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luckylucky1

@luckylucky1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

wow so nice update...and lovely and thanks for pm

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Omg... Wow!!! I really don't know what to say. I am speechless. This chapter was beautiful and it was very very well written. I think it was the best one till date(well I say that after every chapter. That are all so good.) I am so happy he said everything that was in his heart. I can't wait to read the next part. Please continue soon.

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hilly

@hilly

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Awwwh !

this is such a stupendously Lovely update... so heart touching ! :'D

I really loved it... was such a treat to read... not rushed at all.. All the scenes flowed together .. and Thanks a tons a super long update ! Iloveyou for it ! ;D

The last scene really got to me.. flawlessly beautiful.. heart touching.. loved the emotionally drived Arnav 'Finally' letting his feelings out.. those feelings which didn't concern him at first.. or he thought of.. and the heart spoke.. spoke truthfully with all the over loaded love he had stocked within him..

the way you carried out his heart- wrenching dialogues were just out of the world and as a reader, I could vividly depict that.

& Khushi... how adorable ! Loved the cutie pie, overly concerned at Arnav's pain, her emtions being switched rapidly, and were expressed thoroughly well.

Lovin' how the story's moving and just anxiously can't wait for the next update !

Lovely updateee overall ! keep rockin' x

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jtammareddy

@jtammareddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Awesome and mind blowing work. I just finished till 27 chapters . Looking forward to read more from u.

Thank u

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

great update! And a very emotional one! finally the acceptance!

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Congrats for the thread! Beautiful as always! I love how he has finally dropped all pretense! 👏

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321abc

@321abc

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Hey!

Amazing updates for ch.26, ch.27. I liked how you described khushis and aravs feelings and I liked how arnav gave her the bangles and hopefully now all the misunderstandings are all cleared.

Thanks for the pm