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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Oh Hafie, you know I love me a dark Arnav. You feed my soul.

Khushi should still make him run a few circles around her and not forgive him so easily. Maybe demand that her soutan (laptop) be forgotten for a period of 48 hours while he showers attention only on her😉

Wonderful update!

Yuks

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Zaynah

@Zaya.Beintehaa

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Sweetie I Have No Words To Describe How Beautiful Writen This Was So I Am Going To Say LOVED IT So Much

Love

Zaynah x

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Fabulous update! I loved how you described both Khushi's confusion and Arnav's determination.👏

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NothingLasts

@NothingLasts

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

loved it and you have to continue as soon as you possibly can!

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rupzloveu

@rupzloveu

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

awesome update..

thanx fr the pm..

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gauri khan

@arshisangel

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

It was sooo cute. Beautifully written :D Totally loved d idea of arnav being possessive :)

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

OMG so awesome! ☺️ Now this is what i call passion!!!! ❤️ AAAHHH !!! Arnav pinning her to the wall has made me go cookoo 🤪 Haha but amazing work dear. I love the way you write 😳

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Filmyshilmy

@dennisdmenace

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

very nice thought.

well written

👍🏼

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--Sobi--

@--Sobi--

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Hai...Haffie...another dedication to me...I am in seventh heaven I guess!!😃

I couldnt figure what u had copied...b/c I just loved the whole thing...finally someone else also plans to write on Arnav asking forgiveness in his own style!!

Btw my OS was short...and yours was just perfect...the way you portrayed their emotions was just amazing...their feelings and their thoughts...were just penned down superbly!!

And u r rute about one thing...that even I dont want Khushi to forgive Arnav that easily...he has to fry a lot of papads before he gets what he wants!!

P.S. You dont need to reply to me unless you are really free...b/c its ok with me if you reply or not...regarding ur busy schedule these days!!😊

And yeah please go and pray...and pray for me too!!!