OS: Don't Leave Me Alone!

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Shona

@shalu_miracles

Beginner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

niceee!!!! I think Arnav has to do a lot more to convince her...!!

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Smita

@..Smita..

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Loved it!Very cute OS! Arnav:Even Lakshmi misses u! God! Trust Arnav to say that!😆

And Buaji fell laughing on the chair and its leg broke!LOL!😆

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Superb os.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved it. Love makes us do crazy things.

Very well written.

Thanks.😉

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rana5

@rana5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

What a lovely OS. All of your stories bring out an emotion in me. I have a smile on my face😊

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-CoolChick-

@-CoolChick-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Smitaaa...my FAVORITEST OS writer...😳👏👏

as always u knw...m *SPEECHLESS* 👏⭐️

it was beautiful...just like their love !!! 😃 ⭐️👏
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i hope it'll be as simple to get her back as the way u have mentioned...i dont want him to go the devdas or majnu way...so not his personality..!!! 😃

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

That was gorgeouse! SO visual, it's played like a movie in my head! I loved it! He just cant live without her!

I hope at some point once he starts to repent his behaviour that Khushi Understands what he cant express in words! Poor guy! I know his behaviour is bad, but your heart breaks for him everytime you see him sad and remorseful!

Because... you know that in essentials he IS a good person! He is just impulsive and angry and stubborn! These things make his life difficult! But his heart is actually Gold! I think anyone ELSE playing ASR and we would NOT see all this!

Good one Sobati... and also the writing and visualization of Arnav is second to non!

Your OS bought me to tears!

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svmi

@svmi

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

I love your style of writing and expression. I have always enjoyed your OS but do not remember leaving a comment. Today i
could not help. I loved it. I guess like most of us I just want these two toget together so that i can et on with my own life. I do want ASR to suffer too much. I would be happy if they copy your OS to show this.

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Suchi

@ChitraF

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

wow.. loved it.. so nice..

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HIRA

@BarunSanayaHM

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

loved it

and it was aaj mosum hai suhana kapade dhone ka he bahana

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

simply adorable! being left speechless by buaji's teasing was hilarious... laxmi is the one who misses her 😆... the great asr can't really admit that he is smitten with his wife, can he?

your os is a breath of fresh air in an otherwise dismal day

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