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Simran

@-HoneyBoo-

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: BellaMasen
That was great! Are u planning to continue? Is so, pm me please😊

i added u as a buddy so i can pm u my future updates:D

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@-Spirited-

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

heyya simran

First thing first thnx sooo much for the hyperlinks 😃 n by now u might have guessed that i am a lazy bum who needs hyperlinks😳😆

n now comin to the update:- My first question to u (I know that i should be commenting but still) Where do u get such wonderful ideas from yaar?

I need to rack by brains the whole day to come up with one new concept , but ha dreams r my best support*winks*

lol i give it to u for all the wonderful ideas u come up with n The do u affect me scene was my favourite one, i hav read the scenes in many ffs but i still felt u had an uniqueness a style of ur own, loved it

n hey u r good with emotional stuffs

whole in whole the os was good

do come up with more ideas

nikki😃

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Simran

@-HoneyBoo-

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: niknavyu
heyya simran
First thing first thnx sooo much for the hyperlinks 😃 n by now u might have guessed that i am a lazy bum who needs hyperlinks😳😆

n now comin to the update:- My first question to u (I know that i should be commenting but still) Where do u get such wonderful ideas from yaar?

I need to rack by brains the whole day to come up with one new concept , but ha dreams r my best support*winks*

lol i give it to u for all the wonderful ideas u come up with n The do u affect me scene was my favourite one, i hav read the scenes in many ffs but i still felt u had an uniqueness a style of ur own, loved it

n hey u r good with emotional stuffs

whole in whole the os was good

do come up with more ideas

nikki😃

awwhhh thats so sweet of you nikki...and i love ur comments:D as wel las ur " my super hot secretary" ...thanks again:D

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Angel13

@Angel13

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Really nice superb os loved it thanks for pm

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Beautiful update pleased he finally got her to admit it. Cant wait for the next update

Thanks for the pm

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Zaynah

@Zaya.Beintehaa

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

well writen this was really good

love

Zaynah x

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jtammareddy

@jtammareddy

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

👏👏👏 Wonderfully done. Very emotional. U r a wonderful writer. Plz do continue ...

Thank u for sharing.

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DarkDove

@DarkDove

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Hey Simran!!!

this is cute and hot at the same time!!

i loved how arnav kept asking her if she loves him!!

and then.. the kiss!!!! aahhh!!! it was amazing!!!

i wish this would happen in the show!!! i mean, cant arnav see that khushi is soo innocent! why would she want to be with shyam!!?? arnav must think about this!!!

i love how he made her confess!!!

lovely os

xxx