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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
gr8 part nisha! i don't like the promo though. it kind of scares me. continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good job............. keep it up
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 2

It was morning Angad and Kripa were snuggled up in each other arms somehow they landed on the floor, Sara just came bursting in she thought to herself so sweet couple she didn't want to wake them up but she had to so she went in to Kripa and Angad's ear and screamed wake up.

Sara: Wakeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee uppppppppppppppppppppppp!!!

Kripa and angad: HUH WHAT SABINA KI BACHI WE ARE COMING TO GET YOU

Sabina went and was laughing and running all over the house angad and Kripa took pillows and kept on hitting her finally she fell on the sofa angad and Kripa just tickled her for an 1 hour she was laughing.

Sabina: k stop im sorry bhaiya and di

Kripa: you better be come on me you and angad are going shopping

Angad: umm Kripa hunz when did we decided that im going shopping noo but I did shopping with you yesterday

Kripa: hunny that was for you now im taking my lil sis out to shop so credit card please sweety

Angad: no way I dunt trust you girls with my credit card I have to keep an eye on you

Kripa: fine be that way ill use my own 22 credit cards that I have

Sabina: 22 credit cards arite di lets go shopping

Angad: you guys go I hate shopping after what we went through yesterday I aint going shopping anyways im going to the club with the guys.

Kripa: fine see if I care

Just as angad was about to go kripa pulled him she was about kiss him then she screamed in his year

Kripa: YOU MONKEYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!

Sabina and kripa went running and angad chased them luckily Sabina made into her room and locked the door he was still after Kripa went into the room she was about to lock the door when angad came bursting in he grabbed kripa before she could go anywhere angad pulled her and pinned to the wall she was trying to break out but she cant .

Kripa: angad leave me

Angad: no for what you did with me downstairs im not leaving you anywhere say sorry and I'll let you go.

Kripa: no

Angad: fine then im not going to let you go

Angad slowly kiss kripa on the cheeks then almost kissed her lips kripa just kicked him on his leg and she ran into the bathroom.

Kripa: you loserr ha-ha

Angad: ow kripa you idiot when you come out you will pay for this

Kripa took a shower and changed into a jeans and a tank top it was white she wore white earrings and a ring a bracelet with eyeliner and mascara and came out just then angad grabbed her pulled they were on top of each other he was top of her they were just starring into each other eyes kripa was trying to get off but he was to heavy for her.

Kripa: leave me angad noww

Angad: no ill keep you here until you say sorry for kicking me

Kripa: no

Angad: Fines then I keep you here until you say sorry

Kripa: oh angad you're so stubborn

Angad: that I know I can keep you here as long you want

Kripa: ok acha baba im sorry now please let me go

Angad: no give me my kiss first then ill let you go

Kripa: uff angad tum bhi na

Kripa was about to kiss him just then phone rang

Angad: grr did this phone have to ring now

Kripa: I know our special time go pick it up

Angad: its Rahul

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Phone

Angad: hey Rahul

Rahul: hey buddy this girl is like in love with you and she wants to date you and stuff her name is Chloe just date her please she is my girlfriend's friend.

Angad: no if Kripa hears this she will kill me

Rahul: dude where did kripa come with this who cares its not like she is ur gf or anything

Angad: umm dude we are dating now

Rahul: what when how

Angad: ill explain all that later I have to go

Rahul: yeah….i know go romance with your girlfriend

Angad: ok whatever so see yeah tonight for poker then

Rahul: yup

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Kripa: going to play poker tonight

Angad: ya babe its guys out 2night so ya

Kripa: then us girls can have girls night out

Angad: ya so where we

Kripa: umm you were about give me a kiss

Angad: (smiles) yes

Kripa and angad were so close just then doorbell rings

Angad: damn people for coming between us grr

Kripa: baby calm down

Kripa gave angad a quick kiss and then went downstairs to open the door.

Tanya: Hey Kripa get ready me laila asha Chloe narissa are going out come on it's girls night out

Kripa: alright

Kripa went upstairs angad was lying on the bed as soon as he came he pulled her on the bed Kripa was now on top of angad.

Kripa: angad leave me

Angad: where are you going

Kripa: Tanya is here me and our friends going out today

Angad: oh ok anyways I bought you something and I want you to wear it

Angad brought Kripa nice long blue skirt and it was beaded and the top was halter wit beads also matching earrings. And matching shoes.

Kripa: angad oh my god this so freaking gorgeous I love it so much thanks baby your to sweet.

Angad: nothing is too good for my girl

Kripa: come here

Kripa pulled angad they were really close they could hear each other's heartbeats and they were lip locked for 5 minutes just then kripa realized Tanya was downstairs she pushed angad off he fell on the floor kripa was laughing.

Kripa: aww im sorry

Angad: its ok

Kripa just gave angad a hug and left took a shower came out she curled her hair and put earrings.

Kripa: so how do I look

Angad: you look drop dead sexy

Kripa: thanks angad k bye baby love you

Kripa gives angad a kiss and hug and goes down

Tanya: oh gurl you took forever nice dress man

Kripa: thanx well umm sorry I was with angad

Tanya: whatever lets go

Tanya laila asha Chloe Narissa Kripa are on there way to a club before that they went to swiss chalet. After that they left they went to exotica it's a club.

Kripa: oh my god there is usher man I got meet him

Kripa is crazy about usher and loves him lolz

Usher: hey your Kripa Sharma right the famous cook

Kripa: yup

Usher: oh my god I just love your cooking listen im having this party like in 2 weeks do u think you can cater for me

Kripa: omg I would love to im like talking to the hottest guy on earth omg It would be my pleasure to cater for you and im your biggest fan.

Usher: haha its k then alright would you like to have dance with me

Kripa: sure

(song is confessions by usher lolz)

These are my confessions
Just when I thought I said all I could say
My chick on the side said she got one on the way
These are my confessions
Man I'm thrown and I dont know what to do
I guess I gotta give part 2 of my confessions
If I'm gonna tell it then I gotta tell it all
Damn near cried when I got that phone call
I'm so throwed and I don't know what to do
But to give you part 2 of my confessions

[Verse 1]
Now this gon' be the hardest thing I think I ever had to do
Got me talkin' to myself askin' how I'm gon' tell you
'bout that chick on part 1 I told ya'll I was creepin' with, creepin' with
Said she's 3 months pregnant and she's keepin' it
The first thing that came to mind was you
Second thing was how do I know if it's mine and is it true
Third thing was me wishin' that I never did what I did
How I ain't ready for no kid and bye bye to our relationship

[Chorus]

[Verse 2]
Sittin here stuck on stupid, tryna figure out
When, what, and how I'mma let this come out of my mouth
Said it ain't gon' be easy
But I need to stop thinkin', contemplatin'
Be a man and get it over with (over with)
I'm ridin' in my whip
Racin' to her place
Talkin' to myself
Preparin' to tell her to her face
She open up the door and didn't want to come near me
I said "one second baby please hear me"

[Chorus]

[Breakdown]
This by far is the hardest thing I think I've ever had to do
To tell you, the woman I love
That I'm having a baby by a woman that I barely even know
I hope you can accept the fact that I'm man enough to tell you this
And hopefully you'll give me another chance
This ain't about my career
This ain't about my life
It's about us
Please.

He gave kripa a hug and then kissed her on the cheek

Usher: thank you for the lovely dance miss now

Kripa: my pleasure

Kripa went back to her friends

All: omg you dance with hottest guy ever omg kripa how does it feel

Kripa: oh my god guyz he is so damn hot anyways I got angad

All: WHAT

Kripa: umm nothing you guys….

Meanwhile angad was at home going to guys house to play poker

Angad was driving in his blue convertible listening to aashiq banaya aapne

When the phone rang it was Rahul

*****phone******

Rahul: hey are you coming or what

Angad: ya im coming

Rahul: alright laterzz

Angad reached Rahul's house

Angad: hey guys sorry was late

Josh:hey angad we just heard about news

Angad: what the hell josh?

Josh: you know right angad come on don't joke we know all about you and kripa

Angad:well…um…josh…uh..you see

Josh: so give us details please

Angad: shut up

Angad and his friends were playing poker drinking having fun and everything it was 12 he was getting late now

Angad: see yeah guyz

Meanwhile kripa went back home she came Sabina had gone out and no one was home so she changed into her pajamas and lose t-shirt she was cleaning when a pair of hands came and touched her she thought it was angad it was somebody else.

G: missed me my love

Kripa: get the hell out of my house who are you

G: don't worry after im finished with you nobody will come between us

Kripa: shut up

Kripa was running away just then the guy comes takes out a knife and stabs her all this blood was shedding he left.

Sabina came home all she saw was the light on and came saw blood all over the floor she called the ambulance and they took her to the hospital.

We see the guy in his house turning in his chair saying

Guy: my revenge is complete angad khanna you are finished.

Just then angad came home he didn't find anybody just then Sabina called him and he rushed down to the hospital.

Sabina (crying): bhaiya dii

Angad: what happened to kripa answer me god damn it

Just then doctor comes out

Doctor: im sorry but I got bad news

Who is this mystery guy why does he hate angad and kripa what did they do what will the doctor say about kripa find out on chup chup ke.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
greattttttttttt jobbbbb
i know who it is ......is it david
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
Omg. So much happened in the first part! You really have me there, I have no clue who they guy can be and why he hates them so much. 😕 Awesome job!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
omggg....continue soon this is a great fanfic....very diffferent
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
Great part, im sure its the guys who kripa and angad got in jail! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
great part
but have to wait so loong for the next part 😕 😕
anywes continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
Awesome...............
Different then others....
Please continue soon........
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
Hey great part yaar!!! Very good one!! I cant wait for the next part!! Continue soon! 😛

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