u r going to progress the story further!!!😳

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Loved payal in this part. Yayy so the next part will finally be arhi confrontation

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Addie07

@Addie07

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

at first i didnt know what u edited cz all my favorite lines were there... i fell in love with ur last paragraph... it touched me... i loved ur concept... continue soon... will be waiting for this one

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

That is just fabulous. I'm glad you are extending it...you could probably do a few more parts?! Please PM me when you update

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asumi

@asumi

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

o wow!! this version is definately deeper!! got an insight of khushi as well as arnav's mind and i loved it!!!
loved payal too!!!

dint mention in my last comment but- the use of phoenix was beautiful!!! the other version was incredible too but i liked to more than that one!!! :) :) thank you!!!!