Hie guys!! Finally after a long wait, I am updating this FF!
The previous part got 21 pages of comments!! Thank you so much! I am so glad! At one time I was planning to stop this FF as it wa snot getting much response. 😆
Thank you so much.
Hope you like this 😊
This part is dedicated to my favourite commentor "Pyrarkh". Thank you for posting looong comments.
And this is dedicated to my new friend "fire.whiskey". I love your criticism and honest opinions.
Since I am updating after a pretty long time, here is the "STory So Far".
STory So far
Arnav is in Delhi and Khushi is living in Mumbai. Anjali has a son named Shubham. We get to know that Khushi left Arnav 6 years back and the reason is known just by Anjali who has promised Khushi not to reveal it to anyone. Khushi gave Anjali an envelope the day she left to be delivered to Arnav. Arnav still hopes that he'll find her one day.
Khushi is a mariage counsellor. She recieves Lavanya from the airport who has just came to Mumbai. Lavanya doesn't know why Khushi left Arnav but she knows that Khushi still loves Arnav deeply and she is all set to bring them together. She calls Arnav and tells him that she is in Mumbai.
Arnav has to come to Mumbai for a meeting and a function. He tells Lavanya that he'll meet her when he lands in Mumbai.
The next day Lavanya meets Sana, who is a 5 year old child. Khushi does not reveal the relationship between her and Sana. Later in the night, we get to know that Sana is the reason for Khushi's happiness, the only reason she wants to live. Sana calls Khushi "Mom".
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Khushi smiled and hugged Sana back. She felt peaceful when she was with her. She forgot all her pain, all her anxiety by just seeing Sana smile. She was her everything now. Khushi sighed and forced herself to sleep.
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"Di, where is Shubham? We are getting late. Quick!",Arnav said, as he got his suitcase downstairs.
"Hari Prakash, keep it in the car",he ordered. A sleepy Hari Prakash obeyed.
"He is not getting up Chotey! What will I do with this boy",Anjali said from upstairs.
Arnav shook his head in frustration and ran upstairs to ANjali's room.
Shubham was lying there peacefully on his baby pillow. Arnav smiled.
"Hey buddy!",he said as he jumped onto Shubham.
"Get off mE!!!",Shubham yelled.
"You can sleep in the car. Now get up you lazy boy!",Arnav said ,shaking Shubham vigorously, who tried to push his hands away but in vain.
"Hmm.. So you are not going to get up",Arnav said. He picked up Shubham in his arms and signalled Anjali to go down.
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"Get up you lazy lass!",Khushi shouted at Lavanya.
"When did my sleep become your enemy!",Lavanya said in her sleep.
"Even Sana has got up! Have some shame Lavanya",Khushi said and Sana giggled.
Lavanya showed Khushi her tongue, her eyes still shut.
"Let it be",Khushi said, frustrated and gave up.
"C'mon mom! You can do it!",Sana shouted from the other side of room.
Khushi turned around.
"Ahaan! You enjoying this right!",Khushi said to Sana who chuckled,"Why don't you try and wake up this Sleepy Head!"
"Sure",Sana obeyed and walked upto the bed where Lavanya was snoozing off.
She gently leaned down towards Lavanya's ear. Khushi curled her eye brows.
"PIMPLEEE! Get up and wash it!!! Quick! A big Pimple on your face Lavanya Di!",Sana shouted in Lavanya's ear.
Lavanya got up instantly and started to panic.
"What! Pimple on my face! Oh My God! No No!",she panicked and ran to the washroom.
She came back in a few minutes.
"Where is the pimple?',she asked confused.
But she was answered by the loud laughter of Sana and Khushi.
"Don't tell me this was just for waking me up",Lavanya said,irritated, keeping her hands on her waist.
Khushi nodded and Hi-Fied Sana, who giggled even more. Lavanya scrunched her nose and pounced on Sana.
"You little naughty girl!"
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"Di, here are the keys. You check out the rooms. I'll just make some calls and come",Arnav said to Anjali handing over the keys of their hotel rooms to her.
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"Khushi! can you pass me the towel please",Lavanya screamed from the bathroom.
"Yes madam",Khsuhi obeyed and passed on the towel.
Just then Lavanya's cell phone rang.
"Lavanya, your mobile",Khushi said.
"My hands are all wet. Whoever is it, tell them to call later",Lavanya said from the washroom.
"Okay",Khushi said and went upto the table where her cell phone was kept. It was an unknown number.
She pressed that green button and said into the mouthpiece, "Hello?".
Arnav suddenly felt a breeze around him. Was this her melodious voice? His breathing was turning heavy. A tear welled up in his eyes.
"Kh...Khushi?",he said, with much effort.
Khushi heart skipped a beat as she heard his voice after 6 long years.
"Arnav...",she whispered
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How was it? Did I make you excited? Sorry.. I ahd to stop there... you know why 😆 *evil laughter*
SPOILER ALERT~ Hold your breath... coz ... Arnav and Khushi are going to meet ... soon...
I started a new FF ~ You are the magic in me". Read and comment if you're interested. 😊
And I wrote a new OS too.. It is slightly mature..
Please like and comment. I'll post the next part when this part gets 20 pages of comments. 😉
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P.S ~My friends call me Sleepy head 😆
Edited by supriya.ipkknd - 13 years ago
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