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I absolutely loved this chapter! I love how you incorporated their pasts into it, and I love the outcome of the whole thing. The religious divide... that's always a bit of a grey area with me. But still, for the purposes of the story, I think it was great how Khushi and Arnav ended up back together, and still kept fighting! 😆 I'm glad that they compromised at the end though, about where to stay.
I think Ziyad's character is brilliant. He's so wise and caring. He's a wonderful character, and I love the way you have portrayed him.
Please write an epilogue because I don't want your story to be over just yet! I think I'd also want to see whether Anjili accepts Imad, and agrees to marry him. but I think that'd be a long way off.
Anyway, fantastic chapter, I honestly loved it!
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