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I read the first chapter and then panicked because it was SO interesting and I felt like I almost shouldn't have read it to save myself the spasms you get when you want something to continue but there IS NOTHING. But then you update so quickly it's incredible.
I know, I know, I committed the MASSIVE FAIL of being a silent reader but I always intended to come back and write why I loved it- but by then there were 45 pages and 2 updates.
So anyways- TO THE POINT: I really like the complete setting and story shift, it's almost like reading a different story entirely except with the same faces. You write wonderfully and really take the reader through the situations. I also like that you alternate between Arnav and Khushi's perspectives so we get to see them as they see each other. I did think I might have an issue with their personalities being so different to those they have in the show, but good writing and characterisation is good writing and characterisation whether it's completely by the book (or in this case, show) or not. 😆
Brilliant stuff and I look forward to the next update :)
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