THE GOLDEN MOON- MANEET FF part 5 updated pg 26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

hei amazing update .. Maan is already falling in Geet's charm... n he trusts every lie of hers ... starting of a complicated relationship ... very well written ..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta
hei Netz amazing re... loved d starting...

n Loveeed d description of DhiMaan... I cud see MAAN there n was gonna faint

cont soon.. else I m gonna poke u every now n then

see u dint hv 2 poke me.. im ur gd frn na.. 😉so i posted d updt.. ei thnx bol... paisa lagena...😛😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta
hei amazing update .. Maan is already falling in Geet's charm... n he trusts every lie of hers ... starting of a complicated relationship ... very well written ..

hmmm defntly complicatns ll surely b there.. bt how its formed orr solvd.. u hv 2 wait 4 dat lil bit...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: preethia
loved the update
so she has come to earth to meet her maan
dont know how these lies will unfold in later stage

thnx 4 ur comnt dr... yup dats gonna b basement of d story structure...

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

so they meet...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

part 2????????
nice part...
so Maan has seen Geet and she has introduced herself as Geetika...
cont soon...

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punam2712

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

GREAT STORY

LOVE THE HISTORICAL ASPECT

WILL YOU POST THE INDEX ON PAGE 1

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Netz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: punam2712
GREAT STORY
LOVE THE HISTORICAL ASPECT

WILL YOU POST THE INDEX ON PAGE 1

sure dr.. i ll post it...

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rim33

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

AMAZING keep up the good work :)

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Alysia03

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

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khub valo hoeche starting...starting of a great story i think...but i want more and more of this...plsss update lekh ei story tar aro...ar ha tui jekhane bolechis, "it was a different time,when the sun and the moon was present at the same time in sky...okhane jadi apppropriate kono pic dis...tale darun hobe"