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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
why chappals?? not at all... be confident... its nice... do continue... and plz pm me wen u update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very beautiful...nice start...plzz pm me whenever u update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: molten_lava

Oh Dear!

I'm so sorry I didn't see your OS earlier.
Wow! I can't believe I inspired you to write an OS. I am shocked. Never knew such a day would come. I feel honoured.😃
Coming back to your OS, it was absolutely marvellous. I liked your take on Khushi taking the initiative to leave RM. But with Arnav's child within her.
you have written this beautifully and can I suggest you something? I think you should continue this. It would be interesting to know what you have planned for her.



You have no idea how happy I am that you got to read my OS; after all you are the reasoning behind it 😳 Thank you sooo much!! 😃
I wanted khushi to be on her own cuz you know Arnav becomes too much of an ass sometimes and I think that its high time that she teaches him a lesson 😕
and I am working on a part now... might finish it sometime and update it 😊


Originally posted by: ArshiRaiguptha

why chappals?? not at all... be confident... its nice... do continue... and plz pm me wen u update...



lol I am not at all a confident writer cuz sometimes I become brain dead and the outcome is not what I want, so yeah its disappointing 🥱
But yeah, thank you so much love 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is completely unexpected! I should be studying for my exams tomorrow but I just finished writing another part! I just hope that it blends well with my part one 😆

Thank you so much for the response guys; if it wasn't for you people, I wouldn't have attempted for a second one. And I changed the title to SS in case if I wanna write more 😳

People who are interested in PMs, send me a buddy request and make my life a lil bit easy plz lol 😳

And here it goes *fingers crossed like always* 😆

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Part 2: Flashback

The day that her life took 360 degrees turn was during the day of holi; the day when she vowed to herself, that if things have to get back to normal, it was today. But she didn't know that Shyam ji, himself would make things loosen up a little bit in her life.

Anjali ji not only forced her to have bhang but all others too. Khushi tried convincing her that, drinking bhang would just make things worse because she would utter all the things that she was not supposed to tell anyone; the things that only her heart was aware of. But Anjali ji was one of the Raizadas' after all; she tricked Khushi into drinking bhang. Khushi, who was in her subconscious mode, was dancing around blabbering things to everyone present at the venue for holi. She was apologizing to all the members of the Raizadas, explaining them the reason for her marriage with Arnav. It was something that she had to do cuz she wanted her jiji to be happy. She explained to them about how she was once a reason for the halt of her jiji's wedding and she didn't want that to happen again. She also promised Nani ji that as long as she was around in RM she would do her best to keep everyone happy.

Everybody seemed to enjoy the intoxication of bhang and they were under the spell of it. Forgetting all their sorrows, all they did was enjoying the day to the fullest. It was only Anjali di and Arnav who was sober: Anjali was pregnant so bhang was a no no for her and Arnav was the angry young man who does not know the meaning of enjoying or just letting go of yourself for one day for enjoyment. When everyone was busy celebrating the day of holi by drinking, dancing and singing, from a distant Khushi could feel a long intense gaze at her. Arnav was enjoying the innocence and the cuteness of his wife silently. He couldn't help but smile at her. Unaware to them, Anjali was watching her brother smile after a long time. She walked up to Arnav and wished him a very happy holi. She applied some red color on his cheek along with a hug. She told him how happy she was to see her chote finally have married to someone he loves. She always wanted to see him happy and finally the wish of her has been fulfilled. Arnav just pasted a fake smile on his face just for his di, while the moments of him and khushi flashed in his mind: their almost kiss, her hug, falling into his arms. He was still utterly confused whether to believe khushi or not. But he for sure knows that Shyam was playing some dirty games with the lives of these two women. Anjali slowly caressed his cheek and told him that she always wants to see him happy just like this walked away.

Ever since the Shyam- Khushi hug incident, everything seems to be going wrong for Arnav. He doesn't know whom to believe, what the truth was or even who was cheating. The only solution that he could think of after witnessing the hug was to marry khushi; and he did it right away that night by blackmailing her. He needed some time to think so he thought that it was better to marry Khushi with a contract. He maintained a cold relationship with her because it was not possible for him to love a woman who was betraying his wife but for some reason he found it really hard to believe it. Somewhere deep down he felt as though she was only the victim of it but he never spoke or confessed his thoughts or even bothered to ask any of his family members. It always hurt him more whenever he hurt her but khushi gave him the silent treatment most of the time. It just made things worse for him because Arnav has never been good with words or even expressing his feelings. Most of his ruthless behaviors were out of anger and frustration. Why couldn't she just believe him and tell everything? After all she knew he was not going to judge her. But still she refused to open up to him which just made things worse for him. He hated the fact that he loved his di and khushi so much that the situation has made him to be tongue tied.

Coming out of his series of thoughts Arnav turned to look under the tent to watch khushi again; his khushi cuz she always brought a smile on his face. But she was not there to be found. His eyes ran all around the place hoping to find her. Even before he could realize, his feet started moving looking for her. He was desperate to find her because she was intoxicated and he didn't want her to do or say things to anyone that she was not supposed to say.

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Not really happy with it! Just wrote whatever I could think of. Hopefully will do a better job next time 😊

I hope you guys liked it and I would really appreciate comments cuz they will mean alot to me 😊 especially when this is like my first SS and apologies for errors.

Thanks- 😊



Edited by Barun.Obsessed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really nice update...so Arnav is double minded abt Khushi's innocence which explains her getting pregnant...plz update soon and thanx a lot for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OHHH.. ITS GETTING INTERESTING... THNX FOR THE PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love it!!!!! i hope arnav finds out the truth from her!!!! ahhh stupid. stupid shyam!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
This is fabulous! Do PM me!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
This is really very nice...its reminding me holi epi...hope arnav ll knw the truth from talli kushi😆
Hope ur exam ll b gud...all the best for ur exam!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
You r doing a brilliant job! U had me hooked from chapter 1!

Please continue

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