IPKKND OS : I Will Wait For You, Part 3 Page 21 !

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prerna salian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

My god wat has shyam done to khushi !! Poor khushi :'(
Looking forward to the next part

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rockinggirl5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Omg... That was intense. I was literally chewing my nails, please I hope someone saved her. I think u should definitely continue.

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SankaDevi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Oh be still my heart! It was drumming just as fast as Khushis was when she was running! That jerk! He left her on the road again! He really likes doing that no? Poor poor khushi, looking up at her mom and dad :S I love the suspense, intensity and desperation youve built up with words here Hayley, its really palpable! Great OS and pielieeej (mami ishtyle!) do continue! :D

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Abi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

IF YOU DONT CONTINUE..i dont know what I will do! Intense you say!?! The emotions and the love and the pain.. words will not describe what you have done.. youve created magic this is a masterpiece.. its beautiful! you MUST MUST MUST continue! (Pretty please!!!) and the suspense.. u'll kill me LOL

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yusam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

OH YES.. VERRRY INTENSE... STOOOPID ARNAV..

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-Garima-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Omg, that was so sad Hayley! I absolutely loved it! (:

I think you should definitely continue, I missed you and your writing so much! Please do continue! (: I love it when you write!

--Garima

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purplekid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Earthshaking? Heart wrenching? I don't know what to call it, but that was brilliant! Please continue soon! Before I die of nervous anticipation... :D

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Viviann

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

whoaa that was really intense, do continue...

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imran78

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

OMG that was... i dont know what to say.
It was intense and sad. But i love your writing, girl.
What happened to her? For the answers your definitly have to continue.
I am eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for E-mail😊

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haminasto

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

ok i was feeling like the only person who feeds on sadism and craves for angst.
And its been long since i had any of it to this magnum.
it was so apt to Arnav and Khushi.
Even today really Arnav can do that thing leaving her at ends without an acknowledgement.
But the brutality of the moment later was really so raw and elemental like you picked up the superficial linings of the original story and made it real and visual...nothing censored nothing sugar coated...total reality of what a single moment in time of misjudgement would lead to a hollowness of eternity.

in simple words plezzz continue soonish!!!!