Hum Bewafa Hargiz Na The (MG) Thread 1

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Hum Bewafa Hargiz Na The
(I was never unfaithful)

Character Sketch

Maan: He belonged to a very rich family but then one day disaster stuck and his parents died in a car accident, he was very small around 10 years old and his uncles manipulated and took away all that Maan had and left him and his younger sister Pinky on the footpath to fend for themselves. Maan did odd jobs along with his studies so as to earn enough to survive in this big bad world and even provide for his kid sister. Since he was a computed wiz he participated in programming competitions as he grew older and earned money for their bare necessities and schooling. He became aloof from the world due to the hardships he had faced till he met his angel, his whole world lit up with her one smile till the ill-fated when all hell let loose.

Pinky: Maan's kid sister, she was 7 years old when their parents died. Her whole world revolves around her brother whom she considers and respects as her mom, her dad and her brother. She looks up to him as her idol and wants to help him in every way possible but Maan never lets her do anything. He kept her cocooned in his protective embrace showering his sister with all the love and care, shielding her from this evil world. She is like his little princess and he always took care of all her needs however small they may be. In the early days he would go hungry but never ever let his sister sleep on an empty stomach.

Adi: He is Maan's best buddy since childhood. He has been with Maan through thick and thin. He even used to save his pocket money in order to help Maan though Maan would always refuse unless it was really urgent and that too for Pinky. He was Maan's true buddy ready to lay his life for his friend. He really respected Maan for what he was as a person absolutely honest, hard working, self-made, kuddar (having immense self-respect), always standing for the right and truth come what may even in the worst of situations. He secretly loves Pinky and even she feels for him.

Geet: She was really bubbly by nature, very naive and innocent, always laughing, very jovial and ready to make new friends. She was the only child of her parents. Her mother died when she was really young. Her father was a very rich and influential person who gave her all the riches but couldn't spend enough time with her. She looked up to her father and loved him a lot. She understood that he was really busy but still she desired to be loved. Her that desire was fulfilled the day she met Maan in college and slowly he became her life. His love and care wiped away all the loneliness from her life till the fateful day when everything was destroyed.

Geet's father (Mohinder Handa): A very rich and powerful man who didn't have any values and considered that everything in this world has a price tag but he didn't understand that some things can never be bought.

Will introduce the other characters as they come...

Concept:

Geet (self thought):

I gave you my heart

Your simply tore it apart

Mere pyaar, meri wafa ka yeh sila kyon diya? You ruined my soul today, you destroyed my very existence on Earth, why Maan why? What did I do to deserve this in return of my never ending love for you? What'

(Why did you do this to me return of my love, my faithfulness? You ruined my soul today, you destroyed my very existence on Earth, why Maan why? What did I do to deserve this in return of my never ending love for you? What')

Her heart shattered beyond repair that day.

Maan (self thought):

I know I broke your heart

But I simply can't stay apart

I know I ruined your soul

But I had no control

I wanted to give you all the happiness

But I, myself pushed you in the dungeons of darkness

I wish I had died

Before due to me you ever cried

I can neither live nor die

Will I be ever be free from this lie

Oh Lord, to your tunes I will dance

But I beg her for one chance

My soul seeks her forgiveness

Please grant me a chance to give her happiness

From this universe remove my every trace

But please grant her solace

Give her every pain, every grief to me

But make her life sorrow free

Please grant this sinful soul one wish

Give me back my love, my worship

He fell on his knees tears pouring down his eyes

Hum bewafa hargiz na the
Par hum wafa kar naa sake

(I was never unfaithful

Yet I could never be faithful to you)

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Chapter 1

She lost her smile, her love, her everything that night while Maan slipped into the darkness of guilt and remorse. Within a span of 24 hours their entire world came crashing down. Geet's soul was destroyed beyond repair while Maan fell in the black hole of guilt.

Geet immediately left the country that night itself far far away from the dark shadows of Maan while he too had to leave the city that night. Even Pinky and Adi had to escape the country a few hours ago and by sheer coincidence Pinky, Adi and Geet all landed and settled in London.

One and half Years Later

Geet was trying hard to move on in her life but the hatred and sadness he filled in her heart was just not letting her live. She was living like a lifeless corpse whose heart had been ripped out and burnt by the one she loved the most. Her life was full of sadness now and she was just dragging her life.

She tried to keep herself busy so that his betrayal didn't hurt her but little did it all help. She joined the masters program and started teaching in a computer course in the institute in the evening to kill her time wanting to tire herself so much that she could at least fall asleep. But sleep still eluded her and she had to take sleeping pills to get some rest.

Here Maan buried himself completely in work. He tried to keep himself totally occupied with his software company developing various softwares wanting to fulfill her dream to make a mark in this world, wanting to prove himself to her awaiting her one chance. He kept himself hell busy so that he won't feel guilty during the day but at night his conscious blamed him, accused him for destroying her.

Not able to bear his guilt he would indulge in intense Tai-Chai, cutting and chopping the air with his harsh, ruthless and torturous stunts on self, wanting to suffer her pain trying desperately to heal her soul.

Some days he would break wooden slabs making his hands bleed,

sometimes breaking thick ice slabs wounding his hands
while sometimes just scorch his body indulging in fire stunts. He would keep on tiring his body till every muscle screamed in pain, begging his mercy and he would literally collapse on the gym floor totally exhausted, hurting badly and some days bleeding and limping just dragging his worthless life waiting for that day when she would let him speak his heart out.

It was just like another dull day in Geet's lifeless life when she headed in the evening to take the computer class but that day came with a new ray of hope as a new student had enrolled in her class, Pinky. Geet hardly used to interact with her students and that too was completely professional. She never got personal with them but she felt an instant liking for this new girl.

Pinky's bubbly nature reminded Geet of herself and her past, the past she was running away from yet she felt a magnetic pull towards Pinky and it was as if she was forced by her dying heart to befriend her. Slowly their friendship grew and they became the best of friends, despite the fact that Geet was Pinky's teacher in the computer classes, in fact they were so close that they shared their day to day lives though Geet hardly told her anything about her past.

Geet didn't know that Pinky was actually Maan's sister and had no idea about who Pinky actually was from except that she had a traumatic childhood but her brother protected her from all harm, somehow Geet started respecting her brother a lot, maybe somewhere in her heart he reminded her of Maan though she always ran away from the fact that her heart still beat for Maan.

Geet and Pinky shared a sisterly bond and Pinky told her about Adi, how they both knew each other since childhood and how they gradually fell in love. That day Pinky came running to meet Geet, she was really happy and over the moon today.

Pinky (really excited, very happy, puffing as she ran hard): Di, di… pata hai aaj kya hua?

(Di, di… you know what happened today?)

Pinky was the only one who could bring a smile on Geet's face.

Geet (slight smile): Arey Pinky relax yaar… saas toh le le dear.

(Arey, Pinky relax yaar… breathe atleast)

Pinky: Pata hai… Adi proposed to me today.

(You know… Adi proposed to me today.)

Pinky was really excited today and started telling Geet about what all happened while Geet went in flash back

FLASH BACK

Maan had been slogging real hard for the past whole week making some computer program for a competition. As a result Geet had not been able to meet her Maan and was very gloomy. She too skipped college the whole week as life just didn't seem the same without her best friend or shall I say love.

Yeah Geet had started developing feelings towards Maan but she kept them to herself afraid of his reaction, what if he didn't feel the same. She didn't want to risk telling him how much she wanted to feel him, love him, be his for her entire life in fear, what if it affects their friendship. She didn't have the heart to risk it all as she knew she just didn't exist without him and would die if he broke their friendship.

She was desperately missing him and was in a really grumpy mood. Though she understood his financial condition and that it was not in his control to meet but she so much wanted to be with him that she went to the lake park they used to spend their free time to breathe in his aroma which filled the air there. She felt peace and solace there as she could always feel his divine presence there.

Maan was really excited today, his hard work had paid and he had won the prestigious competition and even got big prize money using which he could carry out the surprise he had been planning for his life, his Geet. He wanted to share his joy, his happiness with his love, his angel, his Mishti. He knew where to find her and rushed there as even his heart was restless to get a glimpse of his Jaan.

He saw her sitting there lost in her own world feeling various emotions and her expressions changed depending upon the sentiments she was experiencing sometimes she was sad missing him, sometimes happy as she remembered their closeness and Maan was completely lost in her.

He stood there admiring her, totally lost in her splendor, drinking her pure and divine beauty via his eyes. Time stood still for him as he kept on looking at her with true love pouring from his eyes.

He was absolutely lost in his angle as dusk drowned and the sun went done breaking his day dreaming session when he signaled to someone and Geet was stunned as the whole park lit up with beautiful lightening and a message displayed amidst the gorgeous lights.

Will You Marry Me

Mishti

She was over whelmed with emotions as she turned around to find her Maan down on one knee extending his hand for her flashing his ever so charming smile. She ran to him as she nodded for a yes as tears of happiness flowed down her eyes.

They hugged each other finding solace merging into one. Geet realized how much he had loved her, he was working day and night to win the competition so as to make it a perfect proposal for her and she was completely lost in his pure love.

Flash Back Ends

Pinky: Arey Geet Di, where are you lost? You aren't even listening to me.

She said waving her hands in front of Geet's eyes and she snapped out of her past as the clouds of betrayal clouded all around and she once again submerged in the darkness of her present.

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Yeah, I know many wanted Geet to give Maan a chance but if you read Maaneet's conversation, Geet said "What more do you want to clarify, I gave you the chance that day despite your betrayal and you spoke your filthy black heart out pouring acid on our sacred love burning it to ashes." while Maan says I was helpless that day Does it mean she gave him a chance, then what happened 😕 ???? Let the story flow guys...
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Chapter 8

Maan was horrified, he felt the ground under his feet collapse, his Geet wanted to die because of him. Oh God, why didn't I just die before the day I burned our love ruining my Jaan killing her.


Maan: Nahi Geet, I am leaving London right now but you don't do anything to yourself. I will never ever try to contact you but please don't do anything rash I beg of you.

He left from there, his heart dying, his soul burning with guilt. He died a thousand deaths as Geet's broken and blank eyes flashed in front of him, he flinched in pain remembering the pain, the hurt, the frustration, the anger, the hatred, the sufferings in those beloved eyes.

He cursed his very existence which had ruined his angel and he wished he could die but his heart still hung on the hope that maybe her Babaji would grant his sinful soul that one chance some day when he would be able to heal his Jaan when his Mishti would smile wholeheartedly again.

He sped to the airport leaving behind everything, nothing, absolutely nothing mattered to him at the cost of his angel. Yes, he was there to fulfill her dream only but if it pained her so much then what was its value, it was all so worthless, when suddenly his mobile rang.

Pinky (as if she had felt her brother's pain): Bhai aap ghar kab aa rahe ho, pata nahi mujhe bahut gabarahat ho rahi hai, ek aeeb si bechani ho rahi hai ki kuch bahut bura hone wala hai.

(Brother, when are you coming back home, I don't know why but I am feeling very uneasy, I am getting a sinking feeling as if something very bad is going to happen)

Maan's heart cried bura toh hogaya na. Meri Mishti mujse itni nafrat karti hai ki woh apni Jaan tak dene ko taiyaar thi, isse bura aur kya ho sakta hai, his soul howled in pain. Maine apni Jaan, apni Zindagi, apni Geet ko itni buri tarah tabah kiya hai ki woh ek zinda laash ban gayi hai. Mein janta hoon ki mei uska gungegar hoo par mei majboor tha, mei apni Mishti ki aakhon mein apne liye itni nafrat bardast nahi kar sakta, na mei jee sakta hoon nahi mar sakta hoon shayad mere gunhao ki yehi saaza hai.

(Maan's heart cried Bad has already happened. My Mishti hates me so much that she wants to kill herself because of me, what worse can happen than this, his soul howled in pain. I ruined my Jaan, my life, my Geet so badly that she had become a living corpse. I know that I am her culprit but I was helpless that day, I can't bear to see so much hatred in the eyes of my Mishti, neither can I live, nor can I die, maybe this is the punishment of my grave sins.)

Tears rolled down his eyes but he somehow controlled himself not wanting to give pain to his little sister.

Maan (speaking with great difficulty, he was choking with emotions but somehow managed to speak): Nahi princess, everything is fine (his heart screamed in pain as he lied) I have an urgent meeting and need to leave London right away.

Pinky: But bhai your deal.

Maan: You don't worry princess I will manage everything.

Pinky was still anxious but she believed her brother little realizing that he was just keeping her heart, in reality he was completely and utterly broken from inside. When she told this to Adi he immediately realized that something was amiss. He didn't want to alarm Pinky hence called up Maan from outside not letting her know.

Adi: Maan, what are you doing buddy, why are you leaving town. Tomorrow is the most important deal of your career, how can you leave.

Maan: Nahi Adi sab katam ho gaya. Ushi ko rula kar, ushi ko tarpa kar, uski hi rooh ko roond kar mei uska khawab kaise pura kar sakta hoon. Mei toh woh badnaseeb hoon jo apni wafa bhi sabit nahi kar sakta, mei uska khwab kya poora karoonga, mei hi toh uske zakhamo ka karan hoon, meri hi wajah se toh uski aankho mei aanso hai, mei toh ushe ek mushurahat dene ke kabil bhi nahi hoon, maine toh uski sari khushiyan hi cheen le, kash ki mei kabhi paida hi nahi hua hota kam se kam mere hone se ushe itna dukh toh nahi hota.

(No Adi, everything is over now. By making her cry, by torturing her, by killing her soul, how can I fulfill her dream. I am that unlucky person who can't even prove his innocence, how will I fulfill her dream, I am the cause of all her wounds, due to me only there are tears in her eyes, I am not even worthy of giving her a single smile, I snatched away all her happiness, I wish I was never born al teast she wouldn't have been pained so much by my existence)

Adi (aghast to hear so much pain and helplessness in Maan's voice): Maan, I am feeling really scared, just tell me where are you?

Maan: I am on my way to the airport.

Adi rushed to meet Maan, he was really scared, worried about his condition, fearing he might do something to himself.

Here Geet was completely broken, her past was haunting her, his betrayal was dancing in front of her eye and she wished she just died this very instance. The pain, the hurt, the suffering he had caused her had broken her tender heart into thousand pieces. He had ripped her soul apart and burnt their pure and sacred love by his acidic words and sinful deeds.

She had witnessed the real Maan, the cruel, the unfaithful, the heartless Maan and her heart was crumpling under the agony he had caused her. She hugged her knees close to her chest and kept on weeping the whole night long trying to forget his betrayal, trying desperately to heal her wounded heart, which had been ripped apart again by his mere presence as if his mere appearance there re-enacting the treachery he had caused her.

Not able to control her emotions at all she switched on the television in the wee hours of the morning when a news flash caught her attention.

Breaking News

"Indian Business Tycoon Maan Singh Khurana goes back on his words"

Geet was shocked and she flipped the channels.

Breaking News

"Maan Singh Khurana flies back without signing THE deal"

The news reporter was saying "Mr. Andrews and Mr. Khurana were to sign the historic deal tomorrow morning but we just received the breaking news from our correspondents that Mr. Khurana was seen at the airport catching a flight back home, if industry experts are to be believed looks like he chickened out of the deal at the very last moment as he was incompetent of handling just a huge and prestigious assignment"

Geet changed the channel again.

Panel discussion

"Maan Singh Khurana destroys Indian business community reputation"

Attendee 1: Maan Singh Khurana is a man with no ethics, no morals, and no principals that is why he left the deal in a lurch and ran away.

Attendee 2: I think he is just a fraud and realizing that he would be exposed naked in front of the world he simply backed out of the deal, he is such a coward and yes it is a big blow to our reputation. His irresponsibility will hurt our community far and wide. He is such a jerk, a total moron.

Attendee 3: This is what happens when people from small upbringing suddenly get money and power, they think they own the world and can do what they feel like little realizing what damage their cause others. Yes his immature and stupid action will really cost us big time in the international market.

Attendee 1: Yes very true, these small towners are useless bloody folks having no value, no respect of other people's time and money. Because of him international market may never ever trust an Indian again.

Geet was horrified as realization drawn on her that he was there for a business deal and she had accused him of breaking his last promise. Her heart cried see I told you he isn't heartless, he didn't break the last promise but her brain warned her, don't you fall in his trap again, God only knows what is he up to this time.

When the news flashed "Maan Singh Khurana has arrived in Delhi"

Reporter "India's youngest computer whiz fails in the international world. Let's ask him what went wrong"

All the reporters had encircled Maan and were bombarding him with questions "Sir, what happened, why did you chicken out"

Another ridiculed Maan "Do you think you company is incapable of handling such an important international venture? Do you think you are incompetent as a leader?"

Another questioned his integrity and commitment "Mr. Khurana do you even realize what repercussions your actions will have for the Indian business community. Do you have no ethics, no morals?"

Maan's lawyer had already arrived at the airport as he was fearing the reaction of the business community as well as the media and he shielded Maan saying "no comments" as Maan was in no condition to say anything, he was completely heartbroken. He escorted Maan and headed towards the car.

Geet was shocked to see all mock Maan and her heart felt guilty. Her heart screamed "Oh My God, what have I done, he left London leaving the unsigned deal behind because I threatened to jump and now he is being ridiculed, all because of me" but her mind argued "He bloody well deserves it, rather much more for his betrayal. And I am pretty sure he must have done this too for some insane reason of his own and not due to the warning". But her heart protested "Nahi, he did it to honor the last wish" but her mind argued "If he was so faithful he would have never betrayed you in the first place" and her heart was speechless, it simply had no argument for his disloyalty.

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Chapter 4

After shopping Geet and Pinky left for their homes. Pinky was really happy today and she kept blabbering all the way but Geet was totally lost in her painful memories. As Geet reached home and was keeping the stuff away, the white off shoulder dress which Pinky had forcefully made her buy fell down, she picked it up and she was reminded of the day when Maan stole her heart.

FLASH BACK

Maan was dressed in the amazing black suit and was looking the most handsome hunk in the whole wide world while Geet was dressed in the lovely white off shoulder dress and was looking out of the world. They looked the best couple in the fashion show and were the show stoppers, obviously who other than Geet could have been the shop stopper, after all the whole college was flat on our gorgeous Diva.

Maan and Geet started the ramp walk, initially Maan was really conscious but soon he was lost in admiring his Jaan, his Geet. They had walked till front when suddenly Maan sensed something amiss as Geet's expression changed to utter shock and then he realized as her dress strap was about to give way and he simply hugged her saving her from the immense disgrace as her dress malfunctioned. He wrapped his arms around her holding the dress in place as the audience inhaled sharply at his action. No one knew why he suddenly hugged her and they were completely shocked and stunned at his horrible behavior while the teachers and principal were aghast at his obnoxious act as Maan lifted Geet holding her really close to his chest making sure no one could even sense the mal function as he carried her towards the changing room.

Fortunately the ladies section was empty and he carried her right inside. He very gently put her down inside one of the changing rooms and softly closed the door behind him after handing her a pair of dress.


Geet was completely in tears as she broke down in fear of what could have happened had he not protected her. She was immensely grateful to him for having saved her izzat (self-esteem).

Here as Maan was coming out of the ladies section, few girls were entering and they shrieked in fright to see a guy coming out of the ladies room and Maan simply bowed his head and went out. Already there had been a huge hue and cry outside in the teaching faculty and the students viewing the fashion show regarding his horrendous act of hugging a girl like that and carrying her in such an improper manner. The principal immediately announced for the closure of the event and he called for an immediate disciplinary action meeting of his staff to discuss Maan's vulgar and highly inappropriate behavior.

Here Geet somehow managed to get a hold on herself and changed her dress really thankful to her Babaji and Maan for having saved her enormous shame and humiliation in front of all. But when she came out she was surprised to find everyone so sympathetic towards her as if someone had done huge injustice to her. She failed to realize how everyone had completely misunderstood Maan's noble act when Pari came to her with tears in her eyes.

Pari (hugging Geet): I am so sorry Geet (Geet was shocked 'Sorry but why').Had I known that Geek would be such a pervert I would have never ever suggested you to participate along with that jerk. I am really terribly sorry Geet, I didn't know he would turn out to be so cheap and pathetic.

Geet was aghast, OMG… was this, what all were thinking, she tried to speak in Maan's defense when Seema came running there.

Seema: Don't worry Geet, that Bas**** is being summoned in front of the disciplinary committee right away and I am sure they will rusticate him from the college. Obviously our faculty is not going to tolerate such cheap, sick, disgusting and shameful act of his, so don't worry.

Geet felt as if the ground slipped underneath her feet, he was going to get rusticated for saving her from humiliation and she rushed to where the meeting was being held, surprising her friends but then they thought that maybe she wanted to make sure he was aptly punished and let the thought pass.

Here principal sir had summoned Maan to the meeting, they had already decided the course of action but still wanted to give him a chance to clarify as he was their brightest student on full scholarship and had always been miles away from any trouble but what he did today was absolutely intolerable and out rightly disgusting.

Principal Sir: Maan, you have completely disgraced our college by doing such a vulgar, improper, sickening and horrendous act. There is absolutely no excuse for such a cheap, shameless and revolting behavior yet we would like to hear your clarification before we declare our verdict.

Maan simply bowed his head. What was he to clarify, how could he to say that her dress malfunctioned, how could he dishonor and humiliate his love. If this news leaked all would make fun of his Jaan and he would never ever be able to forgive himself. How could he let his Mishti be at the receiving end of all the horrible jokes, comments and posters. No… never… he made up his mind to remain silent. Let them do whatever they wanted with him but he won't let his angel be humiliated and disgraced.

Principal Sir was shocked at his silence, he had never expected such a disgusting behavior from his favorite student. He considered Maan more like his son and his silence was killing him.

Principal Sir (grabbing Maan's collar and shaking him up): It is highly disgusting what you did, I am truly ashamed to have admitted you in our college in the first place. There is no place for such despicable, horrible, filthy, vulgar, immoral and unscrupulous people in our college. I am snatching your scholarship and rusticating you this very instant.

Geet had entered the room when Maan was asked to clarify and she was completely shocked and taken aback by his silence. She failed to understand why he remained silent when it struck her that it was for her image, her self-respect that he was willing to sacrifice his self-esteem, his life, his carrier, his everything. OMG she was completely over whelmed with emotions, totally stunned, simply not able to react at all as she stood like a statue.

But as principal sir demeaned Maan and was about to drag and throw him out, she could bear it no more.

Geet (burst out as tears trickled down her eyes): Sir, it is not his fault. (everyone was shocked to see Geet there. Maan looked at her and their eyes met. His eyes pleaded her to keep quiet but how could she let her savior suffer. She took a deep breath and continued). My dress malfunctioned sir, he was just saving me from humiliation.

All were aghast, her dress malfunctioned and no one even realized such was the greatness of Maan.

Principal Sir (astonished): But then why didn't Maan say anything?

Geet (immense respect for Maan): He was again saving me from humiliation.

All were dumb folded by his sacrifice and they really wanted to bow down to him.

Principal Sir: I am really sorry Maan for having misunderstood your noble act and am ashamed to have used such demeaning words but we didn't know the truth. (Maan blinked his eyes assuring him that he perfectly understood his situation and it wasn't their fault. After what they saw anyone would have misunderstood only, principal sir patted Maan's back) I am really proud of you my child, thank you (and Maan smiled)

Geet too smiled amidst tears. All the teachers were about to disperse when Principal Sir added

Principal Sir: But what will we tell the students. I don't think we should tell about the dress malfunction as it wouldn't be appropriate for Geet.

Mr. Ahuja: How about we say that Geet's ankle twisted and hence Maan supported her and carried her back stage.

Principal Sir: Yeah this would be right, let's say this.

Hence it was decided and everyone heaved a sigh of relief that the fiasco had been taken care of and all left. Maan was about to leave when Geet spoke.

Geet: Thank you so much Maan, I don't know how to express my gratitude towards you. You didn't even know me and you not only protected me from humiliation in front of everyone, but were even ready to risk your self-respect for my sake, I am really very very grateful to you.

Maan wanted to silence her, tell her that she had every right on her, she was his Jaan and he was ready to give up his all for her but he kept quiet, he knew she hadn't even noticed him much till yesterday then how could he express his pure and divine love. They weren't even friends yet.

Geet (continued forwarding her hand): Can we be friends Maan?

Hayee… Maan was floating amongst the clouds, his angel wanted to be friends with him… wow… this was the best day of his life and he was completely lost in her while Geet was like scratching her head… didn't he wanna be friends??

Geet (clearing her throat trying to gain his attention): Ahem… ahem…

Poor Maan blushed… hayee… she again caught him lost in her… OMG he was making a complete and utter fool of himself.

Geet (waving her hand): Friends???

And Maan immediately held her hand as if never wanting to let go and Geet felt a strange magic in his touch as if the hold was for eternity.



FLASH BACK ENDS

When a loud noise outside broke Geet's thoughts as the dress fell from her hands and she was left all alone as she felt her life, her Maan slip away from her hands. "Her Maan, he wasn't even worthy of it" her mind screamed but her heart never agreed. Tears flowed from her eyes as she fell on her knees

Geet (self thought): Why Maan why? How could you do this to your love, your Mishti? Was all your love, all your care a mere mirage?
And Geet completely broke down while Maan jerked out from his sleep as if he could feel her pain, her sufferings, the cries of her burning heart. He had once again collapsed on the gym floor due to his harsh Tai-Chai stunts on self and he jolted out of his unconsciousness not able to bear her soul's accuses, blames and questions as if they were ringing in his heart cursing him for being alive after giving so much pain to his Jaan, his love, his life.


He wasn't able to bear it anymore and literally dragged his sore body and plunged it into the swimming pool trying to take out his frustration, his helplessness, his anger, his misery, his pain, wanting to heal his Mishti, dying to soothe her burning soul yet now able to reach out to her.

Precap: Maan got a deal from London will he accept it ???

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Chapter 2

Pinky: Arey Geet Di, where are you lost? You aren't even listening to me.

She said waving her hands in front of Geet's eyes and she snapped out of her past as the clouds of betrayal clouded all around and she once again submerged in the darkness of her present.

Pinky: Arey Di, you listening na. Adi proposed to me. I am so happy, I feel over the moon today.

When Geet didn't react Pinky got worried.

Pinky (shaking her slightly): Di, any problem?

Geet (jolting out of her thoughts): Nahi, nahi Pinky. I am so happy for you. So when are you making me meet Adi?

Pinky: Bahut jald di. But before that you need to come shopping with me tomorrow. (Geet tried to refuse but Pinky didn't let her speak). Please di, mana mat karna, you know na I really need advice in shopping. Please… pretty please… (she said making a sad baby face)

(Very soon di. But before that you need to come shopping with me tomorrow. (Geet tried to refuse but Pinky didn't let her speak). Please di, don't refuse, you know na I really need advice in shopping. Please… pretty please… (she said making a sad baby face))

Geet (couldn't resist and pulled her cheeks, she looked so cute): Acha theek hai my sister I will come with you. Ab toh happy na. Give me a lovely smile now.

(Ok fine, my sister I will come with you. Now you happy right. Give me a lovely smile now.)

Pinky (smiled widely): Thank you di. Chalo di got to go now, meet you tomorrow, bhool na mat.

(Thank you di. Ok di got to go now, meet you tomorrow, don't forget.)

Saying so Pinky left from there leaving behind a broken Geet who's past kept on torturing and tormenting her present.

Geet (self thought): Maan how could you so this to me? I was so happy that day in our lake park when you proposed me. Did your promises mean nothing to you? How could you Maan… How could you?

And she kept on weeping there till late evening before she finally dragged herself for a lonely walk till her flat crashing on the bed with tears rolling down her eyes as yet again she tossed on the bed empty stomach trying to forget her past but it kept on perturbing her and she finally had her sleeping medicine in an attempt to break free from her past but all her efforts were futile as her past followed her even in her dreams to torment her already scorching soul.

Here Pinky called up Maan super excited wanting to share the happiest moment of her life with her brother. He was not only her brother but her friend, her parents, her guide, her idol, her everything.

Pinky: Bhai, aap kaise ho? (Brother, how are you?)

Maan (escaping her question, how could he be without his life, his soul, his Geet): Tu bata how are you sis? (You tell, how are you sis?)

Pinky: I am really very very happy today Bhai. Aapke sharmile dost ne finally mujhe propose kar diya.

(I am really very very happy today Bhai. Your shy friend finally proposed me today.)

Maan always knew that Adi loved Pinky and so did she and it was only a matter of time before they both accepted their love and feelings for each other. Maan was really grateful of Adi for always being there for his sister through thick and thin, reaching out to her when even Maan couldn't.

Pinky (not getting any response from Maan, shouted on the phone): Bhai, aap ho na? Aapko meri aawaz sunai de rahi hai na?

(Brother, you there right? Can you hear my voice?)

Maan (jolting back to reality): Ha meri bahana, my little princess, I am so happy for you my bachcha. Congratulations dear and where is my buddy and now your would be life partner Adi.

(Yeah my sister, my little princess, I am so happy for you my child. Congratulations dear and where is my buddy and now your would be life partner Adi.)

Pinky: Arey Bhai, he is really scared of your reaction and is hiding away.

Maan (smiled slightly at his best friend's drama. Only Pinky and Adi had the power to light up a smile on his face and bring him out of his dark world of guilt and grief): Adi bhi na, full dramebaaz hai. Pinky just give him the phone.

(Adi is a total drama queen. Pinky just give him the phone.)

Adi (literally shaking while holding the phone and stammering): Maaannn…

Maan: Congratulations buddy. I am so happy for both of you, finally you proposed, I thought I would grow old by the time you would gather the guts to express your love. (Adi sighed in relief while Maan became serious). Promise me Adi that you will be with Pinky through thick and thin like you always have been.

Adi (crossing his heart and promising his life): Don't worry Maan, Pinky is my life. I will never let any harm come her way. (changing the topic) So how are you doing buddy?

Maan dodged the question but Adi was very well aware of the pain his best friend was undergoing but he too had no cure for it.

As Maan kept the phone he remembered the time he had proposed Geet.

Flash Back

Maan recalled how he had proposed her at their lake park by lightening the whole park with beautiful lightening, displaying his love via a message amidst the gorgeous lights.

Will You Marry Me

Mishti

How she had nodded for a yes with tears of happiness flowing down her eyes. They hugged each other finding solace merging into one.

They remained like that till eternity as the sun completely submerged into the horizon feeling content to be so close to each other. They silently vowed to never leave the other come what may wanting time to just stand still like that forever finding tranquility in each other's arms.

They broke apart after ages and looked into each other's eyes completely lost in the depth of their love, witnessing their reflection, their care, peeping into each other's soul, pouring their divine love via their eyes. Their trembling lips slowly closed the distance as they gently brushed against the other.

Maan very delicately took her lips in a soothing kiss as he softly kissed her. They both were lost in the feel of each other as their soft first kiss soon turned passionate and they were lost nibbling, sucking and kissing each other.

It felt as if the Earth stood still witnessing the purest Milan of two bodies one soul as the clouds burst open rejoicing their union as the trees swayed to the music of their love. Nature truly felt blessed today to have witnessed the sweetest union of the purest of souls.

But suddenly a storm broke the tranquility of the place as lightening cracked through the heaven as if depicting the turbulence that lay ahead of them and both were jolted out of their sweet union.

Geet felt scared while Maan cocooned her in his embrace as if comforting her that he was there with her today and always but little did he know that it would be him only who would destroy her soul beyond repair. Had he known he would have destroyed himself much before he ruined her.

Flash Back Ends

Thunder roared outside breaking Maan's chain of thoughts and he jolted out to the bitter reality of his present far far away from the sweet memories of his past with his Jaan, his Geet.

Lightening cracked the heavens as the thunder storm growled as if depicting the turbulence that struck their perfect lives. Heavens poured opened as tears flowed non-stop from Maan's eyes remembering how one day ruined their entire lives as he fell on his knees in anger, in frustration, in pain, in helplessness, in guilt just not able to reach his Jaan to heal her, to save her soul and in turn redeem himself.

Maan (self thought): Please Jaan, give me one chance, I beg of you. I will bear every punishment you bestow on me, I promise I will leave as if I never existed but please… (he broke down completely)

He cried his heart out not able to bear the pain, the grief, the remorse anymore.

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Chapter 5

Maan's company was soaring new heights each day but his heart and soul was dying by the second. How could he live when his Jaan was suffering each moment due to him but how was he even to die with the guilt of ruining her soul. The only thread that kept him alive was the hope that maybe one day Geet's Babaji would give him the chance to heal his angel.

When once day he received a call from Mr. Andrews who was the owner of the biggest software firm in London.

Mr. Andrews: Mr. Khurana, we would like to do partnership with your firm for our new software. We have heard a lot about your talent and it would be our honor if you could come down to London so that we could talk through the deal.

It was the perfect opportunity for Maan to expand his business. Already he had risen to great heights in India and was the most talked about business man of the country, not to mention the youngest and the best entrepreneur and the most eligible bachelor. Maan agreed and he was to leave for London the very next day.

Maan (Called up Adi): Adi, I will be coming over to London tomorrow for a couple of days for negotiating and signing a contract.

Adi: Wow buddy, this is great news. (to Pinky) Pinky, Maan is coming over tomorrow to expand his business in London.

Pinky (snatching the phone from Adi): Wow, Bhaiya, I am so happy you are coming tomorrow. (and she kept on blabbering while Maan was happy that at least he would get to meet his sister, his little princess, when on hearing no response from Maan, she shouted) Bhaiya, you listening na.

Maan: Yeah princess.

Pinky (super excited): Bhai, your company will be world famous soon, I am so proud of you. (and Maan was lost in his past).

FLASH BACK

Maan and Geet were in their final year when Maan planned to start his software firm, he had saved enough in the last few years for his start up.

Maan (came running to meet his Geet, really excited to share the best news of his life with his angel): Geet, Geet.

Geet (smiled, looking at her life, her love, her Maan): Kya hua Maan? (What happened, Maan?)

Hayee… Maan was completely lost in her angelic smile… what could he say, he toh was completely speechless, absolutely smitten by his Mishti.

Geet (snapping her fingers): Maan. (and poor Maan blushed, hayee… he always got caught drooling over his Jaan and his cheeks would go all red) Ab batao bhi kya baat hai? (Now tell what is the matter?)

Maan: Geet, I have finally saved enough to start up the software firm, Jaan.

Geet (jumping in joy): Wow Maan, I am so excited and happy. (really excited) So when are you planning to launch it and what will be its name.

Maan: Whenever my angel is ready we can launch it Jaan.

And Geet was completely lost in him. He wanted her to launch his dream, she was totally over the moon lost in his pure love for her.

Geet (tears brimming her eyes): Then let's do it now, Maan.

And both rushed to Maan's flat where he had purchased a nice desktop computer with the best configuration he could afford for making his softwares. He launched the company registration site and they together filled it. He named the company 'Softwares' wanting to dedicate it to his angel, his life, his Geet and she was completely blown over by his divine love for her.

A tear escaped Geet's eyes and Maan cupped her face, shaking his head.

Maan (wiping her tears): No Jaan, today is the day of celebration, so no more tears.

Geet (smiled amidst tears nodding her head): Maan I want our company to be the best not only in India but in the whole wide world.

Hayee… 'Our company', Maan was completely lost in her words, he loved it and felt so proud when she talked like she owned him.

FLASH BACK ENDS

When Pinky screamed on the phone not getting any response from Maan, breaking his thoughts.

Pinky (shouting on the phone): Bhai, you there?

Maan (jolting back to reality as a tear escaped his eyes, today he was inching closer to her dream and he couldn't even share it with her, he cursed himself for the dooriyan (distance) between them.) Hmmm…

Pinky (in a baby sad voice): Kya Bhai, you aren't even listening to me. (What brother, you aren't even listening to me.)

Maan: Sorry my princess, tell me na.

Pinky (getting serious, actually Adi and she were very worried about Maan and his health given his depression and they had tried really hard to convince him to shift to London but to no avail): Why don't you come and stay with us only Bhai, now that your business is expanding in London also, why don't you develop the products from here and manage the marketing, waise bhi (already) so many of your clients are outside India.

Maan again dodged her question by changing the subject but as he kept the phone down he was lost in the thoughts of his past.

FLASH BACK

It had been around a month since they had launched the company and Maan was facing loads of problem due to some official paper work and he was totally frustrated at the slowness of the whole process. He simply hated the delay being caused and was in a real foul mood today when Geet came to visit him.

Geet (as usual her bubbly and chirpy self): Maan, how are you?

Maan (grumpy face): I hate that guy he is so unprofessional, I so much wish I was starting our company in the Silicon Valley (America), the policies there so much favor the software companies.

Geet (really furious in at Maan, she really loved her country): What is this Maan, you want to leave your country, your mother land just because of a few glitches. Tomorrow I will say something which you don't like and you will leave me too. (saying so she turned her face away really angry at Maan)

Poor Maan gulped hard, he didn't want to leave his country and go, if was just that he was so frustrated after the phone call that he just said like that in anger but now how to manao his ruthi hui angel. (but now how to pacify his angry angel)

Maan kept her hand on her shoulder but she jerked it away, he tried placing his hand on the other shoulder but she removed it too. Oops, she was really very angry on him today and Maan was like scratching his head as to what to do now.

Maan (going around to face her): Please Jaan, at least listen to me na (she pouted and slightly turned her grumpy sad face away but she was looking at him from the corner of her eyes as if wanting to see how would he please her)

He just couldn't see his Jaan so sad and unhappy and he instantly went down on his knees holding his ears making a sad face with big puppy dog eyes.

Hayee… how could Geet not melt at that and she too went down on her knees and held his hands shaking her head.

Maan: Sorry Mishti, actually I just got off the call and he said he will take another week, hence I got really very frustrated.

Geet (nodded her head understanding him, pacifying him): Don't worry Maan, it will all get solved soon.

And she smiled at him, hayee… his day was made, he forgot all the anger, all the irritation and started work again with new zeal.

FLASH BACK ENDS

Maan (self thought as pain and grief filled him up): How can I not fulfill her wish, she is the only one for whom I am still alive, how can I dishonor her word, how can I leave.

Precap: Maan in London? Will they meet?
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Chapter 7

Maan went home and spent some time with Pinky and Adi.

Maan: Now that my dear buddy you have proposed (and Adi blushed) let's get you both engaged.

Pinky (really excited): Haan Bhaiya, neek kaam mein deri kaisi (Yeah brother, why delay in good things)

Maan stared at her and poor Pinky she was Sharam se pani pani, oops, but Maan smiled Hayee… both Pinky and Adi heaved a sigh of relief.

Maan (blinking his eyes): Sure my little princess.

Adi and Pinky smiled they were truly happy to be together.

After sometime Maan headed for the party. Here Geet also somehow collected herself wiping her tears and got ready for the party.

Mr. Andrews made Maan meet every associate and all were full of praises for what MSK had achieved in the world of computers at such a small age in so less a time. Maan was chatting with a few folks when suddenly there was pin drop silence in the hall as everyone's eyes were stuck admiring the gorgeous lady dressed in the mesmerizing white saree just entering the hall.

Maan looked up and he was completely smitten by his angel. He was seeing his Jaan, his love, his life after 20 long months and tears brimmed his eyes as he was totally lost in admiring her when the folks around him whispered breaking his thoughts.

Mr. Kent: Who is this gorgeous lady?

Mr. Garg: Arey, she is the daughter of the famous industrialist Mr. Handa. I have heard she is settled in London for the past year and a half or so.

Maan was stunned his angel left her country. Oh God… she never wanted to move away from India and here she was forced to settle abroad all because of him, he cursed himself as fresh tears brimmed his eyes.

Geet looked up and their eyes met but Maan died a thousand deaths looking at her lovely hazel eyes, which were always full of life, but now they were completely blank, absolutely lifeless as if someone had snatched the light from them and he fell more in the darkness of guilt as her eyes accused him for ruining her life, tearing her heart, destroying her soul. His eyes pleaded her to give him one chance, to hear him out but she just didn't have any strength left in her heart to let it break again.

Mr. Andrews (on mike): Mr. Khurana, I have heard you sing beautifully (reading from a paper and saying in broken Hindi) Kya aap humari mehfil mein apni Madhur awaz se char chand lagayenge. (Will you lighten our party with your melodious voice)

(He really enjoyed Bollywood numbers and loved to shake his leg on their tunes.)

Maan looked at Geet but she looked away as if he no longer mattered to her. Maan's heart broke to find so much hatred in her hazel eyes for him and he could control no longer control his emotions as he took the mike singing his heart out.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DjvaKN52A3A

Hum Bewafa Hargiz Na The

Par Hum Wafa Kar Na Sake

Humko Mili Uski Sazaa

Hum Jo Khata Kar Na Sake

Hum Bewafa Hargiz Na The

Par Hum Wafa Kar Na Sake

Humko Mili Uski Sazaa

Hum Jo Khata Kar Na Sake

(I was never unfaithful

Yet I could not be faithful to you

I have suffered the punishment

For the crime I didn't even commit

I was never unfaithful

Yet I could not be faithful to you

I have suffered the punishment

For the crime I didn't even commit)

Geet looked up and their eyes met. Maan pleaded her to at least give him a chance to speak. Her heart wanted to hear him out but her mind warned her to not fall in his trap again.


Kitni Akeli Thi Wo Raahein Hum Jinpar

Ab Tak Akele Chalte Rahein

Tujhse Bichhadke Bhi O Bekhabar

Tere Hi Gham Mein Jalte Rahein

Tuney Kiya Jo Shikwa

Hum Wo Gilaa Kar Na Sake

Hum Bewafa Hargiz Na The

Par Hum Wafa Kar Na Sake

Humko Mili Uski Sazaa

Hum Jo Khata Kar Na Sake

(How lonely were those paths

On which I kept walking alone so far

Even after separating from you, o unaware one

I have borne the pangs of your sorrows

Of what you have complained to me about

I didn't even commit those acts

I was never unfaithful

Yet I could not be faithful to you

I have suffered the punishment

For the crime I didn't even commit)

Maan remembered the times he had struggled alone when even his angel left him and wasn't there to heal him. He poured his heart out as he sang begging her to at least consider his plea, to once listen to her heart which still loved him, to give him that one chance for which he was still dragging his worthless life on.


Tumne Jo Dekha Suna Sach Tha Magar

Kitna Tha Sach Ye Kisko Pata

Jaane Tumhe Maine Koi Dhokha Diya

Jaane Tumhe Koi Dhokha Hua

Is Pyar Mein Sach Jhooth Ka

Tum Faisla Kar Na Sake

Hum Bewafa Hargiz Na The

Par Hum Wafa Kar Na Sake

Humko Mili Uski Sazaa

Hum Jo Khata Kar Na Sake

(What you may have seen or heard was true

But how much truth was there who knows

Maybe I deceived you

Or you might have misunderstood me

Matters of truth and falsehood, in this love

You could not even decide

I was never unfaithful

Yet I could not be faithful to you

I have suffered the punishment

For the crime I didn't even commit)

Each and every word of the song depicting the pain his heart and soul was undergoing since that day. Maan recalled the day their lives ruined beyond repair, yes what she saw was the truth but how much of it was the truth who knows his heart cried. Her heart cried too but the pain he had caused her was far more than she could ever bear. What she saw that day killed her soul, burned her heart alive. She was like a lifeless corpse, his betrayal having shattered her completely.

Maan's soul cried begging her to cross her heart that did it believe he could betray her ever but what was she to believe, she toh believed him only na that day, then why was all this now her soul cried.

All were spell bound and speechless by the melodious song Maan just sang, his voice depicting the painful emotions beautifully and perfectly but who knew that it was his dying heart singing for his Jaan trying to prove his love for her begging his Mishti for that one chance.

Geet left the party just not able to control her emotions anymore and Maan somehow excused himself and ran behind her.

Maan: Geet please listen to me Jaan.

Geet (tears pouring endlessly as she recalled his betrayal): You have lost the right to call me that. What more do you want to clarify, I gave you the chance that day despite your betrayal and you spoke your filthy black heart out pouring acid on our sacred love burning it to ashes.

Maan (tears brimming his eyes): Par mein us din majboor tha. (I was helpless that day)

Geet: Aur aaj mein majboor hoon. Mujhme ab aur tootane ki taqat nahi hai, chale jao yahan se. (And today I am helpless. I don't have any strength left to break again, go from here)

Maan: Please listen to me once, I beg of you.

Geet (jerking in anger as she remembered something): Toh ab tumne apna aakhari wada bhi tor diya. Bhool gaye us din tumhari bewafai ke baad maine tumse kewal ek vachan manga tha ki yadi tumne mujse ek pal ke liye bhi pyaar kiya tha toh tum mujhe kabhi nahi dhoodhoge, par tum toh mere pheeche yahan tak aa gaye. (she turned her face away) Arey, mein kaise bhool gayi tumne toh mujse kabhi pyaar kiya hi nahi.

(So now you have broken your last promise too. Your forgot that day after your betrayal I had asked you for only one promise, that if you loved me even for a second then you will never try to find me, but now you have reached here too after me (she turned her face away) Oh, how could I forget, you never loved me only)

Maan (breaking down completely, not able to bear her accuses): Nahi Geet aisa nahi hai, I really love you and have always loved you only.

(No Geet it's not like this, I really love you and have always loved you only.)

Geet (but she didn't let him continue as she wiped her tears completely determined not letting her heart open to him ever again): Bas Maan bahut ho gaya, just leave from here. (Enough is enough Maan, just leave from here.)

Maan (falling on his knees begging her): Please listen to me, I didn't break any promise Geet please…

Geet (losing herself completely in rage): You killed the naive, innocent Geet that day, because of you my whole life got destroyed, because of you I had to leave my beloved country, now just leave me alone, just go away from here this very instant (he tried to plead) go away, leave this town otherwise I will jump from this cliff right now.

Maan was horrified, he felt as if the ground collapsed under his feet, his Geet wanted to die because of him. Oh God, why didn't I just die before the day I burned our love ruining my Jaan killing her.

Maan: Nahi Geet, I am leaving London right now but you don't do anything to yourself. I will never ever try to contact you but please don't do anything rash I beg of you.

Precap: "Maan Singh Khurana destroys Indian business community reputation"

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Chapter 3
Next day as Maan was driving to his office his car suddenly jerked to a halt. As he got down from his car he saw a gol gappa wala on the road side and Maan was drawn into flash back.
FLASH BACK
Maan remembered how he used to hide behind the tree and secretly adore his angel gulp down the gol gappas one after the other…
Hayee… she looked so cute and adorable with one in her mouth while another in hand ready to be gulped down. He kept on secretly admiring her, never having the guts to do friendship with her till the day after the fashion show when they finally became friends and he hesitantly asked Geet out for gol gappas.
Maan: woh… woh…
Geet: Kya… woh… woh… Maan, now toh we are friends na then why are you hesitating so much.
Maan (gathering courage to ask his Mishti out. He could fight the whole wide world but when it came to talking with his Jaan his voice simply died, he somehow managed to speak): Will you have gol gappas with me, Geet.
Geet simply glowed at the name of gol gappa and Maan was completely lost in his radiating angel. She literally dragged him to the stall totally oblivious to the fact that Maan was absolutely lost in her feel.
Hayee… his Jaan held his hand… he was flying on cloud 9 today blushing slightly.
Geet started gulping down the tasty gol gappas while Maan was totally lost in drooling over his innocent beauty when suddenly her expression changed to that of tension as she frowned as realization drowned on her and she stopped eating breaking his day dreaming session. Maan was shocked as to what happened as she had just had two plates (her daily was at least 10 plates na)
Maan (worried): Kya hua Geet? Aren't they good today? (What happened, Geet? Aren't they good today?)
Geet (hesitantly): Nahi… woh… woh… actually…
Maan: What happened, we are friends now right Geet, you can tell me anything without hesitation.
Geet (not knowing how to say it, she didn't want to hurt him or belittle him): Nahi… (thinking of an excuse) yeah actually I was not feeling hungry (Maan raised an eyebrow and she gulped knowing he wasn't going to buy that especially when the whole college knew what a big gol gappa eater or rather gulper she was… she meekly added) Maan understand na, I really hog loads of them…
Maan (not able to understand): So what Geet, enjoy na yaar.
Geet (hesitantly added fearing his reaction): Maan woh… actually… (she whispered so that only he could hear) it will be very costly na.
Hayee… Maan was completely blown over today, he was totally overwhelmed by her care and concern for him, she thought so much about him… hayee... he was floating in heaven… but of course he had saved enough money for his gol gappa date with his love in fact he had been saving from weeks now and he had collected sufficient money for many more such dates (wink 😉).
Maan (smiled his mesmerizing smile): Don't worry Geet, I have saved enough, you just enjoy.
Tears brimmed Geet's eyes. Yesterday in the fashion show she had realized what a gem of a person he was but today she was simply awestruck at his care for her, did it mean that he liked her… she wondered? Actually she had hardly noticed him in college before he saved her self-esteem in the fashion show.
FLASH BACK ENDS
A series of loud horns jerked Maan back to the gloomy present as he realized he was standing alone in the middle of the road far far away from his love.
Here Pinky dragged Geet for shopping and poor Geet had no choice but to oblige. Pinky was completely lost in trying out the various dresses, she tried, re-tried and re-re-tired them and poor Geet had it.
Pinky: Di, see na how am I looking, no… no… wait… let me try this one.
And it went on like that, Pinky was talking to herself only majority of the time and Geet was a mere spectacular nodding her head now and then when her sight fell on an off shoulder white dress and she floated into the sweet memories of her past.
FLASH BACK
The fashion show was supposed to be tomorrow and Geet's partner met with an accident. It was supposed to be a couple fashion show and Raj had fractured his leg simply ruining Geet's chances of winning the trophy.
Geet (totally disheartened): Arey, ab mein kya karoon? (Now, what should I do?)
Pari (shrieked as an idea struck her): Geet, there is one guy who didn't participate yet, let's ask him out.
Geet (confused, thinking): Who?
Pari: Arey Maan.
Geet (shocked): Maan, who that Geek. Arey yaar he is only into computers and programs. He looks more like a machine than human yaar. I don't think he will even agree.
Pari (pulling her): Arey chal toh sahi Geet, it is our only chance. (Come on Geet, it is our only chance)
Pari dragged Geet to the computer lab where Maan was completely engrossed in the computer program.
Pari (sighed): Hayee… he is so handsome, kash ki yeh computer ki jagah mujhe bhi dekhta. (Hayee… he is so handsome, I wish he would look at me instead of the computer)
Geet (waking her): Arey sharam kar, you are committed. (Have some shyness, you are committed)
Pari: Arey toh kya, I can still drool over my Dhak Dhak (So what, I can still drool over my Dhak Dhak)
Geet shook her head, Pari ka kuch nahi ho sakta (nothing can happen of Pari). Here as if Maan could feel his angel's presence, he inhaled her divine aroma and as he turned around, he was stunned to find her so close to him and was completely lost in adoring his Jaan without even baiting an eye-lid.
Geet dragged a lost Pari towards Maan and she sighed to see even Maan lost (little did she know he was lost in her hehe 😆). Geet snapped her hands and poor Maan blushed at being caught drooling at her while even Pari came out of her dreaming session.
Maan: Yeah tell me Geet, how can I help you.
Geet (she had never talked to him so was hesitant to ask him): woh… woh… actually…
Maan: Yeah, please tell me.
Geet (mustering courage and spoke in one breathe): Actually my fashion show partner met with an accident and he can't participate. Since you are the only guy not participating would you be my partner.
Hayee… Maan was floating in air… Geet's partner… and he was totally lost in dreaming their ramp walk together while Geet got confused.
Geet (clearing her throat, trying to gain his attention): Ahem… ahem…
Poor Maan blushed more, he mentally slapped himself for making a complete fool of himself, this was the first time his Jaan was talking to him or rather the first time she had noticed him and he was behaving like a total idiot.
Maan: Yeah sure.

And Pari's mouth dropped wide open "Maan agreed". Maan was taking part in the fashion show. He was known to be a complete computer Geek just keeping to himself. All knew that he was on scholarship and had no financial backing and hence he hardly interacted much and didn't waste his time at all.

Geet (nudged Pari): Pari, close your mouth else a fly will enter.
And Pari shut her mouth totally embarrassed.
Geet: Thank you. So meet you tomorrow at the fashion show and yeah I will register your name.
Maan: Sure, thank you.
Geet literally dragged stunned Pari out.
Geet: Chal, we have loads of preparations to do.
Pari (still not able to believe her ears): I can't believe it, he agreed so easily.
Geet: Toh acha hai na (Its good na)
Geet too felt strange especially the look in his eyes, it was as if he really cared for her but dismissed the idea and got busy with in the preparations while Maan was still lost in dreaming about his Mishti when the lab assistant dropped something jolting Maan back to reality and he laughed at his condition.

Maan rushed home early that night and spent the whole time rehearsing the cat walk and arranging a decent pair of dress for himself while Pinky grew all suspicious.

Pinky: Bahi yeh sab kya hai. (Brother, what is all this?)
Maan (Hayee… his cheeks became all pink as he slightly blushed): woh… woh… actually there is a fashion show in our college tomorrow na so…

Pinky (shocked, dropping the book in her hand): Fashion show and you are participating, Bhai.

Maan (trying to sound angry when actually he was blushing away inside): Yeah, so what, can't I participate?
Pinky: Nahi you can but all of a sudden, is there something fishy Bhai, tell me na please please.
Maan (poor guy, his little sister will tease the hell out of him if she came to know he was flat on a girl and didn't even have the guts to say hi): Arey nahi someone met with an accident and since only I was left, hence I am participating as a replacement (he tried to escape his sisters questions as he told only the half irrelevant truth hehe 😆)

Pinky tried to grill him more but he distracted her by asking about dinner and Pinky was lost in the food talk hehe 😆 and Maan signed in relief.

He resumed his practice only after Pinky slept and he was at it the whole night after all he was going to walk with his love, his Geet.
Next day Maan was really conscious of being dressed in the black suit he had somehow arranged on rent while all were stunned seeing Maan the Geek turn into the most handsome and desirable hunk and all girls were lost drooling over his taut chest, chiseled body and bulging biceps so clearly visible in the body hugging suit as he had the top three buttons open. While Maan was on the look out of his angel and then magic happened he finally saw her, hayee… she looked so angelic in that white off shoulder dress that he was floating in heaven when she suddenly laughed… oh… her majestic smile… he was completely lost in her as his feet literally dragged him towards her.

Geet (turned around and was stunned to see Maan looking so handsome): Wow, Maan you are really looking out of this world today.

Hayee… Maan was blushing deep red, his angel found him handsome, hayee… he felt goose bumps erupt all over his body.
Geet (really excited): Chalo lets reach the fashion show arena otherwise we will get late.
FLASH BACK ENDS
Pinky tugged on Geet's shirt breaking her thoughts as she jolted back to the present miles away from the happy memories of the past which only caused her pain now as she was again reminded of his betrayal.
Pinky: Arey di where are you lost, look I selected my dress, how is it tell na, please.

And Pinky kept on blabbering as Geet tried to concentrate on the present but her eyes brimmed with unshed tears at the scorching pain her heart was bearing.

Geet: It is very nice… (when Pinky shrieked interrupting her)
Pinky: Wow di this white off shoulder dress is so awesome, it will look gorgeous on you…
Geet (tried to interrupt): Nahi Pinky…
Pinky (but she didn't let her argue): Arey di, you never buy anything, please na di… how my happiness buy it, you will look like an angel di, please please please
And finally Geet agreed, not knowing how to deny her or maybe her heart wanted to re-live their first meeting, the meeting when they became friends, the moment when she lost her heart to his care.
Precap: What happened that day at the fashion show.
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Dear just one thing... I know many hated the way Geet treated Maan but she is completely heart broken due to him...
I really hope you will enjoy this journey of their love, hatred... betrayal...???
Chapter 9

Geet's heart was trying to defend Maan when a new flashed.

"Mr. Andrews calls for an emergency press conference"

Mr. Andrews addressed the press: Before you guys start bombarding me with questions let me clarify the whole situation. Yes initially we were supposed to sign the deal today but due to some personal emergency Mr. Khurana had to leave town yesterday night itself hence we signed the deal papers before his leaving the country at the airport. I don't know why the media created such a hue and cry about his leaving back home. You guys ought to be more careful before flashing such baseless news as the word spreads like jungle fire. There was absolutely no truth in that news and the deal is very much on, in fact it is signed and the business community need not worry. Thank you all for your time and be more careful in the future and don't jump the gun before knowing the facts.

Geet's heart sighed in relief that at least he won't be ridiculed now, it was as if a great burden lifted from her heart while her mind jeered "see he does everything only for himself and his selfish reasons" but her heart knew he left the country to respect her last promise. Despite the pain, the suffering, the agony and anguish Maan had caused her heart still it couldn't hate him, in fact a part of her still loved him. Her heart couldn't bear to see him humiliated but neither could it win the battle against her mind as after all he did betray her.

The events at the airport the night before

After talking to Maan, Adi was really very worried as to what suddenly happened? Maan seemed all fine before the party then what went wrong? Though by Maan's conversation he was pretty sure it was to do with Geet but where did Maan meet her, was it at the party? Adi rushed towards the airport. He met a highly dejected and heartbroken Maan who had just bought the return ticket.

Adi (worried): Maan what happened suddenly (Maan just looked blankly at Adi as if he wasn't in this world anymore) what are you doing Maan, why are you playing with your dream rather life? Do you even imagine the repercussion of this decision of yours? All will mock at you, humiliate you, your whole reputation will be destroyed. The name, the fame you have made with such difficulty, facing extreme hardships will all go down the drain. No one will ever trust you or your company again and all will be destroyed.

But his words fell on deaf ears as Maan was too heartbroken to even realize the damage he was doing or maybe he knew it all but nothing mattered when compared to his angel. He won't break her heart again, he won't break his last promise whatever be the cost this time, he was willing to pay it. He was more than happy to weep blood than to see his Jaan, his life, his Mishti suffer more. No, he won't bow down to circumstances again, no ways, not this time. It was only his reputation, his credibility at sake, he was willing to just let go of it all.

Seeing his broken state Adi got really worried and shook him up.

Adi (shaking him): Maan aisa kya ho gaya, answer me damn it. (Maan what happened, answer me damit)

Maan (tears rolling down his cheeks as Geet's pained face and haunted eyes flashed in front of him): I can't break her heart again Adi, not this time.

Adi: Maan… but…

Maan (wiping his tears, full of determination): No if no but, I have made up my mind I am leaving London right away. Jo hoga dekha jayega. (whatever happens, I will face it later)

Adi knew it was next to impossible to deter Maan once he had made up his mind when an idea clicked him.

Adi: When is your flight Maan?

Maan: After 3 hours.

Adi: Then we can sign the deal now itself, just call up Mr. Andrews and we will finish it tonight.

Adi made Maan call up Mr. Andrews, but sensing Maan's condition, Adi himself handled the whole situation from there. Adi told him that there was a personal emergency due to which Maan had to head back home instantly so if they could sign the deal before his leaving it would be great.

Mr. Andrews agreed as he really wanted the deal and so it was finalized that he would sign two copies of the deal and send it over with his most trusted guy and Maan too will sign and return one copy. So finally the deal got signed thanks to Adi and he averted a major disaster which would have completely and thoroughly destroyed Maan's reputation.

Two weeks passed

Here almost two weeks had passed since the incident but neither Maan nor Geet were able to recover from their meeting.

It was as if sleep evaded Maan completely, as soon as he would close his eyes, his Mishti's broken and dejected face flashed in front of his eyes accusing him of destroying her tender heart, of betraying her and he would jolt back awake screaming "No, I can never ever betray you Jaan" but only to realize he was all alone far far away from his angel with absolutely no way to reach out to her, to heal her broken heart.

He was completely broken but still somehow he managed to work after all it was her company how could he fail her again. He would keep on working tirelessly all day long but as the night stuck he would start wandering in search of peace, some days walking endlessly, some days practicing Tai- Chai mercilessly

while some days just torturing himself brutally bleeding and limping but still solace evaded him and he was falling deeper and deeper into the black hole of darkness as the blackness of remorse was slowly engulfing his soul completely.

Would Babaji grant him the one chance he was so desperately seeking before he perished completely?

On the other hand, the meeting with Maan had ripped open Geet's just healing wounds and she just couldn't get a grip on her life. She would miss her college lectures, some days even miss taking the computer classes and would keep on weeping endlessly re-living his betrayal every second of her existence.

As if his betrayal wasn't enough she recalled his nasty words "I never loved you, in fact I was just using you", "You are a bloody burden on me" and she covered her ears trying to block out his sinful voice stabbing her heart and soul with his cruel, sick, hateful, deceitful, mean, horrible, gruesome, atrocious, ghastly and brutal words, abusing and burning her love, making a mockery of her feelings, tearing her heart apart, scorching her soul, destroying her as she completely broke down just not able to bear those torturous memories of his unfaithful and cruel love.

Here Adi was really worried about Maan's condition. Though Maan pretended to be absolutely fine when he talked with Adi and Pinky, Adi knew his dear friend inside out and could feel the pain he was undergoing. Adi really wished to reach out to him when an idea stuck him.

Adi: Pinky how about we both go to India this weekend. It will be a surprise for Maan.

Pinky: But Bhaiya will be completely busy with work na, he won't get any time.

Adi (thinking more): Hmmm, how about we get engaged there itself then toh he will have to take out some time from work. Yeah, we will tell him that since he is so busy and won't get time to visit London, we thought of coming to India and getting engaged as you had your holidays. What say?

Pinky (really excited): Yeah, that's perfect and we will get to spend some quality time with Bhaiya. It has been ages since we all spent time together and had fun. Since we have come to London no one had any time and even when Bhaiya came he had to rush back the same day (she made a baby sad face)

Adi pulled her cheeks to cheer her up, he couldn't bear to see his Pinky so sad not after what all she had been through. She was his princess too and both Maan and Adi made sure that she was far far away from any pain and no harm could ever touch her. She didn't even know how broken her brother was, they always masked it from her.

Pinky rushed to the computer class and today finally she found Geet.

Pinky (very relieved to see her): Arey Di, kitne din ho gaye (so many days passed) where were you? On phone also you didn't say much expect that you were on leave but you sounded so sad that I got so worried, is there any problem kya di? Can I help?

Geet (smiled slightly sensing the genuine concern in Pinky's voice, otherwise Maan's betrayal had lifted Geet's faith from mankind): Nahi my dear sister, I am absolutely fine (her heart winced in pain as she lied but how could she sadden her litter sister) I had slight head ache and so thought of taking rest.

Pinky (worried, making baby sad face): Oh… poor you, I know headaches are so bad na. Ab aap kaise ho? (How are you now?)

Geet (pulling her cheeks): I am much better now, you don't worry, smile na my dear sister.

Pinky smiled, her smile always lifted Geet's mood and brought a smile on her face and she too smiled slightly.

Pinky (super excited): Di, Adi and I are planning to get engaged this week itself. We are planning to go to India as bro is really busy and he can't come here. You also come na please please.

Precap: Will Geet agree to go back to India for the engagement?

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I know you guys really wanna know what happened that day, believe me even I am dying to tell, but guys please have a little patience na. First I need to build the story as in explain their present as well as the beautiful past their shared together, so that you can experience their love... guys trust me and please enjoy the flash backs as well as it's important for u to know and understand their bond and pain then only u will be able to feel why he is guilty and why she is hurt to this extent. Then only u will cherish their past and feel their present.
Chapter 6

Next day Maan caught the early morning flight to London and reached there by afternoon. Adi and Pinky received him at the airport and he was happy to meet his little princess.

Maan (Hugging both Adi and Pinky): I am so happy for you both. Meri dua hai ki Babaji tum dono ki zindagi khushiyon se bar de.

(I am so happy for you both. My prayer is that Babaji fills your lives with happiness.)

All got emotional as Adi and Pinky forced Maan to have lunch before he headed for the meetings. After lunch Maan immediately headed for Mr. Andrew's office for the meeting and he was really very very impressed with Maan's dedication, commitment and completely blown over by his intellect. Maan's one presentation and all were totally gaga over him. Had it been any other firm Mr. Andrews would have forced his terms and conditions but he simply didn't wanna lose his chance to work with MSK, the computer whiz, and hence agreed to all the changes Maan wanted in the contract.

Mr. Andrews: Mr. Khurana I am highly impressed by you. Your talent surpasses what all I had heard about you and it will really be my privilege to work with your firm on this crucial project. I will get all the papers printed as per our discussion and then we will sign it tomorrow.

Maan nodded and was about to leave the conference room when Mr. Andrews added.

Mr. Andrews: Mr. Khurana, I am throwing a party tonight for all my associates and it would be my honor if you could attend it.

Though Maan never liked parties especially without his Jaan but he agreed as it would be good for the partnership as he would get to meet all the folks.

In the few hours that Maan had spend with Mr. Andrews he was completely blown over by Maan and he almost started treating him like his own son having great respect for the person that Maan was. Well such was the magnetic, dynamic and charismatic personality of our MSK that anyone who ever came in contact with him even for a minute could never ever forget him, but look at the irony of nature that the one and only person who mattered the most to Maan, his love, his life, his Jaan had been destroyed by his very presence on Earth.

Here Geet's father called her up.

Mr. Handa: Geet, I need you to attend Mr. Andrews party tonight.

Geet no longer liked to attend any parties, she had simply given up on life, and however hard she tried she just wasn't able to overcome his betrayal. She tried to interrupt 'but'

Mr. Handa (cutting her): No if no but, I am stuck here and hence won't be able to come over to London so you only need to attend as my representative. I will send you the address so just go.

Poor Geet had no choice and finally agreed to attend the party. As she kept the phone down she was lost in the memories of her beautiful past.

FLASH BACK

It was the last day of the college and the final year students had organized for a grand farewell party. Geet was really very very excited.

Geet (jumping in joy): Maan, I am so excited, we will have loads and loads of fun.

Though Maan didn't like parties much but still he used to attend with Geet as he simply loved to be with his Jaan, his Mishti. Hayee… he would just keep drooling over her throughout the party so it hardly mattered where he was. (hehe 😆)

Geet dragged Maan and was completely busy in trying out the various dresses in her wardrobe trying to find the perfect one for tonight.

Geet: Maan is this one nice… nahi nahi let me try this one, its color is better na, wait.

And Maan toh was completely lost in his angel and was admiring her without even baiting an eyelid. Hayee… she looked so beautiful in whatever she wore. Geet had been blabbering for ages now when she finally realized that he wasn't even paying attention and she was like 'O'.

Geet waved her hands in front of her but no luck, arey he toh was lost in the dreams for their future na, she really got frustrated when an idea stuck her naughty mind.

Geet (shrieking in his ears): Mmmaaannn…

And poor Maan jerked out of his dreaming session completely flushed and embarrassed and blushing hard, hayee… his cheeks went all red at being caught again.

Geet: Maan what is this yaar, help me find a dress na, tell me what should I wear.

What was the poor guy to say, he toh just loved her the way she was pure, simple and innocent but he helped her find a beautiful black color dress. Hayee… she really looked gorgeous, nahi nahi out of the world, Maan corrected his mind. Maan wore a black suit to the party.

Both were looking amazing and complementing each other perfectly. As they walked in all started hooting after all they were the hottest and most happening couple in college and all swore by their love.

The party was going on in full flow and as usual Maan was lost niharofying (admiring) his princess when the whole gang surrounded them.

Chorus: Maan we want you to sing today, please.

Yeah Maan was a fabulous singer, but he only sang for his angel, seeing him lost in his Jaan they pleaded Geet.

Chorus: Geet, yaar, Maan ko kaho na, he only sings for you, ask him to sing on you today for us na, pleaseee.

Hayee… Geet blushed, yupp he really loved her.

Geet (tugging at Maan's sleeve): Please Maan sing na.

How could Maan ever deny his Jaan

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6feZZMXzJaE

Dekha Tumko Jab Se, Bas Dekha Tumko Yaara
Tumse Koi Achha Hai Na Tumse Koi Pyaara
Yun Nazre Na Phero Tum, Mere Ho Mere Tum

She's What I Want, She's What I Love
She's Sent To Me From The Heaven Above
She's So Cool, She's So Fine
Out Of Ten I'd Give Her Nine

Hey, Eh Eh Eh Hey
Dekha Tumko Jab Se, Bas Dekha Tumko Yaara
Yea, Dekha Tumko Jab Se, Bas Dekha Tumko Yaara
Tumse Koi Achha Hai Na Tumse Koi Pyaara
Yun Nazre Na Phero Tum, Mere Ho Mere Tum

Maan started singing for his Jaan, his love, his Mishti, his everything. There was so much pride in his eyes for his sweet heart that Geet was completely lost in those mirrors of his soul reflecting just pure and divine love for her.


Keh Do Na, Keh Do Na, You Are My Soniya
Hey, Keh Do Na, Keh Do Na, You Are My Soniya

Maan softly dance around Geet, nudging her to reply and she too took a mike to sing.


Hey, Aa Aa Aa Ha
Dekha Tumko Jab Se, Bas Dekha Tumko Yaara
Tumse Koi Achha Hai Na Tumse Koi Pyaara
Yun Nazre Na Phero Tum, Mere Ho Mere Tum
Keh Diya, Keh Diya, You Are My Soniya

Geet sung reciprocating his true love via not only her words but her eyes as well and both were lost in the eye-lock as the gang danced around them totally mesmerized by their divine love for each other.

The Chorus separated Maan and Geet and Maan continued singing while Geet Complimented him

Teri Mohabbat Mein Yeh Dil Deewana Hai
Is Mein Hai Meri Kya Khataa


Haan, Yeh Dil Churaane Ka Achha Bahaana Hai
Mujhko Hai Pehle Se Pataa


Milne Mein Humko Kitne Barson Lage Hai Yaara

Aisi Khushi Ke Pal To Phir Na Aaye Dobaara

Aisi Khushi Mein Yaara Yeh Nasha Kya Kam Hoga
Keh Do Na, Keh Do Na, You Are My Soniya


Hey, Keh Diya, Keh Diya, You Are My Soniya

Hey, Paagal Banaaya Hai Teri Adaaon Ne
Mujhko To Hai Tera Nasha

Maan danced around Geet while she blushed at his admittance before adding


Hmm, Maine Bhi Palkon Mein Tumko Chhupaaya Hai
Tu Mere Khwaabon Mein Basa

Betaabi Kehti Meri Aaja Baahon Mein Bhar Loon

Jeena Hai Teri Hoke, Milke Yeh Vaada Kar Loon

Dono Ne Kasmein Li Hai, Pyaar Kabhi Na Kam Hoga

Maan extended his hand and Geet took it as she submerged completely in him placing her head over his chest and they hugged each other completely oblivious to their surroundings as the whole gang danced around them truly blessed to be witnessing the divine love of the purest of souls.


One, Two, Three, Hey!

FLASH BACK ENDS

Thunder roared outside as Geet opened her eyes to find herself all alone hugging the empty infinite space desperately missing the warmth of her love but his remembrance caused only pain now as tears rolled down their eyes.

Precap: Maan and Geet face to face

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