-khushi- About Last Night: Email: me@mayahill.com - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow the aftermath... and much much much more!!!! u spoil us with ur amazing writing skills :D arnav bursting into the bathroom in all his glory...that had me blushing and smirking at the same time!!!! And khushi tidying the room like that... she was nervous!!! and yet i'm sure she won't forget that night in her whole life!!!! It was sweet of her to cover him up like that so he wouldn't be cold... but that action along with her rushing of sooo desperately to the bathroom makes me think she was over turned on by him!!!! lolll

His insecurity that she may have left him shows his inner child that was abandoned by his mother who he loved ever so dearly... he would not be able to survive if he lost love like that again... it showed true spine-chilling fear... simply amazing!!!

The ending was pretty cute and romantic as well... with a hint of raw animalistic passion ;D loved it!!!

Thanks for updating so quickly and regularly ...and thanks for the PM huni :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
i loved the way he as scared that she would've left and also the natural discomfort yet contentment you showed was damn cute!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
the reactions were spot on! loved that he took care of her after. your writing, amazing as usual!
👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Excellent excellent excellent!
Would you like another excellent?

This update, there are no words. It was perfect. The fears, the concerns. The slight awkwardness. Then again finding that comfort.
Too good.

Waiting for more...

Yuks


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Posted: 13 years ago
What I love the most about your writing is that you weave in the sensual parts equally with the small chores that would be actually be done in real life ... like Khushi changing the bed sheet ... It makes your SS seem all the more real to me 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏love it...great job...beautifull...amaizng...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just caught up on your FF...

Loved reading it... can't wait to see what happens next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow that after act was so amazing and slightly awkward has in real life cos many a Tim's u want be sure how the other partner will eat u had put it so good...

Loved how she kept checking herself in the mirror...


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Posted: 13 years ago
u have handled this very well...First how the same action has different meaning to each of them and hence diff reaction. I would expect the same from anyone like Khushi...
one of the best chapters so far in terms of realism...
Enjoyed the read
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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm reading this part over and over again, I've already read it four times. I think I am going to read the whole ff again now.

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