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molten_lava

@molten_lava

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: balashiv15
oye Rachel you are there

yup, I'm here! And unfortunately Lavanya is falling in love with Arnav. 😈 ha ha!

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#332

It was awesome! Expected a even more longer update! 😉

Its okay! Waiting for the enxt update!

Loved it! :) Ahh! So khushi and arnav meet finally ALONE! :)

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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#333

YAY! You updated! I haven't read it as yet but I am sure it will be good. I am just so happy I thought I should comment before I read it. Thanks for the update :)

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waterunder11

@waterunder11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#334

aaahhh no you didnt stop right there! one thing is common in all writers, they know exactly what their readers want :)
can not wait till the next update!

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#335

Awesome update! Can't wait to read more!

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tata_tata

@tata_tata

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#336

what a nice bollywood-filmy concept.. Arnav in a mafia!! nice :) Khushi's punch.. wah!! Hari uncle.. LOL!! Akash doctor!! Payal/Nani/Mami out.. Shyam the snake is still a snake.. so thats good.. But you kept even Anjali out of this.. or maybe she will come later as Shyam's accomplice :P

I've read you other OS - faithful friend and i had really liked that.. now this is also very well written.. i am waiting to see which way this goes..

Cheers

PS: Someone kicked your head!!!! no wonder you wrote about the mafia world :) take care and hope you get well soon..

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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#337

Yipee!! Finally they bumped...I mean crashed into each other. I wonder if she will recognise him. Loved the chapter. Couldn't stop myself from commenting one more time. GOOD JOB.

Btw, I hope you are better now. Do take care of yourself. Have you seen a doctor? Injury on the head should always be taken seriously, unless its really minor. Take care :)

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Saniya

@saniya.x

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Posted: 13 years ago

#338

Loved the update.<3 Arnav's past is really painful, I feel for him! Lavanya's falling for him, ;) & finally Khushi and Arnav bumped into each other, I really wonder if she's going to recognise him or not! You need to update this VERY SOON! :)

& Take of yourself! :)