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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 15 :there will always be a wall between us

Arnav set alone outside the dhabba in this rainy night, it was very cold and he was freezing. The aunty gave him food and blanket because he was unwilling to come inside. Khushi was watching him from the window. She slowly held out her hand and put it on the glass of window, just like fetching his soul through it. Her tears steadily made their way from her eyes down her cheeks. His heart stared pumping in speed; his heart beat sound was thunderous. He senses cold and frozen eyes watching him and ploddingly looks behind him. He saw Khushi monitoring him with her dispassionate eyes. He walks towards the window and place his hand on the exact opposite position of her hand. From the distance, it looks like their souls are buried into each other just like roots of the tree absorbed underground. But when you take a close look, you can see a wall between them.

Khushi:

Please leave. No matter how much you try

No matter how many tears you cry

You can't take my heart away again

No matter how much try, I just can't remove the pain

You are so close to met yet so far

Whichever wound is healed, will leave a scar

No matter how perfect white is, it can dirty by a single mark

It's just the same as when you bring light in the dark

Dark won't always remain dark, white won't always be perfect

Nothing is the same, I already left you and that's the fact

Please just give up and leave because I don't think you can gain back my trust

Just like today, there will always be a wall between us

Khushi removed her hand from the window and went back into the darker side of the room. He lifted his hand in the air as if he was asking her to come back. He felt dejected by her response but he didn't give up. Suddenly, they hear a thundering sound, there was a thunderstorm and she ran back to the window to check if he was still standing there to protect her.

precap: khushi forgives him
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Guys i know this part is quite short because i was quite busy with school work, i promise i will make the next part longer one.. i had drama comp today n my close won the first postition.. is khushi mein meinne yeh part post kiya. :P
Farah <3
Edited by arshi314 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
that was a really powerful update! i loved the idea of this simple wall serperating them and i love how arnav is willing to wait for her no matter how much pain it causes him. beautiful update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
AWESOME THANK U FOR PM ME
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part

thanx 4 the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc verses farah,,the wound and scar tghing z realy truy,,,greattt 👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 16: I was not born to give up

There was a thunderstorm and she ran back to the window check if he was still standing there to protect her.

Arnav:

Don't be scared, don't have hear

I will always stand right in front of you to remind you that I am here

If there is a wall between us

I would remove it like removing the dust

We were one and will always be one

I will hold on to the line even if I had to wait under the host sun

I know I was like a frozen desert

Abandon and leaved behind by everyone like I was dirt

I lose everyone who were close to me, you are the only one remaining

I don't want to lose you, from the start it wasn't my planning

I know I have devoted you too much pain

I had no heart, there was ice water running through my vein

But not anymore, now you are the owner of my heart

It will only be broken if you want to tore it apart

No matter how much you try to convince me

I will be that apple which will not fall down from the tree so easily

Because I was not born to give up'

Please give me one more chance; I don't want to lose this opportunity

There will be no limit of time for our love, I will love you everlastingly

Khushi was in tears after hearing this. No matter how demanding punishment she wanted to give for his sins, she was not able to because she loved him very much from his heart. She wanted to give equal pain but she cannot stand being far from him. She nodded her head and was about to run outside room to give him a hug but she stopped right there when she heard a very loud sound of a scream and a tool.

The window broke and the small pieces of the glass were on the floor. There was fresh blood everywhere. Khushi was terrified and shocked, she had no idea what was happening around her. She immediately run outside and was thunderstruck with terror.

Precap: sorry guys, no precap...

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i know i promised you guys i will write longer part but i wanted to make u curious so i just wrote untill here..So guys what do you think just happened? Why is there blood on the floor?
If you want to know what happened, please keep reading my FF as there are not much chapters left, this FF is going to end soon..
Farah <3
Edited by arshi314 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome... m waitin fr next update...
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AWESOME CONTINUE SOON AND THANK U FOR PM ME
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Mere jan logi kya??? Plz write the next part!!! ;)
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OMG! i was screaming for joy that they're getting together when this crash happens... very interesting! i wanna know more!!! :)

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