FINAL PART: our lives, together! On pg 24

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anime_gal

@anime_gal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

MuAaah...!!!!!! luvd it...😃

AwEsuM..EnDn.👏...TAnx For de Pm..

do pm me wen u rite any udr stories...plz..noo tragdz...😉

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meghal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

very nice work

i loved it

keep writing👏

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

awesome...

will miss it for sure...

fab ending to this beautiful story...

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Samiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

a perfect ending to a perfect love story dear...

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

oh dear...maya its a really really really...lovely, stunning,sweet,adorable,faboulous...words are less to say...ending...

I just really love this OS one of my fav os..i really didn't want to end it...when i finished read..tears comes on my eyes😭 can't say hw i m feeling dear..its a very best os n i love the concept a lott...last part really can't think i wait fr pm everyday..nw u will not..but everything has a end I know...

I love the way khushi n arnav carried their resposibility as parents really..love it..

A huge thxx to u dear fr such a wonderful os..❤️ u a lott n this os..mwah...

I really want you to start a new os or ss or ff on arnav khushi...our ArShi...if u do plz plz let me know n pm me ok dear...

again huge thxx fr ur lovely os..salute to ur hard work..

sorry i take a lil bit more time to read my comment...but its all my feelings tht i express...tc dear..don't forget me..

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Srijanee

@luvflicksgirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Beautifully written will miss this ff 😭

thnks for the pm

please start a new one

i so loved this one 😭

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shabriya

@shabriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

hey perfect perfect ending,the leap of years and the way u put the story in them was realy nyc,,,it realy had the usual filmy ending of ne drama,but in ur own way too,,i realy loved it,,it was sooo wat can i say,,i felt happy inside with ur last line,,as if a beautfuly cmpltd story,,i loved it,,wat mre can i say????👏GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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staryeyes

@staryeyes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Very beautiful and touching ending...couldn't have been any better...brought tears of joy in my eyes reading through their family bond...Well done👍🏼. Thanks.🤗

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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

luved it. that there luv for each other hasnt died or been hindered after all these years of marriage. luv the family photo towards the end. thx a lot for the pm