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SillyPepper

@SillyPepper

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Heya! I read the entire thing in single go!

I love ur writing style...The sexual tension, emotional turmoil n funny liners👏

I can't believe this s ur first attempt in writing sumthing...

Way 2 go...

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nyxx

@nyxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Just read the entire FF in one go, and Im glad I didnt miss before it was too late. You write wonderfully, maintaining the intensity, the sexual tension, and suspense, and still moving the story forward along with hits of teasing, and laughter. All in good balance!!

Please do pm me when you update next or I'll surely be checking this thread frequently!! :)

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Now i am tired of praising you... every update u give is always so so beautiful!! And I love getting ur PMs.. I literally have a huge grin on my face as soon as i see ur PM in my inbox..

Khushi loves being married to him... awww... loved dis update to the core!!!!

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Applebee

@Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva
I get back from work to find not one but two updates!! Must be my lucky day.!! Ok first off where do you come up with this stuff? Its pure genius.. I loved every single bit of it.. Right from his inner monologue to her tripping and falling into his arms..lol
Can't wait to see where you go with that..lol.. Now if you just make the 6 month thing disappear, it'll be perfect.. But then again I'm loving the manipulative Arnav.. Fabulous work

Awww! That's so nice of you to say so! Thank you! :D Six months' thing will disappear, eventually. But Arnav is not ready to admit what he once felt for her. So the six months is a crutch for him to lean on to indulge his feelings for her 😆 The boy is a bit of a scaredy cat, if you don't mind me saying!

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Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: aria009hera
Now i am tired of praising you... every update u give is always so so beautiful!! And I love getting ur PMs.. I literally have a huge grin on my face as soon as i see ur PM in my inbox..

Khushi loves being married to him... awww... loved dis update to the core!!!!

Oh please. Please don't get tired of praising me! ^_^ I love your praises! But just for this sweet little message, I'll update ASAP today 😆

Edited by bingala - 13 years ago

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Koeli

@Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Nice part but expected a bit more emotions. Overall good

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Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

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asumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

i read the whole thing at a time and i say it was like poetry! amazing !

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Applebee

@Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: Appy_Indy
Nice part but expected a bit more emotions. Overall good

THANK YOU! I am glad you thought enough to comment on it :) The thing is, they are both burning up with emotions and chemistry as we speak. Khushi needed to get out of just saying "Arnavji.." and melting into a puddle of gooey want. I wanted to show what's on her mind as well. After all, don't you think it's time for her to start holding her own with him?