FF (Virman) Walking on Sunshine, C7, p42, 2nd Aug

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Shridevi Gaddam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

So i finished it. At work and still managed to read it. That how crazy it !!! 😛 😆

Lovely!👏 👏

My rating so far. 5/5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

OMG! Now I have got to wait for the next chapter. How I am gonna be doing that 🤢

*********** as I was reading, some of the things that I strongly felt about*************

MAANVI

"Hey hey guys!" I shouted for them to stop, "gimme that beer" I said to Brian cum bartender who although confused he was he did as he was told. I took a huge sip from it and nodded to Mister disorientated pervert "go ahead and pay for it" which he also obeyed obediently, "right - now we're all sorted alright, guy with mistake paid for my drink and made things better again, and guy behind the bar poured it and saved his job - yay" I cheered along underwhelmed, "now can we please all continue with our nights - separately."

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Why is she so stuck on Gaurav ?! 😕 She just met him and he doesn't even look right. eww!!! 🤪

VIRAT

"I'm aware of the story Manvi, make your point before I forget what we were talking about."

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I like Virat and Manvi how they end up having conversations be it the wee hours of early morning having Indian tea or be it the bustling noisy hours of the bar having drinks. 😃 The conversations delude the environment around them. Very involved, interesting and easy.😍

And how easily and merrily Maanvi forgets to talk to Virat about Viren & Jeevika! 😆 But then gets back to it anyways. Haha!!

😆

VIREN

"Erm" he gulped, "yeah I do, but I don't know how to dance Manvi, and by the looks of it I don't think you do either."

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VIRAT & MAANVI

...as he opened the locks of his car.

I opened the passenger side door and rushed in to fling my sandals off, and crossed my arms to ignore him but he did nothing of the sort, and mumbled something like "that's what I thought."

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Cute ❤️

Edited by shridevigaddam - 13 years ago

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Shridevi Gaddam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

The part where Virat explains to Maanvi, how does a guy get affected by a girl and when does he start to remember her, that whole thing reminded me of so much about Charlotte explaining to Lizzy in Pride & Prejudice. Wonderful piece of truth ! 😆

Pretty Woman

Pretty Conversation

Pretty gets me!! Quite close.

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Pretty lands into trouble and me can't help feeling convulsed about her safety.

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Boy!!! now waiting for Virat to get affected by her.😍

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naani4

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

OMG I loved it, I loved the conversations between virat and manvi, I love the effect manvi was having on everybody, the bonding between the two girls and the writing skills you have makes it so much better...seriously this is one of the best pieces of fiction i've read in ages...and you're mahaan for doing this looong and excellent update and this is pretty selfish of me but I can't help but ask you to update soon...don't make us wait another 3 months please as I'm already craving another update :)👏

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Afshan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

omg i have just finished reading all the six parts n i m drooling over ur ff ply do continue soon n pm me when u update once again must nice n beautiful work put up by u !

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517072

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

It was,really really long!!😆 And guess what,I enjoyed reading every single line!!😃

Can't wait to read da Virmanalicious chapters ahead.😉❤️

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Green_chilles

@Green_chilles

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

its defo a treat after the a long wait...loved it

i must say you have a great writting skill...plzz write more...the convo between virman were pretty well wriiten...humor plus philosophy plus real talk ...

can wait for futher update...pm me 😊

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Shivani Rajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

At last u updatd dis. Dis was awesome. Thanks 4 dis longest update...!!!!

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Let-It-Go

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

Ok ... Finally I am done with reading your update twice and now get-set-go with the comment !!!!!!

Starting with Manvi-Jeevika , I loved them . Seriously , the way Jeevika pushed Manvi for trying that gold shimmered dress and the comfort level they share ..wow I adore their relationship !

Shopping for Jeevika and then Manvi's makeover ..it sound so girliee and sooo awwwieee !

But when suddenly Mannu asked to drop down the plan , I was like awww poor Jeevika . But then Manvi maked up for it . I loved Virat-Manvi bickering over phone , there are so into themselves ALWAYS !!

I knew , Gaurav would be there and I was so right , pats on my back ..lmao. Bartender flirting with Manvi .the way you showed her being pulled by that unknown man , I literally felt like punching his face .

Suddenly Manvi searching for Virat , hahaha,... aise din bhi aate hain !

But their conversation was so mature and bang-on !

I love Virat being serious and giving all mature advice to Manvi on Gaurav's matter .. somehow it does ring some bell .

When I was reading your conflict for 'the hope' , it was so great reading ! Trust me Tinks , i was all into it .

and when you told about that movie , I didnt watch it though ..but got everything . And on the same side , The dark knight rises was running in my mind , when Bruce Wayne was stuck in that hell .. It fil perfectly well to watever Manvi said .

Coming to Virat's term of love .. He is so honest ! I declare to Love him 😆 . As he was saying , i could feel how Manvi just brought a change in him by making his understand 'hope' . I m very sure , Virat is gonna think about Manvi very sure , but just pray that they dont have to separate for the big realisation .,

Virat's anger on being told that freak manhandled Manvi was ultimate , Truely .. I lovveee him . And I could easily see the smoke coming .

Gaurav+Manvi = disaster !!.. lols

Loved Manvi's attitude towards Virat while sitting in his car .

OOps .. I forgot to mention about Viren , he is so cuteee .. seriously he is the boy next door ;)

I guess , i blabbered way to much ... but kya karun , you were so goood

Love Tinks

PS- Hope you dream about Dean ! 😳

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cappacuino

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Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved ur update

Pls keep updating sooon!!!!!!!!!!

N would love to see more virman moments especially virat falling for manvi!!!!!!!!!!

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-Tinu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

*Phew* finally finished reading it... Manvi and Jeevika's bomd has been progressing well... loved how they complemented each other... Totally loved their day out... it was all so girly.. ish... When Jeevika got upset when there were no texts and calls from viren and the way Manvi consoled her was just like a behna scene... I could soo imagine it... Poor Manvi... In trying to help Jeevika she herself got trapped... I don't have good feelings about gaurav... I mean ... even though maya's there... he is being protective over Manvi... I know he doesn't love her but hellloo she's still your girlfriend * my hands go in the air* 😆 So the Virman talk... Virat does seem quiet mature... and a responsible person from his talks... even Manvi was impressed... so Viren also loves Jeevika?! That's so cute... both love each but are scared to admit ... because they don't want any harm happening on their friendship! ... So Manvi is going to be the cupid? Can't wait to see her in action!

Loved the update... It had a bit of everything... from Jeeman to Virika to Virman... It had ot all and I must I'm very impressed by myself... you wanna know why?... I read your update twice in an hour without any intervals... * doing a little jig*!

Hope to get another long update like this but next time... a bit sooner! 😉

Tina